Dark and Depressing #2

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on June 18, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 250, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  Congrats to all!
  
  
  
  1st - I wish i knew for sure
  by Floorboards
  
  2nd-Inside The Mind Of a Serial Killer
  by blueyez
  
  3rd - Wants to cry yell do something to make it..by HeavenlySweetNative
  
  Honorable Mentions to:
  
  Leave me alone
  by stevens5613
  
  Mommy
  by mendacity
  

Contest Winners

1. I wish i knew for sure

   Sitting alone in the corner chair-
   smoking cigarettes;

   by Floorboards 58 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 7 2:49 PM 2006. In Other, Love, Dark
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Inside The Mind Of a Serial Killer

   by blueyez 29 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 13 3:42 AM 2007. In Adult, Dark, Life, Society
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. [ wants to cry yell do something to make it stop ]

   by LaBelle17 20 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 3 12:41 PM 2007. In Adult, Abuse, Personal, Dark, Pain, Thoughts
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Leave me alone

   by stevens5613 47 lines, 4 comments, on May 23 4:42 PM 2007. In Abuse, Adult, Dark, Personal
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
5. Mommy

   Mommy I miss you, I miss you when I was five and the world was alright / I didn’t know about the monsters that exist to torture you and rip

   by mendacity 19 lines, 3 comments, on May 23 7:27 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
6. Jump

   Stand at the edge. Look into the deep abyss. / Breathe the air. Feel the roaring wind. / And then, jump. / Arms spread, heart beating, screams torn from your throat. / Smile; it

   by The Fallen Phoenix 11 lines, 2 comments, on May 23 7:54 PM 2007. In Angst, Sad, Pain

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [73]

• the Night Before the Suicide

  THE NIGHT BEFORE THE SUICIDE
  A Gothic Horror Story

  by robert davidson 50 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 26 1:12 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Death, Lost love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Bye Bye Mommy

  / Years since we last talked, / Maybe even more. / Wish to turn back the clock / Sadly, lying on the floor. / / Reddish black was your favorite color, / Never mine. No, never mine. / I can imagine your face

  by crimson rose 247 35 lines, 2 comments, on May 1 5:28 AM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Dark, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• After My Suicide

  sheds an honest tear
  It plummets to the ground

  by Crazy-Dan 78 lines, 26 comments, on Oct 8 4:58 PM 2006. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Finally Set Free

  by Closetpoet1971 39 lines, 26 comments, on Feb 9 1:26 PM 2007. In Adult, Sad, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Visions Fortell Of A Siren Screaming.

  When I Heard The Sirens This Morning I Thought I Had Finally Done It.
  I Thought I Had Rid The World Of Something So Very Putrid And Evil.

  by early-sunsets 19 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 29 1:05 PM 2006. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Bloody Scene

  The scent of decay fills the air
  A woman’s intestines lay everywhere

  by MoonHaze 30 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 7 11:10 AM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Dead one's love one's

  Child never cries
  A family morn’s

  by foxs lady 22 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 23 8:03 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Mastery Incarnate

  Black and blue / Are the colors of my soul's lining. / The width of indiscriminate days / Of unanswered prayers. / Increasingly familiar / Feelings hung around my neck, / So guilty and agile, / That I must stop

  by Deviant Dreamer 34 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 8:49 AM 2007. In Dark, Society, Weird

  • Commented on by judge.
• Darkness

  Her parents bodies on the ground
  And nightmares in her head

  by on-bloody-heels 7 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 16 8:21 AM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Suicide

  And this is what it came down to
  My suicide
  

  by loveaswellashate 52 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 16 10:40 PM 2007. In Dark, Suicide, Emo, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• "Mom"

  I once was a small child forgotten in a room
  there was never nowhere to go, Mom had left us on our own

  by whitecities 26 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 6 3:38 PM 2007

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• What a bloody sport (You kept laughing and holding me insted Part 3)

  This is a 2-1 poem read it whole than start again only reading every thrid line.

  by marlenambolden 42 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 26 9:03 AM 2006. In Abuse, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Coffee and Melancholy

  / Coffee and Melancholy / / I. / / There was a man i met / an unredeemable scowl troubled his face. / “I am alone,” he said. / He tighte

  by peter alistair 49 lines, 5 comments, on May 1 1:01 AM 2007

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• Aftermath (Part II of Calm Before The Storm)

  My life is nearly gone
  The last breath shall come to pass

  by Star-of-David 40 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 18 1:51 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy

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• shadows

  hmm this is just a little thing i guess!

  by raVen light 8 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 20 2:40 PM 2007

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• Morpheus' Stigmata

  he said dreams define the maelstroms of my desire

  by malkinpuss 34 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 25 2:51 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Society, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• April Fools Day Fuck Up

  stupidity, it rules my life / making things worse than they would seem / it was a joke / just a stupid little game / i never ment to hurt y

  by blondevamp 20 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 24 5:35 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Trust Me

  trust me with a knife, / I'll take your life. / trust me with a gun, / I'll have to much fun. / trust me with a rope, / I'll make you chock. / trust me will a pill, / I'll mak

  by juviegurl90 17 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 30 3:54 PM 2007

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• Anger within

  As the blood flows from my wrist, / I saw the smirk on your fucking face. / The cuts so deep, / I’m feeling numb. / The pain disappeared,

  by NuZ 22 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 11:13 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• "Love"

  by WhenWillsCollide 23 lines, 18 comments, on Apr 6 9:58 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Hatred Unspent

  by BittersweetPhantasm 48 lines, 5 comments, on May 1 2:31 PM 2007. In Adult, Abuse, Dark, Pain, Life, Sad, Society

  • Commented on by judge.
• Blood Red Sunset

  Too early to go home just yet,
  she takes another path.

  by Angierie 59 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 19 5:23 PM 2007. In Abuse, Rape, Murder

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• [Free Falling]

  I got myself into the mind of a suicidal
  i wish i hadnt, he's taking over me.

  by Domine Pestilentia 26 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 9 1:56 PM 2007. In Angst, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Last Note

  this is just a feeling I had when I was about 13 or so...(mom, it's just a poem)

  by XXStOlEn-HaLoXx 87 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 9 1:19 PM 2007. In dark, depression, suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Being Faceless Is Contagious

  My wings are gray my feathers were shed ((Dear Diary today I died))
  

  by Nothingcounts 59 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 19 11:13 PM 2007. In Suicide, Teen issues

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• They Call Me Heroin

  The definition of the word "heroine" is a female hero. But if you knock of the "e" that hero becomes a deadly drug.

  by AutumnsFlame 34 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 11 10:13 PM 2007

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• I'm Sorry Daddy

  I'm sorry that I disappoint you Daddy

  by SarahEatsAirplane 42 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 28 4:46 PM 2007. In sad, dedicated, personal, emo-ishh.

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Game

  You can blame it on me / / I'm not grieving for you / / You don't remember my name / / But I don't really care / / I'm tired of playing

  by SierraHaven 156 lines, 9 comments, on May 2 5:52 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• To You....

  The chilly winds pierce my heart,
  Strengthen the sense that You've had to depart...

  by arnica karuna 28 lines, 18 comments, on Mar 22 10:09 AM 2007. In Dark, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Z3

  Can you see my tears form in black? / Can you see happiness is what I lack? / This is my life by misery it runs / Until my final breath is

  by NickelleteXninja 38 lines, 8 comments, on May 4 9:19 AM 2007

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• Sterile

  On a sterile bed, slowly dying / To the sounds of harsh memory / I hear a thousand people crying / But only one voice cries for me / / A cherished love from long ago / She loved me almost to her death / A love

  by Luciferschild 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 5 5:30 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge.
• His Sinful Doings

  Blood drips from the flowers of life
  Legs covered in dirty red stains

  by silencethequestion 32 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 25 5:04 PM 2007. In Dark

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• The satan of powders

  A POEM ABOUT METH
  

  by Poetdontknowit 23 lines, 51 comments, on Aug 26 6:27 PM 2006. In Society

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• "Clink"

  He sits alone / Drinking "love on the rocks" / He checks his phone / Looks at his watch / / He pulls out her picture / "She probobly forgo

  by urban cowboy 16 lines, 15 comments, on May 7 7:43 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Love, Pain, Sonnet

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Embrace Me

  Embrace me in your arms. / Hold me tightly to your warm chest. / I want to heart your heart beat fast when I am near. / / Your kisses, / l

  by WhitCake 14 lines, 4 comments, on May 9 2:54 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Love, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Discarded Antiquities!

  Spirits dwell in déjà vu as wallowing memories

  by darell 32 lines, 5 comments, on May 11 3:57 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Sad

  • Commented on by judge.
• Kiss of Death

  Unroot my rock-like memories of you / Destroy the poisonous seed of your love / Keep me away from you / Or I might kill you / The way you killed my heart / Carved your name into my secretaire / And sp

  by Punkerflea 17 lines, 2 comments, on May 13 8:15 AM 2007. In Pain, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• pins and needles.

  dimples and curls and young man grace
  it glittered in the sun

  by bloodandsnow 23 lines, 1 comment, on May 13 8:59 AM 2007. In personal.

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Rubies and Death

  by Stormy Sky 38 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 24 7:01 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Love, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Anger Has Turned to Regret and Sorrow

  Dear Nick: / I know sorry is just an empty word. / When I reminisce all I see is you. / Anger has turned to regret and sorrow. / Back then

  by rerouni66 43 lines, 1 comment, on May 14 3:38 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Life, Pain, Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• Inside

  Look at me
  What can you see

  by Just-Meghan 23 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 9 10:49 PM 2007. In Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• my depression

  people question my identity, who am i?? hell i dont even know even if i did i wouldnt tell you not that i dont like u just that i dont want

  by ChArLoTtE SoMeTiMeS 27 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 14 4:07 PM 2007. In sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• smeared with blood and tears

  whishpering secrets in the eyeless dark within my unwritten note...

  by ChArLoTtE SoMeTiMeS 10 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 2 4:25 PM 2007. In crazy

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• i hate you

  by ChArLoTtE SoMeTiMeS 24 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 30 4:32 PM 2007. In hate

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• Leave me alone

  as i stay with this depression by myside / i will always be alone / i long for no-one to come near / i cant stand their love / their touch / every whisper they try to make / why bother? /

  by ChArLoTtE SoMeTiMeS 34 lines, 4 comments, on May 15 4:01 PM 2007. In sad, depression, anger, hate

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Dad

  when we were left alone
  you didnt care

  by ChArLoTtE SoMeTiMeS 25 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 18 10:32 AM 2007

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• Death

  "You want to die don't you?
  You can do it.

  by Hells Bells 118 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 20 5:03 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Death, Depression, Emo, Teen issues, Family

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Raped Innocence and Empty Stares

  Yesterday I asked the doctors / When my daughter will be well again, / When will her blank stare / Lose it’s glazed over sheen of emptiness? / When will she stop shaking? / When will the syringes of medications /

  by frostany 22 lines, 4 comments, on May 22 6:35 PM 2007. In dark, sad, pain, abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Anticipation

  My blackened teardrops fall to the linoleum
  Fly away hairs fall to my face

  by xdustins-girlx 41 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 21 9:13 PM 2005. In Dark

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• What were you thinking?

  Oh how I thought we had something My dear
  You squeeze my wrist as the look of pleasure crosses your face

  by xdustins-girlx 48 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 7 9:13 PM 2005. In Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Crippled

  But before a word is uttered
  The fist is slammed into my face

  by xdustins-girlx 30 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 3:56 PM 2005. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Love in the form of abuse

  A steady hand slaps your cheek / You stare on with a blank face / Your not suprised, yet who would be / It happens every night / The same p

  by EmoAngel 20 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 25 5:47 AM 2007. In love, abuse

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Anti Valentine

  music to your ears
  holding back the tears

  by Babyboo1607 12 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 30 11:51 AM 2007. In Contest, Depressed, Lost love, Anger, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A poem of poison and death

  My world is a deep dark red stream of glistening blood. / Everything looks, explosive, frightening and deadly, / As if I am the only blood

  by DeepinRage 14 lines, 20 comments, on May 23 10:14 AM 2007. In Broken Love, Pain, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Lonely

  by skye101 24 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 9:33 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Death, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• my regrets

  i note to my mother for all the things i have put her through.

  by ExpectingMommy18 26 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 3 10:22 PM 2006. In Lyrics, Sad, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Valedictorian Means Nothing When You're Dead

  My cheek rubs against the scratchy carpet / Against the world it is moving; my body, against the stars / I, the valedictorian, am staring a

  by Cavity 17 lines, 1 comment, on May 23 12:33 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Society, Dark, Life, Personal, Sad

  • Commented on by judge.
• flooding hate

  I am drowning /   / in the hate of the world /   /   in the greed of the people / /   in the virus of the masses / / I am drowning / / where is the air? / /   It ha

  by Looking 78 lines, 3 comments, on May 10 2:58 PM 2007. In Life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Goodbye.

  I'm sorry that I had to say goodbye / I'm sorry if I made you cry / I didn't want to do it you see / But my family got the best of me / They started bringing up your name / Making you the one to blame

  by Cfdff17 17 lines, 1 comment, on May 23 5:56 PM 2007. In Sad, Life, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• Pain and Memories

  I try and forget the memories of pain. / But it's so hard, it's drining me insane. / For you are the one i loved and lost. / When we split i was the one who paid the cost. / About to die without the ble

  by XXDarkness-DecayXX 8 lines, 1 comment, on May 13 9:14 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Take away the Knife

  I was planning to stop. / I mean, / I didn't think I'd ever NEED it, / but... / I did. / I do. / My God, this is so hard! / Mom, Dad, / I didn't want to hurt you. / This wasn't about you at all. / You didn

  by The Fallen Phoenix 34 lines, 3 comments, on May 23 7:42 PM 2007. In Sad, Angst, Dark, Pain, Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Kissing Suicide

  Suicide reaches out its / hand waiting for me / to grasp it, the cold / dagger in my hand / i hold it close so it / rips my skin sending / pain down my spine / and blood down my / chest.I

  by Sle3p 23 lines, 5 comments, on May 17 5:16 PM 2007. In Sucide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Afterwards

  And there we go, we did it again
  after I went and promised I wouldn't.

  by mourningmonday 38 lines, 2 comments, on May 23 9:04 PM 2007. In dark, life, other, pain, personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Dear Mom, Dad, Whom it Concerns:

  Mother,Father, to whom it may concern: / As I sit upon this balcony tonight, / The time has come to end my life. / I tried to talk to you, You wouldn't listen, / I pleaded to you, with eyes that glistened. / In

  by PassionsPromise 67 lines, 6 comments, on May 23 10:56 PM 2007. In pain, sad

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  WhenWillsCollide
  May 2, 2007
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  "love" is option 1- abuse
• 
  Klayer
  May 3, 2007
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  I took mine out ok sorry i just dont want o do it no longer because i wright in secret and dont want my parents to find out.
• • 
    XHollowXEyesX
    May 4, 2007
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    hey thats okay, I dont want you doing anything that makes you feel uncomfortable. I know/can understand how you dont want your parents finding out about your secret, sometimes talking about it helps though. Keep that in mind.
    
    All the best
    Rebecca
• 
  NickelleteXninja
  May 4, 2007
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  Z3

  This poem is named this simply because i've run out of names and decided z(then a number) was easier
  
  As well it is option one.... depression- not suicide as you see i'm clearly alive
• 
  Floorboards
  June 18, 2007
  Edit | Reply
  thanks very much for the gold.
• 
  The Fallen Phoenix
  June 27, 2007
  Edit | Reply
  Haha, poor little me. I missed an honorable mention by just one person. lol. How sad. Anyway, congrats to all of you who did win!!!!!!!

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