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Look At All the Lonely People III

only for the following poems:

"Broken...Loved" by CausticWitch

and

"One Ceiling One Room" by Amorphous

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 11, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 450, Silver: 100
  • Final notes:
    your poems were amazing.

    CausticWitch, "Broken...Loved" touched me so much because of its simplicity. I feel like that a lot and so to see the comparison just written out like that was very strong for me.

    Amorphous, "One Ceiling One Room" was... I don't even know how to describe. I loved the idea of it and the ending was great because he didn't kill himself, it was useless. I think that was what really got me about it because it just tied the whole poem together so well.

Contest Winners

  1. Broken...Loved
    Sometimes I compare myself to someone who is close to me, and this is how I feel.
    by mama-drama 32 lines, 17 comments, on May 2 5:14 AM 2007. In personal, life, pain, sad, society
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. One Ceiling One Room
    A man sitting on a street curb / A parade of strangers walk by / Not one person saw him today / Shoulders sunken-ed, face sullen, eyes ston
    by Natasha Bradich 24 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 9:33 AM 2007. In Sad, Society, Other
    Silver trophy winner
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