This is what I Want... and Im going to keep it short since it is midnight here and I Havent slept in 24 hours. I want poems from people who have been in love in the past, it didnt work out in the end, and now you are with someone and are scared sh*tless of falling in love ever again, because the previous person hurt you, left you, or whatever. I WANT AND NEED EMOTION. In my last contest, those who entered, entered great poetry, but it didnt turn out as well as i had hoped. I NEED IMAGERY, METAPHORS, REPETITION, IN DEPTH DESCRIPTIONS....just give me all that you got.
Pour your deepest emotions out to me ....I want to FEEL the fear, the chaos that takes over you when you think or debate with yourself about the whole "love" deal....Basically, WHATS YOUR STORY? I WANT TO KNOW!! Knock me outta my seat, just give me all your feelings. GIVE IT ALL TOO ME.
lol .....as you can see....I'd really appreciate emotion AND i want something that you have spent time on and not crap. I want something that is worth the time reading and cosidering. PLEASE
Rules:
No StIcKy CaPs (stupid sh*t)
One entry per person
limit the cursing and profanity, 3 curses tops.
NO EROTICA....(that dosent even fit here anyways)
GIVE ME EMOTION
Nothing involving cutting or suicide...I'm a recovered cutter so none of that please
Alrighty...if u dare to enter....
GO HARD!
GIVE ME YOUR BEST
please...
ps- like always, I will be commenting on every peice that is entered.
take care....goodluck....try to have fun
Pour your deepest emotions out to me ....I want to FEEL the fear, the chaos that takes over you when you think or debate with yourself about the whole "love" deal....Basically, WHATS YOUR STORY? I WANT TO KNOW!! Knock me outta my seat, just give me all your feelings. GIVE IT ALL TOO ME.
lol .....as you can see....I'd really appreciate emotion AND i want something that you have spent time on and not crap. I want something that is worth the time reading and cosidering. PLEASE
Rules:
No StIcKy CaPs (stupid sh*t)
One entry per person
limit the cursing and profanity, 3 curses tops.
NO EROTICA....(that dosent even fit here anyways)
GIVE ME EMOTION
Nothing involving cutting or suicide...I'm a recovered cutter so none of that please
Alrighty...if u dare to enter....
GO HARD!
GIVE ME YOUR BEST
please...
ps- like always, I will be commenting on every peice that is entered.
take care....goodluck....try to have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 17, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I thank everyone who entered my contest and I apologize for not judging earlier. This was VERY hard to judge and it was damn near impossible to decide....once again thank you everyone and you all have talent, Keep on writing. It's a gift.
Contest Winners
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/ / Should such a thought ever cross your mind / A politic distance I kept from you / Now you drift apart / But once it was he who filled your life / You must know after all these years / What has changed your• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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he said i was the one that made him real / he said i made him act like the real him / he said all the things a guy should say / he said he really loved me, but that's ok / i know that things cannot last forever / i• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [18]
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I never thought I'd love again / Not after the last guy walked away / I had fallen head over heals / And he knocked me down made me fall / / I was never set an example / Of how love should be / I never underst• Commented on by judge.
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I can't weep anymore, see she took that, / I'm sure, I'd scream, even now the beast / Raises his head, like I whispered his name, / I'd scream, but I won't give the bitch that / Last bit of me, that illusion I've neve• Commented on by judge.
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There are a hundred things / that I could possibly say / that leave nothing / to the imagination / but something more to / the beats of your heart. / / / When I push you away / I want you to pullby BeautifullyBroken8 51 lines, 2 comments, on May 11 10:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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falling, / crawling, / on my knees. / thats how it ended the last time / now you really expect me / to go through it again? / when all you get is pain in the end? / he looked me in the eyes / and whispered worby xBeautifulyBrokenx 29 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 3:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I would never keep you here / I would never make you stay / I would never keep you from your path / Or make you choose another way. / / I do not wish to hinder you / I want you to be your best / I would never bby Jai Guru Deva 34 lines, 10 comments, on May 11 1:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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A piece by lady enthralling explaining a u turn of mixted emotions. very well delivered piece as usual i guess ~ lady enthralling ~• Commented on by judge.
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I swear i wont love again, / i swear i wont cry. / / Cause i dont want to feel this again, / i'd rather die. / / I'd say i dont belive in love, / If it wernt for this constant ache. / / Your falling in loby ISheHer 40 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 3:27 AM 2007. In Love, Pain, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Angst• Commented on by judge.
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This is me / This is what I am / I’m tormented, a tortured soul / Scared shitless of any man / Hurt when a child / Never to be the same / I’m still having to rebuild / I at least know I wasn’t to blame / But iby celene 28 lines, 7 comments, on May 12 2:15 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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The heart aches / / For the love / / You find the truth / / From up above / / I know you care / / But I see you are scared / / The heart was torn / / By these hands / / I won't be the oby Roxas21 26 lines, 1 comment, on May 12 1:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Thank you for Bronze and for the contest, well done winners! La x
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