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Of Men and Fathers

 

 

 

The counterpart of my other contest (for those who have nothing to say about women or mothers).

 

 

 

 

We all have a man, a father, or both.

Be poetic, not angsty.

Give me a moment captured exceptionally well through imagery and literary devices.
Make it real.

Try to refrain from posting too soon.

 

 

 

- 25 lines or less

- free verse ONLY

- left align

- plain or default backgrounds only (no pictures)




Will:


not promise a critical comment,

remove any entry that does not comply,

delete contest if enough entries aren't up to par.







Best wishes,

Stacy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 12, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250
  • Final notes:
    Thanks to those of you who not only played, but played in accordance with the rules/guidelines.
    Best wishes to all.
    Stacy

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3033420, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. The young man was fresh from graduation, / without a great deal of thought or celebration, / he had become the first in his family to hold
    by Peteskid 30 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 1 10:56 AM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The sheared thumb skin bled, / lost to the auger / and brown-red clay packed the wound. / Dumb ass he said / as I shook bloodied dirt back
    by Son of Jim 18 lines, 28 comments, on May 15 12:19 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • by AliceinPoetryLand 23 lines, 4 comments, on May 18 8:49 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Virgoan 20 lines, 4 comments, on May 27 3:13 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The blood, sweat, and fatigue, I gave to that boat (to my father)
    by PinkChef 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 5 1:57 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Elrenia 37 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 5 8:47 AM 2007. In Love, Life, Family
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by timothyward 7 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 2 5:18 AM 2007. In life, hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Excuses coat the / Lining of a snake / Skin mouth, / Swallow whole / The feelings of / A coffee stain daughter, / To replace with a / An ironed flat / Starched blonde / Wife. / Five minute phone
    by shirk 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 2 11:35 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Before I was born, he dreamt of me / Then all my dreams were his / As I grew, mom taught me many a thing / And beyond those I learnt from dad / His tales were not bedtime stories / But lessons that I put t
    by i write passion 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 2 5:30 PM 2007. In father
    • Commented on by judge.
  • There are keys in the door now and the doorknob turns.
    Silence.
    by ElusiveStar 23 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 2 5:20 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Joy
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Heart Sutra
    May 14, 2007
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    Great idea Ms. Stacy I have lots to draw from.


    • J.J. Sass
      May 14, 2007
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      Don't I know it! lol
      Thanks momma, hope you can come out and play.


  • Malabu
    May 14, 2007
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    can I write about myself?

    but then again;
    I would not know where to begin
    what I would say
    or if it were at all possible for me to even say
    Mal


    • J.J. Sass
      May 15, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      That would be interesting, as I'm sure most would not approach it from that perspective.

  • Virgoan
    May 27, 2007
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    This is really a beautiful idea to have as a contest. I'll bookmark this one.


  • naked roots
    June 13, 2007
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    Wow!
    I just now found out that I won gold in this contest
    Thank you so much

    Congratulations to the other winners as well!

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