OKAY PEOPLE. IF YOU CAN MESSAGE THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE NOT READ ALL OF THIS. PLEASE DO SO. BECAUSE I ABSOLUTELY CANNOT JUDGE THE CONTEST UNTIL EVERYONE REMOVES THEIR POETRY FROM THE CATAGORIES OF ABUSE AND ADULT. SO IF YOU DONT FIX IT 1. NO ONE WILL BE JUDGED BY ME. AT ALL. ICANT POSSIBLY. SO IF YA DONT TAKE THE TIME TO READ IT PLEASE. JUST DONT EVEN ENTER. [[sorry for the caps. that long. im sick anyways so im just a little frustrated. if someone could please contact those few people who are in catagories i cannot read. that would be fabulous. thanks loads.]]
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 15, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 15 people
- Final notes: Thanks everyone who entered the contest I appreciate it very much so. I'm sorry there were delays in judging it it was just a couple minor misunderstandings no big deal really I'm just really sorry it took so long. All your entries made it extremely difficult to judge this and there are so many rewards because of how many entries there were. Great job everyone! thnks again.
Contest Winners
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Sweet, beautiful girl, / Why do you let it consume you? / It feeds off of your soul / Eating it all the way through. / Dear, lonely girl, /by Venusbabi 13 lines, 19 comments, on May 21 7:21 PM 2007. In Eating Disorders
Silver trophy winner
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All hail the golden haired Goddess Barbie
For she is immaculate, immortal, beautifulby Antipodi 30 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 7 4:17 AM 2005. In Society, Dark, Contemporary
Honorable mention
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Your choking on rainbow beads and gasoline
You swear it tastes like me.by Hell In Harmony 37 lines, 53 comments, on Mar 2 8:26 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Other, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, Dirty Pretty Honorable mention
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This my abuse
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Can you see it? / She's doing it again; / she's losing her mind. / Poor little girl, / lost in a world she doesn't understand. / Can you see the fear in her wild eyes? / All she knows is blurring colors; / too b• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
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I should have known it was all fake, / as soon as he said, "OH! This is fate!" / / I should have sat home and cried alone, / instead of s• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They tell me that I’m talented with words. / Then how come I can never find the right words to say to you? / You make me speechless, and it• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Anger the pain and frustration,
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"We broke up for a reason"
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I loved you from the start
I loved deeply and purelyby Clinging-to-Life 59 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 20 11:09 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Every time I turn on the radio, / Every time I hit the stereo, / I hear the rappers and the rockers sayin' "Hey yo!" / This is my life, my• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Remember the beginning? When We first met?
What if I had opened up thenby CalmBeforeTheStorm 13 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 22 12:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The {h.e.a.r.t-b.r.e.a.k} has gotten too much for me. / I can't take it anymore. / I am not pretty, / I'm more like a {whore} / Cause I let you touch me, / with your (f-u-c-k-i-n-g) filthy hands. / I can't believeby Broken Machine 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 2:40 AM 2007. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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I came crashing down hard at such a speed. / There was now suddenly a new meaning to the word 'need' / / A craving here. / &&&an addiction lying there. / I couldn't help look at posters. / &&&begin to compare.by CazzieJade 44 lines, 4 comments, on May 11 4:12 AM 2007. In Teen. Angst. Drugs. Hate. Rage.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It is the darkest hour, / Im calling out for you, / All my blood turned sour, / Don't you know i love you. / / At this time im waking, / Bitter blood turns sweet, / Tell me again that im not mistaking, / My l• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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um..dad shit...
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Little miss perfect is slipping
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Brad and his rage...he calls it "it".
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You call me "doll" / But you are the mannequin / With your painted eyes / And "love me" grin / I step into your plastic arms / Knowing they're not real / They're merely made of tricks and charms / They can't touby FelineMuse 12 lines, 2 comments, on May 11 5:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I miss the way you said you loved me / You're voice that soft comforting tone / I miss the way you reached instantly for my hand / Like I w• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dust arranged by multi-colored fariesby Makemebeauty 52 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 5 11:55 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Heart stricken sorrow
As her body starts to heatby Makemebeauty 16 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 12 10:34 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sitting here in my chair / Digits clasp the arm / Thinking, contemplating / Staring in the darkness / The mysteries of my own mind / Not yet tangible / / When I think war / My mind is resolved / So easy forby BeMeBeInsane 46 lines, 1 comment, on May 10 4:03 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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oh I love you hun times a million and five / I always wondered when you would be mine / our love was so random / but oh so pure / I see you now as my whole entire world / I thank God for your• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sitting on hard chairs, / At a flat desk, / Us. we. Anyone who harbored the slightest lump in their throats. / It is not accurately represented, / But we are at a loss of words, / To explain our loss of words. / S• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cheap as sin.
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This is what you deserve
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In the forefront of my mind, / I remember / Sneaking gaily down the hallway past my bedtime / / Opening doors creaking into / an imaginaryby Umlot 36 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 11:22 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the blade razor edged
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darkness engulfing me,
black is all I see.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
alone in my head i'm losing the fight
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Intense energy in the room,
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Black Panthers. / Looking for answers. / / Civil Rights, / Restless Nights. / / Bricks in Windows, / That's just how it goes... / / The• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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moonlight dancing,
spirits advancing.by Sorrows Angel 45 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 7 7:38 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Love, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Lyrics, My own style, Romance, Self• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Point blank your the gun i shot to miss,
and its your fault we wont be ending with a kiss.by untried words 10 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 17 5:13 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you are like a chemical sort of drug / perfect in too many ways. / I have become obsessed / You promised me love / you promised I would be happy / now you promise we can be friends / in a world of black and whiteby rawrbby 16 lines, 2 comments, on May 23 1:48 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Staring out at the / stars shining in the dark sky / diamonds of the night / thinking things over / wondering what i did wrong / to make you leave me / to hurt me like this / its painful but life goes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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home is where the heart is / or so they say / where fond memories of / childhood come to play / / but i have no roof over my head / i move from place to place / with the few posessions i own / though i neverby restful.soul 40 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 28 6:42 AM 2007. In Hope, Life, Nature, Society, Spiritual, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Quietly whisper / in my ear, / something that I / so long to hear / whisper those three words / they may be a cliche / but i dont mind / say them anyway / x i love you my sweethe• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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so sick of... / whenever soemthing good happens... / something bad is around the corner / / sods law isnt it / the law of never ending sadness / of shattered dreams and broken hearts /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love / love is when a man loves a woman / or a woman loves a woman / or a man loves a man / you get the picture / / but how do you know your in love with someone? / do they laugh at your jokes? / do they smil• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Satan's feet on sacred ground / As I walk through the trees of innocence / The melody which once sang on the breeze / Now ceases to dance in the sun / Silence / The slender tress bow in shame / Enforcing my retreaby Dreams27 47 lines, 2 comments, on May 20 3:51 PM 2007. In love, wrong, personal, hope, life, other, pain, confusion• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I spend half of my time / Looking for something / That hasn’t and may never come / 7 meaningless digits / A name I know too well / The memory is fading far from my mind / What is becomes what was and could very wby xTarnishedxSilencex 64 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 6 5:48 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Saosin 15 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 24 4:27 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Twas the night before christmas and all through my head,
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When I look at a rose, all I see is you.
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Though I have seen the dagger, I am not fearful of it.
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They tell me I'm crazy,
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You came in so quietly, different in how you stood.
You walked up right behind me, telling me I smelled so good.by Susie Statutory 36 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 19 10:12 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Been on the road seems like forever / Guess I've been wasted more times than not / Spend all my money on twisted moments / And ended up wit• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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why is it / that even at your happiest moment / you still wonder / why? what? when? / never have i been happier / thats the way you make me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i tried to convince myself that i didn't want you
but i doby xfunknretrox 18 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 7 10:11 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
so let the song forever go on
while we slowly sway alongby xfunknretrox 49 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 31 5:46 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She is feeling the same things I had once felt
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Hello? Is the judge alive? Did she forget about the poor contestants waiting with held breath for her final decisions?
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with all due respect, of course...
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I'm sorry. i would have tried...but i cant judge until i read them all which is why at the begining i asked everyone to not enter or change the catagories if it was in abuse or adult because it wont let me see it and i cant DQ them so I'm kinda stuck on what to do.
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hmmm...which ones can't you read? I'll look for them myself, but just in case you miss one, maybe you could list the people who need to remove their on the Rule thingy above.
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"Abuse", And "Because Barbie said so"...
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are those the only two?
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Thank you very much for the bronze trophy and the points. Congratulations to the other winner's as well.
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Thanks for the HM hun
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Thank you so much for the gold and the points! And well done for hosting such a fantastic contest :]
KetFace - Magic xX
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