Impress me, with 50 lines or less
I want beautiful,
I want sad.
I want untouchable!
Prompt;
I am not so old,
that I might wish to
dream.
Nor am I so blind,
to watch you sway
like a wildflower,
awaiting the honeybee.
Writings of Malabu©2007
The rest of this poem can be found here, if you want an idea of what I’m looking for.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2690832
All rules apply!
No emo, no cutting, no abuse, no cursing or foul smells,
sensual ok.
I reserve the right to remove any unfit writings at my discretion.
Good Luck!
Have fun!!
I want beautiful,
I want sad.
I want untouchable!
Prompt;
I am not so old,
that I might wish to
dream.
Nor am I so blind,
to watch you sway
like a wildflower,
awaiting the honeybee.
Writings of Malabu©2007
The rest of this poem can be found here, if you want an idea of what I’m looking for.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2690832
All rules apply!
No emo, no cutting, no abuse, no cursing or foul smells,
sensual ok.
I reserve the right to remove any unfit writings at my discretion.
Good Luck!
Have fun!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 11, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Id Like to thank you all for your patience. And for entering this contest... Most of the poems were great writings…by accident I removed one…hope they are not mad at me…I am new to contest…I was disappointed in the use of capital letters to many lines…which precluded with commas.. I also ran into a lot of misspelling errors…one even with a cup attached to it…Thank you all again for taking part in this competition….I truly appreciate your efforts…Good luck in all you do and write….
Mal
Contest Winners
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Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [13]
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I lay my head gently to rest upon my pillow, / with only faint whispers of the night. / Gazing at the moon with the stars twinkling in my eye, / the moon glorious and bright. / The gentle sound of my failure in the niby Mainzy 22 lines, 2 comments, on May 13 3:45 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Loving Friend Of Mine / Down to earth and so much like me, / is this friend who helps me see. / Beauty in the darkest times, / always helping clear my mind. / Confusion seems to drift away, / as you toucby TexasMomma 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 12:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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i want / what i can't have / the untouchable / the kind of love you drown in / butterflies in every word she speaks / a kiss as sinful as her touch / to gaze in to her eyes and get lost / feel of my hearby distilled13 10 lines, 1 comment, on May 20 1:52 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Don’t tell me it means nothing / Because it means everything to me / So if you tell me it means nothing / What’s that suppose to mean? / If you’re nothing is my everything / Then who am I to you? / You’re tellingby DeIndian4444 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 25 9:22 AM 2007. In sports• Commented on by judge.
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Lovely idea
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Sad I can do...good to see you hosting these contests lately, Mally! Bookmarked.
~ Nicolette
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I am having a mind block right now, so I can't write anything sad, but I bookmarked it so i can come back later.
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nice contest
thank you for the honor of the Bronze and congrats to all the entrants and most of all to the host for his judging ..it truly was a nice suprise...thank you...MM -
Thank you so very much for the silver! I am most honoured and thrilled
Congratulatiosn to the other winners and thanks so much for hosting
Gaylene
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