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Power, Placement, Perspective

I have developed a love of free verse poetry (thanks to someone who has a knack for giving inspiration and inconspicuous guidance).

So, I’d like to read deep, meaningful free verse poems. I want figuratively rich poems that make me pause and think about something ordinary in a way I have never thought of it before.

Make your words count, if you don’t need it, lose it

Give me room to breathe… use empty space to your advantage

Vocabulary, mine is good, but don’t get carried away by big words, use them when they add power, not presence

Metaphorically rich poetry will be smiled upon!
Use techniques to your advantage.


RULES:
If you write on an adult theme, mark it accordingly
NO Suicide, cutting, abuse and violence, cussing, rants
NO chat lingo or sticky caps
NO flashing backgrounds or unreadable text
NO rhyming poetry
Pre-writes allowed, but they should be well written
One entry per person

GOLD: 500 points
SILVER: 300 points
BRONZE: 100 points
HONORABLE MENTIONS: 4 at 30 points each


My other contests:

Rhymes alone are only bones (rhyming Poetry)
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2349048

Discipline, Design, Daring (Form poetry)
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2349068

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 11, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    There were so many excellent writes in this contest, 18 that were added to the first read preliminary finalists list, these were poems that showed skill and conveyed something special to me. I really like the new system of anonymous contests, in addition to the “quick comment” option for gold members. I like the “quick comment” option because it shows me the body of all the anonymous entries and lets me read and applaud without seeing everything else on the poem page; the background is hidden, as well as author comments, comments by other people on the poem, number of applauses, previous trophies etc… it’s just me and the poem and any thoughts or impressions I get from it

    Thanks to everyone who participated, fabulous entries, those in the preliminary finals are poems that show terrific, poetic talent as well as struck me in a special, memorable way.

    s and best wishes always ~Genie~

Contest Winners

  1. by maa 71 lines, 22 comments, on Apr 25 7:31 AM 2007. In Spiritual
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. by Fug-azi 48 lines, 28 comments, on Mar 16 7:35 PM 2007. In My own style, Weird, Abstract
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2924126, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. she was stick thin, / a bird’s nest bobble of braids /
    by CarolDesjarlais 41 lines, 2 comments, on May 3 5:24 PM 2007. In Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2820058, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. Black boot prints;
    They were the first thing
    by W B Burkholder 68 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 8 3:19 PM 2007. In Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by -Ink Artist- 50 lines, 46 comments, on Mar 29 8:06 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Life, Love, Nature, Family
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Caterwauling cartwheeling rolls of smoke
    Wave and billow, floating across the air
    by iamlost 16 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 12 12:55 AM 2007. In thoughts, weird, imagery
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. A Poem Of Friendship
    by robert davidson 38 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 19 4:42 AM 2006. In Life, Hope, Contemporary, Friendship
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. by Desire 45 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 28 12:59 PM 2007. In Other, Weird, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2922876, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  12. Who are you that came sailing through
    my nescient mind like an unwanted cough
    by Raazi 14 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 10 2:01 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. sun on rocks. / cold coldblood / Lies in stillsweet / repose. / / Mind swiftly exits / and I Lift / up up / up into sparks of souls
    by Lugh 43 lines, 8 comments, on May 2 6:02 PM 2007. In Sad, Nature, My own style
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2852544, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [34]

1 - 34 of 34
  • I was out in the rain today / Not caught off guard / / I was walking through the forest / The trees a verdant green / Mountains surrounded
    by Kalamina 32 lines, 10 comments, on May 3 1:39 AM 2007. In Nature, Life, Thoughts, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by poet43 11 lines, 3 comments, on May 2 10:41 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I look in the mirror / And apply my mask / A mask to hide my secrets / A mask that says I'm happy / I look in the mirror / And see a face /
    by luvmypoetry 36 lines, 3 comments, on May 3 7:42 AM 2007. In Sad, Hope, Sadness, Depressed, Inspirational
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Deepredvelvet 15 lines, on May 2 7:59 PM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by B Chandler 33 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 2:14 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Thoughts, Inspirational
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • / Oh, let us reach the top of our voices / and find the delirious overtones of peace; / Harmonies that extend to lilting melodies, / a chorus of humanity on the stage like life. /Share the music you hou
    by Peteskid 31 lines, 19 comments, on May 2 7:28 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  •                           As I walk this weary road,
         
    by Slashes of Color 11 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 5 8:43 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • space
    wandering pensive
    by brightraven 54 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 15 5:54 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by InsomNiAC 24 lines, 1 comment, on May 5 7:57 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • You photograph well. At least in memories- / They all capture you, / With your harsh, rugged features offering / A jarring juxtaposition /
    by HoldMe 27 lines, 26 comments, on May 5 11:09 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • My Yellow Star / I have been shunned for many years, / Because I am different, / I have been forced to wear a yellow star, / so that all th
    by celticbeauty 32 lines, 13 comments, on May 5 8:43 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Hope, Life, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • 30 foot letters painted over ugly and gray
    50 foot murals pass you everyday
    by Pause 23 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 23 11:33 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The phone is silent except for
    The occasional exchange.
    Text and audio dubbed with attempts
    by Know1 40 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 10 11:47 AM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Angst, Pain, Depression, Longing, Sadness, Lost love, Loss, Goodbyes
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Upon the pane the tears of the sky fell,
    weighting another to form a streamlet,
    by NickBlaze 65 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 13 4:28 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Nature, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Where is the line, where mind meets flesh?
    Why did the Pandora’s Box inside my head open?
    by gaiascully 16 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 25 1:17 AM 2003. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Everyone longs to see an Angel… / To BE an Angel… / To soar among the clouds, / Bringing hope, bringing faith, / Creating joy when there is none, / Lifting hearts up everywhere… / But do you th
    by starvingauthor09 39 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 8:20 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A preconceived misconception
    Strange visions
    by shadow-of-the-sun 78 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 18 6:44 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • a rhapsody on a cuddly and curious moment
    by SilvShadow 25 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 25 8:23 PM 2006
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Celticmoon
    May 2, 2007
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    Interesting Genie....one for each going


  • B Chandler
    May 2, 2007
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    Tis I think I will try my best to scare some gray hairs onto your head lol

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    May 8, 2007
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    Hi people. I will judge this before Friday and I swear I won't mess it up like I did my other one

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    May 10, 2007
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    I'm not done commenting, I'll finish later tonight or tomorrow (friday)

    This is going to be very hard, already so many great pieces and I am only about halfway done in reading


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 11, 2007
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    Thank you so much for the contest and the HM. COngratulations to all the winners.
    Best,
    mystic


  • -Ink Artist-
    May 11, 2007
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    I'm honored to have made your finalist's list. Congrats to the winners!

    ~Lori


  • Fug-azi
    May 11, 2007
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    Thank you for the silver placing, I am honored to recieve it.
    Congrats to the Gold (Maa) & Bronze (Capricornpoet - Another new poet to me) and to all the HM's. I enjoyed reading most of the entries and I must admit I'm glad I wasn't judging.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 11, 2007
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    ty for a contest to home my skills and congratulations to all...ty, as well, for the HM.


  • maa gold member
    May 11, 2007
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    I am so full of joy about this gold-trophy, and thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a generous present ... the abundant gift of points further adds to my happiness, it is very much appreciated ...
    thank you so much ...

    maa


  • Desire gold member
    May 12, 2007
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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Hosting such a Creative contest Genie and Congratulations to all who placed

    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • prettyktm
    May 12, 2007
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    GOOD JOB GUYS!
    Keep rocking;
    Pretty.

  • prettyktm
    May 15, 2007
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    CONGRATS, Well done all!
    Take care;
    Pretty.

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