Okay so something bad happened (if you must know, read my poem called Another Death) and I need to laugh. I want my mother to be able to read these, too, so respect Christians if you know what I mean. I don't want cussing or erotica or whatever. Be nice.
I just need cheered up. I need to smile or laugh or think about something else; just no pain, please. I don't want death. I want love, life, light. No darkness.
No prewrites, because I want something fresh. Only one entry please (I may change this later. IM me if you want me to)
This contest isn't about winning, but some people need more points to have a contest of their own (like me) so I'm giving points. This is your way of helping two people out in a time of misery and loss and mourning. someone else may also be reading these poems, so again, please be nice.
Okay, so I'm a little long winded. Sorry. The rules are all there; just not in an easy to find so skip down to the rules list. They truly are more or less guidelines, so if you miss one, oh well. I just want two adults to be able to read these and they are Christians. Respect our beliefs. I do not want anyone bashing our religion. That is the only rule that you will be DQd for if you do not follow it. I'm going on content and feeling produced.
Please have fun writing your poems.
~BrokenPeace
I just need cheered up. I need to smile or laugh or think about something else; just no pain, please. I don't want death. I want love, life, light. No darkness.
No prewrites, because I want something fresh. Only one entry please (I may change this later. IM me if you want me to)
This contest isn't about winning, but some people need more points to have a contest of their own (like me) so I'm giving points. This is your way of helping two people out in a time of misery and loss and mourning. someone else may also be reading these poems, so again, please be nice.
Okay, so I'm a little long winded. Sorry. The rules are all there; just not in an easy to find so skip down to the rules list. They truly are more or less guidelines, so if you miss one, oh well. I just want two adults to be able to read these and they are Christians. Respect our beliefs. I do not want anyone bashing our religion. That is the only rule that you will be DQd for if you do not follow it. I'm going on content and feeling produced.
Please have fun writing your poems.
~BrokenPeace
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 23, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: I know, I closed it early. This contest is truly the hardest to judge. You all made some cute poems for me to read to my mother, and I thank you for entering this contest.
I closed it early, because nobody else has been entering lately. ... Darn.
The Gold Winner was Just For You...Love Sissy! Thank you for bringing "love" tears to my eyes.
The Silver Winner was Portrait of a Family. This was a very cute poem I could relate to.
The Bronze Winner was Tiny Memories. This was a very cute poem. My mom loved it.
The Honorable Mention Winner was Cheer up and smile! This was out there in its own way, and I just liked it.
Contest Winners
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The tears I feel but never see / Your dismal words seem to be / Crying out for something more / So tired of people slamming the door / Yearning to be there for you / To talk you out of your blue / Lol's are e• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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The reason why you should smile is because you have someone that loves you, and that will talk to you when you are down. / So what i do when i'm down i talk to someone that will help me turn my frown upside down. So don't b• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [9]
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Aname, hwere are you going? / Upstairs to take a bath. / Aname, with legs like toothpicks / and a neck like a giraffe. / Aname, stepped inby Black-Angel-001 9 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 12:58 PM 2007. In Humor• Commented on by judge.
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by FlipperSwitch 44 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 4:25 PM 2007. In love (Vint)• Commented on by judge.
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Sales caller: "Hello you have been approved for a lower rate on your auto insurance. You can start saving money today by pressing one on your dial." / Grandma had gotten tired of getting these phones calls so she decided• Commented on by judge.
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