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Let It All Out

For my fifth contest,
(yay me!)


I want to feel emotion.
I want it to be gut-wrenching.
Tear-jerking.
I don't care if they are happy or sad tears.
Just let me feel it.

LET IT ALL OUT.

Whatever's on your mind. Just make me feel it.

Hardcore.

First off.
*Suggestions*
USE SPELLCHECK.
I LOVE RHYME HOWEVER IT IS NOT REQUIRED.
COMMENT ON YOUR FELLOW CONTESTANTS ENTRIES, HOWEVER NOT REQUIRED.

*RULES*
1-NO BASHING OF OTHER CONTESTANTS.
2-PLEASE PUT <3 IN THE AUTHOR'S NOTES BOX SO I KNOW YOU HAVE READ ALL OF THIS.
3-SWEARING ALLOWED. I JUST DON'T WANT EVERY OTHER WORD BEING F*CK.
4-NO EROTICA.

Andd I think that's it.

I will be adding more points to this contest as it goes. Enjoy.

Oh and I may allow prewrites later in the contest.

PEACE OUT AND HAVE FUN.


*EDIT*(5/8/07)

I have decided to allow prewritten poems. Please only enter a prewritten poem if it matches up with the rules and fits the contest description. Thank you!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 10, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    The entries that I got for this contest AMAZED me. There was so much emotion. It was incredibly hard to pick, but in the end I did.

    Here's the winners:
    Sister Goddess-Gold
    Save Me-Silver
    Wild Fire-Bronze

    *Honorable Mentions*
    If they only knew it all
    Everything to Lose
    The Prisoner
    [my thoughts are uncontrolled]

    Well done to EVERYONE not just the winners, you all were fantastic!!!!

    Thanks for entering and see you next time =]

    <3BeautifulDisaster9

Contest Winners

  1. Save Me
    She walked in, / full of distress / little to no rest / and a limp accompanied her walk / while slurs accompanied her talk / yet I was no
    by char86 63 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 12:47 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Wild Fire
    Walking down this well of feelings / through tinted alleys and clouded lanes / where short bursts of street-lamp clutter / shatter the moon
    by jakeofspades 33 lines, 13 comments, on May 8 4:03 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2824452, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. Everything To Lose
    Nobody said life was easy, / And neither did I, / So that’s why I tell you this / With that lead-hearted sigh. /   / I shall start with love; / It makes me wonder if there’s any one tru
    by Sassycassie6 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 7 4:42 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Thoughts.
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. The Prisoner
    At night I lie in bed dreaming of you, / The time slips by but my thoughts remain still, / You are everything to me, you are my world. /
    by marshdbw 50 lines, 7 comments, on May 8 10:01 AM 2007. In Unrequited love, love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. [ my thoughts are uncontrolled ]
    my thoughts are uncontrolled / and they spill out on the page / written out in screams and cries / to take care of all my rage / / why can't everything go right / why is it all wrong / how come i can't be happy
    by poeticmind 33 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 12:29 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Life, Teenage thinking, Lost in thought
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [21]

1 - 21 of 21
  • Tomorrows cancelled
    I can't take the way you said it / That everything would be fine / How is it you were so blind / When you told me those little lies / Letting me think that you loved me / Making me belive all you said / / Well
    by lovelight05 11 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 7:44 AM 2007. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Don’t quit
    / Don’t quit, keep on moving / Just try to keep on living / Life isn’t fair / It doesn’t care / If you fall down, the world keeps spinning / If you get shot, the war keeps raging / That’s the way the world roll
    by bonzipon 11 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 10:06 AM 2007. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Escape is Improbable Now.
    i'll swear again,
    as dark dreams creep in.
    by suicideblonde 13 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 10:00 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Im Not You
    Should i be sorry that your life was hell? / Do you think mine should be too? / / You think i need to be just like you. / But this time i
    by sinisterkitten 20 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 9:54 AM 2007. In Life, Anger, Teen issues, Self, Hate
    • Commented on by judge.
  • What use to be.......
    / / I miss it dear the / Way we touched / Don’t get me wrong / Now things are great / But I want what use to be / Until it is too late / / When a simple touch was all it took / To bring you to the e
    by BeautifullyBroken17 26 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 9:06 AM 2007. In other, thoughts, life.longing
    • Commented on by judge.
  • what happend
    whats wrong with me / why did he have to do those things / why did i have to beaten in an orphanage / why dose that have to be my first memory / i don't even know who my parents are / i don't know anyth
    by Emo Cowboy14 34 lines, 6 comments, on May 2 2:42 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Depression
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Suicide Notes And Razor Kisses
    I'll Cross My Heart, / Hope To Die, / Stick A Dirty Razor In My Vein, / I'll Watch The Blood Pour Out, / Are You Happy Now, / You've Won,
    by fallenangel671 34 lines, 11 comments, on May 2 10:50 PM 2007. In Suicide, Depressed, Abuse
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Love/Hate
    WOMAN:We see for the first time, both fall into trances, / / Eyes meets yours, yours meet mine an exchange of glances, / / Never in a lifetime have we felt something like this, / / Rage all over, anger tingling
    by Taboo Pixie 72 lines, 2 comments, on May 5 9:30 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lifes' cookie jar
    by Billythekid 35 lines, 2 comments, on May 5 9:58 AM 2007. In Adult, Lyrics, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Faery Tales
    My thoughts indulged / My hearts story told / I tried to rewrite / But the endings' still cold / / I tried to fix my faery tale / But only got a lie / Now all the characters watch / As slowly I begin to c
    by angryelf6886 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 8:31 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Mother's Day
    This is one of the sadest times of the year, / It's a time to remember, / When others are happy, laughing, and singing, / I am alone curled
    by Cheesey 7 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 26 8:52 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Freewrite, Sadness, Depressed, Loss, Depression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Dead Inside
    Trapped within this sickened mind,
    these feelings twist and bind my fate,
    by Synthetic-Nightmare 56 lines, 12 comments, on May 7 9:45 AM 2007. In sad, depression, suicide, pain, dark, life, cutting, cut, thoughts, death
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Why?
    Why does Love hurt? / If God wanted us to be happy, then why does something that is supposed to wonderful sometime end in excrutiating pain? / For that matter, Why is there pain? / Is it there just to show us that we ar
    by rcknred70 13 lines, 4 comments, on May 5 4:47 PM 2007. In Angst, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Dissapointment
    You're a mess of preconceptions.
    And a mass of intimidated indecision.
    by madgirlslovesong 29 lines, on May 8 2:35 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.

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