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Show me watcha Got!!

Hi. First of all I'd like to thank you for checking out my contest. Second, I'd like to talk about the rules.

1. no foul language
2. no using God's name in vain
3. no StIcKy CaPs


p.s. If I feel the need to add or update rules I reserve the right to do so.

Now for the fun stuff....

1. Make me laugh

2. Make me cry

All poems will be read and commented on.

~BE CREATIVE!~

DO NOT BE AS RUDE AS TO QUESTION MY PERSONAL CHOICE IN THE COMMENTS I LEAVE. By submitting a poem into a contest you are asking for judgement. So don't take it too personal if the comment I leave isn't to your liking.

Sorry,
Ashley

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 1, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    All did a great job! It was very difficult for me to judge because there were many great enteries! I hope you join another of my contests!!

Contest Winners

  1. God's precious little angel
    that once belonged to me ,
    by Talking Toni 51 lines, 47 comments, on Oct 21 6:47 PM 2006. In Personal
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. HDTV ready, twenty speakers with Dolby sound.
    Careful with the volume,
    So I won't knock the walls down 600 channels,
    by Erin200 21 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 10 11:50 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Its time to make you cry. / / keep a serious face. / / Don't you dare laugh / / Or my tiny heart will break. / / Your tears will sta
    by Last Pixie 22 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 2:01 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. You have died and are now resting in a bed
    by trytothink 74 lines, 34 comments, on Apr 26 12:36 PM 2007. In Death, Pain, Friendship, Personal., Loss, Suicide
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2961246, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [35]

1 - 35 of 35
  • keep trying
    everyone complains from their emotions
    by innocent but deadly 15 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 20 4:06 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • ''Don't leave me or I'll be empty,'' / the house whispers into the dark night / unstable already, it won't need a new companion / the three cats and the pretty girl were fine / show me a song, one just
    by Excul 21 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 30 4:18 PM 2007. In Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I saw you yesterday, but you are no
    longer here.
    by The Void 24 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 23 4:43 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The leaves tremble in the wind's might,
    But int heir shaking and shivering,
    by Spiritual Nature 10 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 12 2:22 AM 2007. In Society, Spiritual, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • People laughing, dancing, clapping;
    White boys in the corner started rapping.
    by lilrochick 19 lines, 17 comments, on Jan 29 8:55 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • As beautiful as the light may be, it's gotta let you down sometime...
    by AutumnsFlame 22 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 17 5:28 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • my children for the kingdom
    brothers, sprung from two wombs
    by suzume 10 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 12 3:29 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Has the art crafted to the "nth" degree / Has so perfected it, it is now it's own entity / / One, two, three...the gun is shot / But movem
    by 2lullabyhaven 37 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 26 7:47 PM 2007. In Humor, Life, Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • / /   Mom doesn't want a dog she says that they smell like trash, /   and when you come home you hear a great big SMASH!! / /   Mom doesn't want a dog she says when its all slipery about, / &
    by poetrypug200 15 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 30 6:16 PM 2007. In Humor
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Envelope 63 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 29 11:34 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by MJ Donnelly 26 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 14 3:22 PM 2007. In Humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The birds were all lined up on the telephone wires
    They were waiting for Woodstock, the concert,
    by Poetdontknowit 38 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 26 10:56 AM 2007. In Childrens, Nature, Humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I thought I always had your heart / Although we were set apart / I trusted that you'd always care / Even though life was unfair / / Now it
    by xBluexEyedxGirlx 13 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 30 10:03 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Child never cries
    A family morn’s
    by foxs lady 22 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 23 8:03 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Elysian Fields of gold,
    That is where they met.
    by Angel Crest 58 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 1 4:47 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Weird, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Billbard 20 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 16 6:46 PM 2005. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The way that i look tonight? / The way that i feel? / What is true inside my soul? / What do i truly see as real? / Love and lust? / Hope a
    by XInsanity-FairX 62 lines, 3 comments, on May 4 8:16 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Trapped is a poem that made me think why i wrote it. Everyone who has read it has thought that it was the darkest one i've written.
    by FleetingImage 69 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 26 8:08 AM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Death, Longing, Anger, Hate, Loss, Escape
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Children gather round the fire / And you shall hear a tale, / Of two great armies clashing swords / And which one would prevail. / The War
    by Eternallycurious 82 lines, 15 comments, on May 8 12:20 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

  • That one woman that I love and my best friend is the best thing and the worst thing that has ever
    by Andrecious 2 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 4 3:23 PM 2007. In Love, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • One thing I can't quite ignore is how I never live up to who you expect me too. / I can't quite see anything anymore my hearts has finally
    by de-ja-vu 30 lines, 6 comments, on May 11 8:26 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • When an alien has a chocolate rush...
    by Flying-Flamingo13 21 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 2 4:41 PM 2007. In Weird, Humor, funny
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I sometimes deep inside me / / have ideas of mysterious revelry / / amidst old stories describing pagan life. / / Some most welcomed b
    by vivela 55 lines, 28 comments, on May 10 8:41 PM 2007. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • What!?! / Did you say fun? / As I sit in this stupid algerbra class. / / Did I here you right? / Am I still alive? / Why am I here then? Lets go party. / / wait... What that you ask? / You wish to know wha
    by shadows hunter 20 lines, 5 comments, on May 13 6:43 PM 2007. In Humor
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by pugsleyislove 50 lines, 50 comments, on Feb 28 7:31 PM 2006. In Lyrics, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Flying-Flamingo13
    May 13, 2007
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    Great contest! It looks like you are getting many entries! I have one question though, can we enter twice???


  • countrybabe gold member
    June 1, 2007
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    Thank you

    Thank you so much for the honourable mention trophy and points I really appreciate it.

    Congrats to the winners and other honourable mentions.

    Countrybabe