My first contest, so we'll see how this goes.
Just make me feel something, anything. Write something depressing, happy, longing, excited, hopefull. Just write so that I'm put into a place where I can feel what you do. It doesn't matter what you write about.
Rules:
1. No sticky caps. You know what I mean.
2. If you must rhyme, please make sure that it is not forced rhyming. That will not bode well.
3. Preferably no erotica, but if you do, you better make it good. Don't just write about sex for the idea of sex. Make it have a purpose. I would rather not know details about your sex life, though.
Write something that matters. Write personally, write deeply, and write passionately. Write anything, but whatever you write, make sure it is stirring, no matter the emotion.
Make me feel something, anything.
Just make me feel something, anything. Write something depressing, happy, longing, excited, hopefull. Just write so that I'm put into a place where I can feel what you do. It doesn't matter what you write about.
Rules:
1. No sticky caps. You know what I mean.
2. If you must rhyme, please make sure that it is not forced rhyming. That will not bode well.
3. Preferably no erotica, but if you do, you better make it good. Don't just write about sex for the idea of sex. Make it have a purpose. I would rather not know details about your sex life, though.
Write something that matters. Write personally, write deeply, and write passionately. Write anything, but whatever you write, make sure it is stirring, no matter the emotion.
Make me feel something, anything.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 21, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for submitting. I'm sorry it took me so long. I ended up with 74 submissions and with life being hectic, I didn't get to them very quickly. Congratulations to all the winners, and thank everyone else for entering. You were all wonderful.
Contest Winners
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I'm struggling to create something beautiful and thoughtful and breathtaking, but in my struggle I lose sight of my creation• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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It is so nice to dream !!
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Yesterday I was battling a day with Parkinsaons. My neice sent me this poem. / I didn't edit it - for me a most beautiful poem, made my da• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Honorable mention
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by Jeneralix 34 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 25 7:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by vivela 114 lines, 88 comments, on Feb 11 9:20 AM 2007. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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As she sat there on her bed
Wishing that she would be deadby Pharoah 33 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 8 9:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My nighmares are coming true / In this hell I did create / Everything I have wanted most / Is left for you to take / / The sorrow still so real / I am not dreaming, yet awake / Alone to live with inner guiltby LeeLeeButtons 30 lines, 1 comment, on May 10 7:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I'm a lost daddy's girl / tired and sick / I hate him like I do the government / so screwed up such a mistake / he picks them up and loo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tickled by the taste of grace / I cry hungry for my Lord, / punched by a bag of embrace / one small giggle poured. / Tested by the light of truth / my eyes bow down to creation, / dark are the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It's just not me...to be someone else
It's just not me to forget someone else.by StarFire-Jacoby 16 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 12:04 PM 2007. In My thoughts and dreams• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Love me hate me / I don't care / Stab me kill me / Leave me there / Erase my life / Destroy my soul / Slice with the knife / Watch the red flow / Inject me with venom / Then leave me to die / Leave me in• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tea I will drink not / Nor food, nor milk / Till you don't come to me / In your robe of silk / / 25,Oct,1987• Commented on by judge.
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I will search deep within
My scarred up bodyby Clinging-to-Life 73 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 24 5:07 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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imperfect glass roses rest against a cold casket
yet warmer than her fingers that lay beside her waist• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A siingle red rose,
For my beauitful wife.by bobanangel 25 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 14 1:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
being grounded sux!!!!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He can’t be leaving / Going away / When he left I couldn’t believe / There was no words to say / He’s constantly in the back of my mind / Not a day goes by / I’ve come to find to realize / He’s wal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I should have known it was all fake, / as soon as he said, "OH! This is fate!" / / I should have sat home and cried alone, / instead of s• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dark rustling sounds fill the air / As I sit in the ward of my insane mind / I rock back and forth trying to understand / Trying to look foby theghostofher 45 lines, 7 comments, on May 9 10:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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NO ONE CAN BE HAPPY FOREVER. / MY CONSCIOUS WONT LET ME HURT YOUby J McSANE 7 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 11 4:36 PM 2007. In Angry, Humanity, Dedication, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shaking in the darkness / But not because of the cold / I've cried like a child before / I've reasoned like an adult / But what do I do now / On the verge of losing myself for good / I cannot / I must not / Buby BarbedWireButterfly 32 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 6:31 AM 2007. In Personal, Angst, Sad, Thoughts, Pain• Commented on by judge.
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To day was our special day / the day my dad gave me away. / you took my hand we made our vows / it seems like it was yesterday now. / I wal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A teenager / who is lonely and lost / wanting love and hugs / but at what cost. / A teenager / like a bag lady / moving / from place to place. / A teenager / volatile and sad / no one understands / why Iby Dee23 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 12:27 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Im floating
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I wonder why you walk so fast
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I would never keep you here / I would never make you stay / I would never keep you from your path / Or make you choose another way. / / I do not wish to hinder you / I want you to be your best / I would never bby Jai Guru Deva 34 lines, 10 comments, on May 11 1:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I lay my head gently to rest upon my pillow, / with only faint whispers of the night. / Gazing at the moon with the stars twinkling in my eye, / the moon glorious and bright. / The gentle sound of my failure in the niby Mainzy 22 lines, 2 comments, on May 13 3:45 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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So far / I love you more than life, / and yet we can not meet. / Life is not fair, / counting the days until we meet. / Through the pain, / through the unsure. / I will love you, / i al• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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cutting out the pain within me / this blade is the only thing that can help me / i sit alone and cry tears of blood / this emptiness it isn't love / these feelings just a memory / ill cut till there's noth• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Once my earthly journey is complete,
humbly I’ll stand before Your judgment seat.by jjbreunig3 23 lines, 84 comments, on Dec 13 4:59 PM 2006. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
some people know how I feel. But a lot of them don't. there's a seat beside me that is empty to a normal eye.but there are things things thby serenity silvermoon 52 lines, 25 comments, on Mar 21 9:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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No, daddy, no / Why did you hurt me so? / Wish mommy would get home now / Please save me from this cloud / / No, daddy, no / Is this how y• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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