Contest By Invite Only by Heavens Child at All poetry

This contest is by invite only. If you are not on the list, please do not enter. Points and trophies will be added as I comment on your poems.
I am wanting 2 poems per person. One must be a new poem. The other can either be a new poem, or a prewrite. Give me your best. The poem can be any form, it may or may not rhyme. Every poem will be commented on, honestly. Even though this is an invite to be fair it will be anonymous.

You MUST check grammar and spelling!!! Take pride in your work.

Rules:

1. Proper Grammar (unless slang fits with the style)
2. Proper Spelling
3. nO WrItiNg LiKe ThiS
4. If you are entering an erotic poem, please make it
tasteful.
5. If you are entering a poem about suicide, death,
or cutting please do not describe the actions,
stick to the emotions. Again use your judegement.

accidentlyxliving
A falling star
agazeley
AliceinPoetryLand
ApplesAndHandcuffs
Bazza
behindblueeyes93
Billbard
bloved
buddyboy
butterflykisses47
christopherdavid
Crystal-Dragon
Cupcrazy
Dark Whispers
EmancipatedThoughts
EmoAngel
fish-bubbles
Floorboards
Frodofan
forever dreaming
Forever Ryan
Forgotten Garden
freeasdove
going nowhere
highwaytraveller
-Ink Artist-
Jesuspoet32
KariKaRama
keanes
krisi
lingeringwords
Lotus of Lakshmi
MelonEllie
milichichiBass
mysticstorm
Pause
pink-roses
Rups
Shadows-stars
Sobbingxlullaby
Spiritual Nature
Starrchild777
thelastboyyoullever
The Warrior Poet
WayWithWords
Wolf Heart
workinghrlydy

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on May 2, 2007
Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
Final notes:
Thank you to all who entered my contest. I couldn't hand out as many points as I had hoped, but none the less I really enjoyed judging this contest. Congratulations to all the winners. ~ Kim

Contest Winners

Spring(Sonnet)

New life springs forth in glorious display
Nature's gentle kiss awakens beauty

by Twins 4 me 16 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 19 11:29 AM 2007
Gold trophy winner

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I Am Death

I've watched many a man march down the path
Unknowing of his true destination

by WayWithWords 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 27 11:29 AM 2007. In Life, Angst, Sad, Society, Pain, Death, Loss, War
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Error: Unable to find finalist item 2913190, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Cosmic Cultures . .

Do you believe in Cosmic Cultures . . /

by agazeley 36 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 29 9:01 PM 2007. In Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Life
Honorable mention

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When I see you smile

When I see you smile
I am filled with hope.

by forever dreaming 48 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 23 10:45 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Hope, Life
Honorable mention

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Glass Painting..

"Born to be fragile
I seek freedom in the hands that touch me"

by Rups 35 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 14 11:03 PM 2007. In Other

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Magnificent Day

Silvery light reflects off moon / Casting shadows of days gone by / Holding tight the cherished memories / Breathing in the sweet fragrance / Captivated by love and warmth / Of yesterday's hopes and dreams

by Twins 4 me 16 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 12:32 PM 2007

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Entries [27]

1 - 27 of 27

[ he gets an idea ]

he gets an idea / he sits down to write / as the words flow into his mind / / his arm tries its best / converts feeling to print / as if the two were entwined / / the words flow so free / the pen dances al

by Diggs McGee 62 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 29 9:18 PM 2007. In thoughts, other, contest, message, advice

• Commented on by judge.
My Name is Hale

If my hands could speak, they would scream at
the number of deaths they signed off to...

by Diggs McGee 44 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 14 6:10 PM 2007. In sad, thoughts, humanity, freewrite, loss

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
Teacher

by MilichichiBass 40 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 9 2:02 PM 2007. In Shamanism

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Water

Are you lost? / Does every turn seem the same? / Do you feel more worthless, / At each step you take? / / Well the answers easy / Just stop everything / Don’t walk, breathe, or move at all / Just stop everyth

by MilichichiBass 63 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 29 11:10 PM 2007. In Shamanism, Death, Life, Trance, Spiritual

• Commented on by judge.
My Mind

by Free1977 115 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 7 1:13 PM 2006. In Dark, Other, Personal, Sad, Depressed, Life, Pain, Depression, Self

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
Love Eternal

Love, / Crazy, / one's forever / Lie's at thier feet. / ~*~ / A treasured memoir / deep in recess of mind. / Memory's seem to blind bind. /

by Free1977 13 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 2:04 AM 2007. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Thoughts

• Commented on by judge.
Shiny Black metal (the finished copy)

Life is fragile and easily taken.

by Dark Whispers 75 lines, 18 comments, on Mar 31 1:44 PM 2007. In sad, pain, life, dark

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
Brainless Passion

An empty spaceA crying face. / An empty heart toreus apart. / It kills him insideto see me walk way from

by Dark Whispers 36 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 30 4:24 AM 2007

• Commented on by judge.
Saturday Night..

Crazy dance on a saturday night
Felt the rhythm to sway my body right

by Rups 49 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 11:13 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Love, Fantasy

• Commented on by judge.
the market, the trick

Twisting and turning / around benches and kiosks / like a rock in a river bed / I spot a man sitting / alone / in a small shaded booth. /

by keanes 66 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 3:09 PM 2007

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dirt cheep

A few days back / I became angry / at thelastboyyoullever / - another poet / among many. / / He was right / and I was upset / because he had spotted / my weakness / and I, the fool, had pounced. / /

by keanes 18 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 12:33 PM 2007

• Commented on by judge.
Goodbye

You were my role model.
You stood beside.

by buddyboy 20 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 7 7:51 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad

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Everything We Can't Be

The door's been closed for so long / And I'm still knocking on the wood. / Not one prayer will get me in / But I wish there's one that would. / / It's a question already answered / But I keep asking anyway, / H

by WayWithWords 53 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 30 10:47 PM 2007. In Angst, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Sadness, Lost love, Anger, Message

• Commented on by judge.
You Only Seem To Come Around When Summer Comes Around

You Only Seem To Come Around When Summer Comes Around / All year you played a magic trick / It seemed you've disappeared / But once the wea

by bloved 35 lines, 16 comments, on May 1 8:06 PM 2007. In My life, Dedication, Sadness, Longing, Anger, Personal.

• Commented on by judge.
The Mind of the Insanity

The mind of insanity / The mind of the lost / Confusion is there / Is there still time to waste? / The mind of the blind / The mind of the fools / A world full of anger

by bloved 25 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 24 3:32 PM 2007. In Lost in thought, Hate, Depressed, Escape, Contest

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Kari
April 29, 2007
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Thank you SO much for the invite.. I appreciate it a lot!!
bloved
April 29, 2007
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thanks for the invite! i will come back with some poems!

**Bloved**
A falling star
April 29, 2007
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Ooh thank you for the invite
I'll enter when I get a chance.
agazeley
April 29, 2007
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Thanks . .
Just wrote one and posted it . . thanks for the invite . .
Starrchild777
April 29, 2007
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I'ld love to be a part of this. Thank-you for inviting my writing to your contest. I shall get this done but we prepping for a 4day show so working 13/14 hr days. Somehow I will find the time.

~*Starr*~ XXX
Free1977
April 30, 2007
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THANK YOU
I appreciate the invite and hope you enjoy my poems...good luck and best wishes to all...Always Frances
forever dreaming
April 30, 2007
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Thanks for the invite hun. Will get onto it as soon as I can. xxx
pink-roses
April 30, 2007
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will enter as soon as i get the chance
Frodofan
April 30, 2007
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Thanks for the invite. It's an honor.
KittieLyyn
April 30, 2007
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thanx for the invite ill be sure to enter!
Rups
April 30, 2007
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thanks for the invite
WayWithWords
April 30, 2007
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thanks for the invite...i'm done entering mine!!!!!!!!!!
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-Ink Artist-
May 1, 2007
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Thanks for the invite! I hope I can get something in time.

~Lori
forever dreaming
May 2, 2007
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Thank you so much again for inviting me to this contest and for the HM. It was much appreciated.
Twins 4 me
May 2, 2007
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Thank you so much for the invite and the gold!
Kari
May 2, 2007
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WOW I wasn't expecting to win anything. What a nice and surprise to wake up to this morning. Congrats to all of the winners!! Thank you for hosting this contest!
Frodofan
May 8, 2007
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I am very sorry I missed this. I didn't realize it was closing so quickly.