remember that person who broke you heart?
lets dedicate this contest to them....
I wont waffle all i want is a poem for your ex
whether its nasty, nice even a thank you
i want it
usual rules apply
like No SwEaRiNg Or ThIs!!!
ohhh and below 30 lines of writing or i'll DQ
go for it lets see what youve got.....
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 19, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 40, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: wow i cant believe how many entries i had this has taken me all morning to judge.. i read each poem twice and honestly loved every single one i have to say sorry though for putting the same comment on afew i did this so i could hurry up and judge and not forget which poems i really liked...anyway thank you all for your amazing poems this has to be one of my fav contest and its nice to know im not alone in my sadness thank you xxxx
now i cant wait to see who the poems belong to xxxxxx
Contest Winners
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If the earth was flat.
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in gratitude i celebrate tonight
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Forever may your soul be damned / Let lightning burn above you / With death you shall walk hand in hand / As suffering grows inside you. / Every step your life will take / Shall litter the floor wit• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I hate you so much I want to kiss you
With everything you have done I should throw you awayby Kaleb L McConnel 22 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 29 5:16 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2950068, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Torn carnation petals leak life
Smear the words of old & faded love notes—• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [92]
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Intentions
Guilt-stricken!by second-born 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 18 1:57 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Today this moment... I feel so lost... so far away
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Thinking about you makes me sick
Dreaming of you is a nightmareby DepressedAngel 6 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 31 11:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bitter, twisted and ever jaded
crying tears of ice• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Darkness hollow nothing left
empty panicked, lost bereftby Zero the Hero 11 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 24 2:15 PM 2007. In Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm sorry I said the things I did / As I didn't think before / If only I realized the heartache I'd cause / From my stupidity and my thoughts. / I honestly didn't mean it / The words that came flowing outby blondebabe1 15 lines, 2 comments, on May 1 5:49 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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He placed his hand upon mine / Smiling lovingly into my eyes / Mmmm his look was so warm and loving. / / He slowly leant forward / And kissed me romantically on my lips / The warmth and the tenderness / I belby blondebabe1 32 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 29 8:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Open your heart to those around / Don’t close off from the world / Your feet are firmly on the ground / Your silent messages are being heard. / Your eyes were never filled with sorrow / Before thisby blondebabe1 23 lines, 1 comment, on May 1 5:53 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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You really got me in a spin
"Baby, dizzy up the girl"by LucyLightning 30 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 12 10:48 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you were smiling / I sail aloft in high streams / / When you were speaking in love terms / I was reminded of a cuckoo in songs / /• Commented on by judge.
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As I sit here I grow ever so tired.
Feeling confused lost among my thoughts and feelingsby asimplepoeticmind 13 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 7 6:55 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Clinging-to-Life 32 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 25 12:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i wrote this just off the top of my head, after seeing my ex-girlfriend.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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>This is the most poignant and beautiful poem in the world... / > / >Tribute / > / >Dedicated to your beautiful hu• Commented on by judge.
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Crossing paths yet once again
I finally understand what God Is up to.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"I DO" I said one bright May day.
To you i pledged this vow i say,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Prisoner of your love? Not I.
'Twas time for me to say good-bye.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What happens when you fall in love with one of your friends.by JustxThexBeginning 32 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 3 10:16 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I met you, I was young and naive.
I was just looking for a guy to enjoy.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you took it all / you took my shape / you took my smile / to lit a bonfire / i see smoke and fire / deep beneath your eyes / a smirk lets me know / you still feel for me / stabbinby Domine Pestilentia 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 1 5:43 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by PaintedParisPassion 23 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 19 9:56 PM 2006. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Not that you ever thought to ask,
But of course, you’re free to leaveby Jai Guru Deva 44 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 30 5:52 PM 2007. In Abandonment, Sad, Life, Dark, Angst, Pain, My life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If a surgeon asks what's wrong with you, and you lie and tell them the wrong thing, how can they fix you?by AutumnsFlame 34 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 11 9:26 PM 2007. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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These paper airplane words
will be the last• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i.
Another shaking head, cast down in disbelief.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
lured by the glow of unfurnished castles,
she found herselfby rendezvous 31 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 17 12:01 AM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Cartons full
of emptyby rendezvous 20 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 21 5:53 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Cuts and burns all in the past. / Thought the scars still remain. / You caused me nothing but pain. / Yet I was inlove with you. / But you hurt me everyday. / But that pain is in the past. / My days grow slightly• Commented on by judge.
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I never missed you; (this was all my white picket fences and my
american dreams, swallowed by an ocean that was across the world,by ItsOursAndIts2night 11 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 9 9:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Coffee in the sun with the blue-green
smooth river spread, turning golden-brown• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Coward
I wish I could tell you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To my one and only
You know who you are• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Remembering visions of thoughts cast in blue / I fall upon times when it was just me and you / To think of the past as it sails through my• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What hurts more? / The one who first destroyed it worse then others? / Or losing the ones you truely love? / / Does it matter anymore? / Oby Hells Bells 103 lines, 3 comments, on May 12 12:00 PM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Depression, Lost love, Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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love hurts. / this is not a question, / its the raw truth / / no matter what, / love is going to hurt us / all of us. / eventually you will fall in love / and the possibility is / that person wont love you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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30 lines of tearstained text• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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With the love in my heart
i thought you were hearby shadowthedark1 10 lines, on Oct 26 6:00 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I thought we had it all a family that we shared,
But slowly you came distant, started not to care
by trace3grls 18 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 7 4:51 AM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Vampstress 46 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 17 7:01 AM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How are you my beloved! / Withall the joy and delight / bidding farewell to our souls / You departed unhesitatingly / leaving me alone to• Commented on by judge.
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I see you looking / The other way / I guess I'm not good enough / For you to face / I told, so many times / To slow the pace / And now your laying / IN YOUR GRAVE / / And we''ll play it out / (We'll playby Death-Head 79 lines, 2 comments, on May 14 6:47 AM 2007. In Pain• Commented on by judge.
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by BloodStainedTear 56 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 13 7:33 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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roses are read
tomatoes are tooby Elvenfairy 22 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 1 7:06 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
these tears are like / rain against the window pane / these days / i live with what i know / / the passion withdrew / & you couldn’t stan• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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silly me, i fell in love
he fell out• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
under these false eyelashes
i'm a killer baby• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
wishing i could go back in time
and forget youby lysdarling 26 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 5 8:24 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This has only just begun, and yet...by ChildeOfChaos 28 lines, 17 comments, on May 13 1:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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On the distant shores of life, / I see in your future, a loving wife. / Though you may never believe the words I say are true, / I do not wish you anguished or feeling blue. / / I pray that God will send the perfec• Commented on by judge.
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Yes, I still remember you. / I remember what you've done, / I remember how you made me feel. / You were there for me in the beginning. / You were there to help me up. / Standing beside me, / Alw• Commented on by judge.
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you didn't even have / to say it / i knew it every time / you called / you could barely / even say i love you / you said you liked / me / for what seemed like / forever / yet i think you were just / saby BeautifullyBroken8 30 lines, 3 comments, on May 14 10:33 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Awaiting his arrival, never once thinking of herself- for a change. / As the clock struck twelve, she lay in bed dreaming of his embrace. / / Although her dream might not come true today, / she'll still have hope forby Josey 41 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 5:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Standing on the edge of the road watching you go / Drive over the hill and into the snow / I stand trying to be bold / But tears are storieby Trueheartforlife 4 lines, 32 comments, on May 7 5:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Smooth the fire in me / And let me dazzle the warmth of your body / Let me be free / And let your senses sparkle with passion / I’ll make you dream / I’ll make your greatest Realm / I’ll share my heart with yoursby LordSam 16 lines, 4 comments, on May 11 2:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I hear your cries / As I spread my wings / To the night skies / The sorrow angel sings / A song of our bittersweet love / Only to be torn apart / By the forces of above / I give you now, and foreve• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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he stands alone / the rain beats down / he wants to discard / his shamefull crown / / deep inside he knows / she might come back one daby angryelf6886 18 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 26 10:40 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I know your sercerts
I know your lies• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I regret every decision since that heartbreaking day,
And look back on every choice with hate and dismay.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
as my days get lonely so do my nights i learn to hold on, with all of my might. i learn to be afraid everythings going to be okay..by ChArLoTtE SoMeTiMeS 16 lines, 2 comments, on May 14 4:04 PM 2007. In love, hate, sad, depression, dark• Commented on by judge.
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one year of love and in return one night of tragedy she held on so close to that knife this is my bitter realityby noneedforchange 245 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 6 1:36 PM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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squinting at the only light lit in the room brightly shining / i find myself creep near a mirror reflecting the tear staind face / evaporating on the paper fading where im contimplating my thoughtby noneedforchange 12 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 24 7:47 PM 2007. In pain without love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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squinting at the only light lit in the room brightly shining / i find myself creep near a mirror reflecting the tear staind face / evaporating on the paper fading where im contimplating my thoughtby noneedforchange 12 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 24 7:49 PM 2007. In pain without love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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just to know i am missed / Just to know our last, wasnt our final kiss / Just to feel your love, so cold, so bliss / Just to know your love, is still pure / And for my broken heart your the only cure / Youby NickelleteXninja 25 lines, 2 comments, on May 14 7:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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So I just write about my "ex" any way that I want?
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yep no swearing though...
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okay...Any particular style?
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any style you want
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that part was hard i had to change up my style but its good to try different things im open to anything im sorry about the other poem on there tears fall from jade is a long and i mean a LONG poem i didnt know if my computer was allowing me to enter or no
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Interesting contest I never would have thought of one like this at all LOL. do we get to write about more than 1 ex? LOL sorry I ask because to write a 30 line poem I got 2 exs that could cover those requirements but I understands the no cursing rule smart rule to have
any ways I got this book marked
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you can enter a poem for each then lol
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There's absolutely no way I could write a poem about my recent ex without using every cuss word available to me. So..I would fail at this. But, I do have a pre-write about my deceased husband..maybe I'll enter that.
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i hope you dont mind, but my poems 1 line more. its the shortest one i had that i thought i could use. i am at your mercy lol
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no way i could do this in less than 30 lines and w/o cussing. great idea tho
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really great turn out for this one. Whew youre gunna be busy. -
read tears fall from jade if u want tho id mean alot to get feedback but loving a lie is what i want to be entered in the contest ... i hope yur having a bad ass day lol mines suckin right now lol anyway let me know what you think
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im going to read them all and comment when i judge dont panic lol xxx
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Thank you so much for the gold, you know I actually felt much better after penning this, it was almost like therapy for me. It was a great idea for a contest and the entries were all so interesting to see what others felt, its good to see I wasn't alone lol.
Love, C
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