this was a huge success the first time, so i'm holding another one like it; anyone is welcome to enter. write anything about being an outcast, feeling like a loser, being abused or bullied, etc. i know there are a lot of this type of poem out there, so i'm not gonna allow prewrites this time, and only one entry per person. closes when i feel like it. any questions, comment below. (i'll add more points later.) i hope this inspires you, i want to see really good writes!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 7, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: (i've had this open for a while, so what you see is what you get.) nice job on everyone's part, i'd like to thank you all for entering, it was a pleasure to read your poems!! please enter more of my contests in the future!
Contest Winners
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Do you see the tears run down my face? / Or are they only visible in your bills? / You write with the ease of my onsets of depression. / My best interests fades in the light of your own. / You go ahead and tell me itby Ativan 51 lines, 9 comments, on May 13 11:03 PM 2007. In Pain, Life, Personal, Dark, Sad, Thoughts
Gold trophy winner
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Entries [10]
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look at all the people / walking past one by one / in their bright light / they stare at you / casting a shadow of rejection / they tell you / you'll never be one with them / they say you• Commented on by judge.
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Circles / painted on the forehead, / black and blue images of sorrow's bull's eye / carved by the tongues / of those who only know how to hate. / / Playing the game where you are never told the rules, / but yo• Commented on by judge.
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Look at all the people / Look at all their things / Perfectionist and Drama Queens / Football studs and Emo Kings / Nerds and all those pre• Viewed by judge.
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A monument of vanish able pieces / Made of ashes to blow away / No solid sides to hold them down / Downgraded by society as useless dirt /by NickelleteXninja 18 lines, 6 comments, on May 30 1:19 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, lost in thought, metaphoric• Commented on by judge.
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The discomfort in such immorality. The words that stain the very lips you speak with. / The fists that write and express ideas turn feral.by Demonikvampire 44 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 6 5:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Pure, white blanket that lies on the valley / Oh, how you can betray! / You hide it all with all you’re innocents. / But the spring will came and melt you away! / No whiteness to cover it up / The crimson• Commented on by judge.
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Like weeds I flourish, and overrun the bed / but you a flower, weak from my abrasive power / choke and wither / I try to coincide / with other kinds / those that belong in the garden / But they tangle in my vines• Commented on by judge.
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good contest!
I'll try to add to it!
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i wish you allowed pre-writes, i think i have a goodie lol
best of luck with your contest. be well and be blessed
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i have so many poems that would fit in here, but no prewrites...
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