Hi this is I do believe my 5th contest(I might be off by one or two)
This contest is a option contest, so here they are.
1) I want you to write a poem about the song "I'm Still here"
Lyrics:
I am a question to the world,
Not an answer to be heard.
All a moment that's held in your arms.
And what do you think you'd ever say?
I won't listen anyway…
You don't know me,
And I’ll never be what you want me to be.
And what do you think you'd understand?
I'm a boy, no, I'm a man..
You can take me and throw me away.
And how can you learn what's never shown?
Yeah, you stand here on your own.
They don't know me 'cause I'm not here.
And I want a moment to be real,
Wanna touch things I don't feel,
Wanna hold on and feel I belong.
And how can the world want me to change,
They’re the ones that stay the same.
The don’t know me,
'Cause I’m not here.
And you see the things they never see
All you wanted, I could be
Now you know me, and I'm not afraid
And I wanna tell you who I am
Can you help me be a man?
They can't break me
As long as I know who I am
And I want a moment to be real,
Wanna touch things I don't feel,
Wanna hold on and feel I belong.
And how can the world want me to change,
They’re the ones that stay the same.
They can’t see me,
But I’m still here.
They can’t tell me who to be,
‘Cause I’m not what they see.
And the world is still sleepin’,
While I keep on dreamin’ for me.
And their words are just whispers
And lies that I’ll never believe.
And I want a moment to be real,
Wanna touch things I don't feel,
Wanna hold on and feel I belong.
And how can they say I never change
They’re the ones that stay the same.
I’m the one now,
‘Cause I’m still here.
I’m the one,
‘Cause I’m still here.
I’m still here.
I’m still here.
I’m still here.
2)Title Options:
+You can stop the pain
+Smile Now Cry Later
+Hate Me Destory Me
+Lie To Me
+Slit my wrists and black my eyes
+Happiness dies tonight
+Kiss Me Kill Me
+Break and Quake
3)Make a quote of your own.
*Rules*
1. Keep it clean, no erotica
This contest is a option contest, so here they are.
1) I want you to write a poem about the song "I'm Still here"
Lyrics:
I am a question to the world,
Not an answer to be heard.
All a moment that's held in your arms.
And what do you think you'd ever say?
I won't listen anyway…
You don't know me,
And I’ll never be what you want me to be.
And what do you think you'd understand?
I'm a boy, no, I'm a man..
You can take me and throw me away.
And how can you learn what's never shown?
Yeah, you stand here on your own.
They don't know me 'cause I'm not here.
And I want a moment to be real,
Wanna touch things I don't feel,
Wanna hold on and feel I belong.
And how can the world want me to change,
They’re the ones that stay the same.
The don’t know me,
'Cause I’m not here.
And you see the things they never see
All you wanted, I could be
Now you know me, and I'm not afraid
And I wanna tell you who I am
Can you help me be a man?
They can't break me
As long as I know who I am
And I want a moment to be real,
Wanna touch things I don't feel,
Wanna hold on and feel I belong.
And how can the world want me to change,
They’re the ones that stay the same.
They can’t see me,
But I’m still here.
They can’t tell me who to be,
‘Cause I’m not what they see.
And the world is still sleepin’,
While I keep on dreamin’ for me.
And their words are just whispers
And lies that I’ll never believe.
And I want a moment to be real,
Wanna touch things I don't feel,
Wanna hold on and feel I belong.
And how can they say I never change
They’re the ones that stay the same.
I’m the one now,
‘Cause I’m still here.
I’m the one,
‘Cause I’m still here.
I’m still here.
I’m still here.
I’m still here.
2)Title Options:
+You can stop the pain
+Smile Now Cry Later
+Hate Me Destory Me
+Lie To Me
+Slit my wrists and black my eyes
+Happiness dies tonight
+Kiss Me Kill Me
+Break and Quake
3)Make a quote of your own.
*Rules*
1. Keep it clean, no erotica
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 1, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: i wish i could give veryone points or a trophy or wahtever, but i loved all your poems, it was a hard descision.
Thank you to everyone!!!
Contest Winners
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Lie to me and tell me everything is all right / Lie to me and tell me it'll all be okay / Lie to me and tell me no need to lie awake at night. / Lie to me and tell me life doesn't suck. / Lie to me and tell me every dby frostany 27 lines, 1 comment, on May 28 7:13 AM 2007. In pain, dark, life, personal
Gold trophy winner
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My body is curled up on the bed / And I felt my stomach ache; / My face is distorted on the pillow / As my eyes bulged out from crying / Happiness dies tonight – / As you left me here all alone. / My min• Commented on by judge.
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In the blackness of my broken heart, / Flows the river of my tears, / Breaking the silence of the dark, / Screams the pain I've felt for years. / My arms hold scars of past regrets, / Every fight with ex-boyfri• Commented on by judge.
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A broken heart
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