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Seeing as how I'm rarely on here anymore, I figured I'd might as well give myself incentive to come back, if only for awhile.



I want anything at all. It makes no difference to me. Whether it be story or poem, my caring level is next to zilch.

However, if the grammar is terrible and I cannot get through to the end because it's so bad, I will not even consider it an entry, and I will tell you so. I'm a stickler when it comes to grammar, unfortunately.

Also, I would like only one prewrite from each contestant, the rest must be fresh, should you choose to enter more than once.

Oh, and no haikus. I cannot stand those, no matter how many times I try to convince myself there's nothing wrong with them and that they're really quite simple. If I see one, it's DQ'ed. Sorry, but those're the facts.

Most importantly, have fun with this. Let your imaginations loose, just don't bother trying to reign them in anymore. They'll only get loose again, anyway.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 21, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
  • Final notes:
    So sorry for taking so freakin' long to judge this thing. Life dragged me back and wouldn't let me out until I agreed to sign some papers regarding something won't even care about.

    I realize I did not comment on all the entries, and I apologize for this. I can see why you entered these fine pieces in my contest. If you are in dire need of a comment, however, let me know and I will gladly give you what I thought of your work. Just please know it might not be right away since life seems to need me for other things at the present.

    I applaud your imaginations and hope you all have the sweetest of dreams!

    ~D

Contest Winners

  1. Breeding despair from the dead land, the waste land / dried roses grown from sand / and a promise / Dayadhvam. / / Fire kindles the future
    by Hadji Murad 209 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 29 10:46 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. I want to fill the pages of my life with happy times / I want my life to be about more than pennies and dimes / I want to read about a life that's been well lived; fulfilled / If that could be the case I would be most g
    by 2lullabyhaven 24 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 29 2:49 PM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The pen betrays my forsworn composure
    In verse that reveals my clandestine mind
    by jordan1985 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 14 12:23 AM 2006. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Yellow construction paper torn
    Into long ovular petals
    by ten thousand cicadas 12 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 16 11:18 PM 2007. In Life, Personal, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [50]

1 - 50 of 50
  • It’s so weird cause we’re just like Romeo and Juliet.
    by Astrid-Star 96 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 28 6:34 PM 2007. In Love, Romance, Lost love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • she was an undiscovered poet,
    and a nightly graveyard walker.
    by juliex-exotic shine 30 lines, 35 comments, on Apr 17 4:05 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Sitting by myself
    Secluded
    by burdened 38 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 4 2:36 PM 2007. In Angst, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Thinking of nothing / is empty contemplation. / Exhausting the subconscious. / Images bang, bang, bang / the door of an empty room. / Echoes sound reflect / light. / Are you blinded? /
    by AriesKing1 35 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 28 7:35 PM 2007. In Experience, Opinion, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I remember that day,
    when we stood out in the pouring rain.
    by Slashes of Color 15 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 21 12:18 PM 2007. In Memories/Personal/Love/Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • If i told you i cried today would you care? / If i told you ill die tomorrow if your not here,would you care? / If i told you,your granted
    by without the night 31 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 9:17 PM 2007. In Sad, Life, Love, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by panegyric ink 120 lines, 43 comments, on Jan 15 4:35 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I hear your music, / your soul speaks to me. / As dawn approaches, the / kisses multiply,with endless / minutes, and blissful hours. / /
    by LadyLavender 22 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 28 11:07 PM 2007. In love, passion
    • Commented on by judge.
  • For everytime I see your face,
    I fall back into a place.
    by jessicandy 24 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 23 1:08 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The sun shines the heart pines
    For the love that was once mine
    by Shining for You 23 lines, 18 comments, on Mar 28 9:27 AM 2007. In Love, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I don't like this place that I am in,
    It has made me someone who I never wanted to be,
    by Lissa LePorts 10 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 3 3:20 AM 2006. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • BROTHERS"
    Brothers are supposed to stick together
    by whitecities 26 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 16 10:07 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Stripped down to the primal
    Of mind, spirit and thought
    by faderman1959 24 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 28 11:16 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Bazza 152 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 18 8:56 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • stuck between the bulletproof
    layers of lasagne sheets and city streets,
    by DancingRed 45 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 21 11:26 PM 2007. In Peronal, Dark, Sad, Life, Feelings
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by MistressAkasha 46 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 12:13 PM 2007. In Dark, Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by mentalseductionz 34 lines, 1 comment, on May 1 11:37 PM 2007. In Adult
    • Commented on by judge.
  • As I hear the sound
    Of bare feet on a marble floor
    by Mj 23 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 4 9:31 AM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Will you dance with me Death?
    Take us to the floor
    by BabyBun 21 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 5 6:52 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Love has to sides, the mushy, always happy side... and the deathly, broken hearted side.
    by katrocker92 33 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 16 4:54 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, Other, Life, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • WE are bestfriends I hope you know. I will Always be here for you even when you think no theres and no one cares I have your back. We tell
    by de-ja-vu 2 lines, 4 comments, on May 8 7:09 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Signature tune / ************* / / In the wee hours today / I heard the sound / FROM THE TOP SLOTS OF MY COCONUT TREE / So coarse and har
    by Purush 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 9:52 AM 2007. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by ohhryaan 63 lines, 25 comments, on Mar 24 3:49 PM 2007. In Life, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • the forest fears man the most at "NIGHT"
    by Whispering Wind 21 lines, 26 comments, on Apr 19 7:50 AM 2007. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Miss Sweet Kisses 133 lines, 56 comments, on Dec 5 7:41 PM 2006. In Angst, Dark, Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Alternation dissasembling many species of mirth before. / Subjects dividing through lack of congestion, peering souls. / I think the words i was trying to articulate at birth were: / "Sixteen years later after this your
    by ashtray heart 32 lines, 1 comment, on May 7 3:34 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Angst
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Propably my best one right now.
    by BobbyJean 18 lines, 38 comments, on Jan 14 7:36 PM 2007. In Personal, Spiritual, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • At night I lie in bed dreaming of you, / The time slips by but my thoughts remain still, / You are everything to me, you are my world. /
    by marshdbw 50 lines, 7 comments, on May 8 10:01 AM 2007. In Unrequited love, love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Sleep on, little child, / don't be afraid, / but just remember / it's not all in your head. / / There are things unseen, / people unknown, / that you have yet to discover, / in places your feet have not trod.
    by electric supernova 52 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 29 11:16 PM 2007. In Weird, Dark, Life, Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Is my subconcious speaking to me?
    Should I listen to my dreams?
    by Previn 42 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 9 7:06 AM 2006. In Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Angel baby with wings of gold / a precious bundle to behold / when called to heaven,you did depart / leaving empty arms and empty hearts / Sweet and precious you could not stay / without a whimper y
    by littlebit2 14 lines, 3 comments, on May 6 2:27 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • This is sad but worth it.
    by sarahwantstostaple 56 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 7 12:00 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Libby Cullen 17 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 19 9:46 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I know something that he doesn't know / That face that's smiling - - it's only a show / Let's just say I wrote him a letter... / If only it
    by xBeautifulxHellx 22 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 12:50 PM 2007. In Hope, Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Ryno 41 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 22 5:12 PM 2007. In Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • At the end things will go slow,
    In our final chance to let things go,
    by James L Williams 26 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 6 1:42 AM 2006. In Hope
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I left / Long ago in fact / There was nothing ther / To stay for / No comfy chair / Just much that was strange / And little change. / Nothi
    by Smirnoff Ice 24 lines, 4 comments, on May 11 12:54 PM 2007. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I think her belt is just a little to tight. / because she's alone walking with me in this moonlight. / tonight she fits in my palm. / but t
    by Pause 40 lines, 9 comments, on May 10 11:28 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The light breeze that flowed over the blue waters.
    The same water that touched the yard.
    by Vietbabe909 16 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 21 1:20 AM 2007. In random, feelings, environment, nature
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Iron eagles overhead
    and turmoil on the ground
    by serious clown 16 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 12 4:46 PM 2006. In Other
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Choking in blood,
    I'm drenched.
    by loveasyouareloved 40 lines, on Apr 14 11:00 PM 2007. In Dark, Spiritual
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • "I want you, / I need you!" / That's what you say. / But I know it's a prank / You've been dying to play. / Well, I'm not gonna join. / You'll just have to deal. / You're leaving this place. / I don't care ho
    by Onyx Lina Rose 16 lines, 1 comment, on May 10 6:48 PM 2007. In Love, Pain
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • her heart begins to temble her legs beg
    by lonelyshadow 20 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 13 11:04 AM 2005. In Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I can't fake and I can't hate / But it's my heart that's about to break. / You're all I need, / I'm on my knees, / Watch me bleed / Would y
    by DarkAngel42001 16 lines, 3 comments, on May 3 11:33 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • It would be so nice / If you just gave a glance my way / But , who am I kidding? / I'm just a nameless loser / Another someone who's far from beauty / But just you wait and see / Because someday . . . far from now
    by zutamaru 41 lines, on May 11 10:59 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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  • risewiththesmoke
    April 28, 2007
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    i absolutely love that picture.


    • Sapphire Rose
      April 28, 2007
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      Heh, thanks. I don't remember where I found it, most unfortunately.


  • Death of the Author
    April 29, 2007
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    I agree with you on Haiku's, they just seem..incredibly pointless...ow well, good luck with your contest x take care x


  • Gigglegasm gold member
    May 11, 2007
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    I used to share your opinion on Haiku's... Pointless... But changing my style *to* Haiku helped me break free of writer's block...
    Good luck with the judging!


  • Arkbear gold member
    May 21, 2007
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    Hmmmmmmm ~

    Can you tell me where my poem went?

    Bear ~


  • DancingRed
    May 22, 2007
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    thanks for an awesome contest.

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