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Ok five lines only. ABOUT ANYTHING or use picture for inspiration if you need some.

XxX
Have fun.

Oh and much thanks to Markgrif, who thinks i'm "special", hehe, cause I am.


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 2, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Wow, so many brillant entries. Was very hard to judge, except number one, that poem just caught my attention and I was inlove with it.

    Thanks for entering people and hope to see you's next time.

    (I will have new contest up with 12 hours.)

    XxX

Contest Winners

  1. The Insanity of Solitude
    Rocking slowly; arms wrapped around self,
    A single tear drops as I heard the voices say softly;
    by Natasha Bradich 4 lines, 24 comments, on Apr 27 8:16 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Lost, Feelings
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Fixed but Hollow
    / / Fetch me from my work and family / / Smile to me with a gleam that blinds my mind / / Take me to make believe then rip me open / /
    by intanglio2ring 13 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 27 9:14 PM 2007. In Pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Look At Me and Smile
    If ever you're unhappy
    Or if things don't go your way
    by vjlvenus 4 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 29 2:57 AM 2007. In Spiritual
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [30]

1 - 30 of 30
  • Live Long
    Now a days you are not to  be seen / Where did you go? / Are you enacting a scare crow / in the green fields ? / love the flowers that spread fragrance to live long /
    by Purush 5 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 27 2:10 AM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Fly Away With Me to Paris
    FLY AWAY WITH ME TO PARIS / / / / Fly away with me to Paris tonight / / Let's get swept up in the passions within our hearts / / We'll drink the finest of champagnes and wines / / Dive into the waves
    by Jeremy0826 12 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 27 2:19 AM 2007. In Romance, Love, Life, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Invisible
    To fade away in the forgotten memories. / To disappear in the shadows . / To be in a crowded room yet feel all alone. / To have a voice, yet only silent words are spoken. / I long to escape to the light and en
    by th3sl4y3r 4 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 27 2:20 AM 2007. In alone, life, love, death, thoughts, personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sutured
    I stitch up the shattered memories / that keep haunting my dreams. / I can no longer function within this black hole / that tears at my spirit each day. / Sutures of raw flesh insulate my future... / /
    by AliceinPoetryLand 6 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 27 2:46 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A Moment Lost
    he holds her close, / offering warmth from the rain, / trying to hug the pain away. / "don't die..." he pleads over and over, / and she replies at last: "don't forget me."
    by penciledlives 4 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 3:31 AM 2007. In Sad, Death, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • [ I am sorry my dear, I left you alone ]
    I am sorry my dear, I left you alone / left to solitary by death, a raged shell of emptiness. / be still and push away unspoken words / Dream of me without a gun / Before I pulled the trigger and left you alone. /
    by dathenwoods 5 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 27 3:56 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Fate Worse Than Death
    / "To Be Forgotten Is Worse than Death" / / To live no more in the memories of others / To have no existence in the many hearts / To not be sought out for love and comfort / That, my friends, is a fate worse tha
    by Timeless Wisdom 6 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 27 4:18 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Heart (acrostic)
    H elp me to understand this feeling / E ach second I am with you i fall deeper / A nd you love that I love you / R each for my hand and you take my heart / T ogether we'll never part your in my heart
    by lovelight05 4 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 4:27 AM 2007. In Love, Acrostic
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Melting Snowman
    Icy winds are blowing / As the immortal snowman / Begins to melt with loneliness, / Forgotten by those he loved / The last one left to die. /
    by pozo 5 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 27 5:06 AM 2007. In Sad, Nature, Dark, Fantasy
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Nothing
    I was forgotten today, just overlooked, / Not remembered, missed all together, / Left out, not invited and passedover. / I just dissappear
    by Spiritual Nature 4 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 27 5:25 AM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life, Society, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Visions
    I have strange visions nowadays / Of blades and swords and skulls / Dancing ballet near my grave / Now littered with weeds / Stunted by mortal fear.
    by Lorot 4 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 5:45 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Never again
    by SpokenSilence 5 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 5:52 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Boo Who
    Nothing to say, / All I get are Boo's, / Nobody remembers me, / Friendly ghost my ass, / Thats what haunts me the most.
    by soldiersoul 4 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 27 8:34 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Young Thomas
    Of young Thomas, both handsome and witty, / I write these few lines as a ditty; / he studied the wars / between lands, and their cause, / but not how to stop them; a pity.
    by Shenton 4 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 27 9:19 AM 2007. In War & Peace
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Why?
    by Kahliya 4 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 9:59 AM 2007. In Angst, Society, Sad, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Help Me Find Myself
    Do you know who I am / if I do not know myself? / Can you help me find myself, / the real me, who resides / inside this facade I present?
    by grannyeri 4 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 27 11:03 AM 2007. In Other, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Hollow Points Like This Kiss
    Hollow, / her eyes are cold like the shells from my rifle, / She must live no more, She must live no more! / Her every move, look, and mood
    by ChrisTrauma 4 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 11:39 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Never again to be Loved
    As I wait in tears / The days seemed longer / As I wait in hope / I was forgotten / Never again to be loved
    by Danielle Samia 4 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 27 11:51 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Life, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dream On(Cinquain)
    by Billbard 4 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 27 8:24 PM 2007. In Humor.
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Someones Always Thinking of You
    No matter where you are,  / strange soil beneath you, / strange sky up above, / I remember and I care / and your name is forever in my prayers. /
    by Roaddog Wolf 5 lines, 9 comments, on May 1 3:22 AM 2007. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Insanity
    On a pale, burning cheek / silver drops cascade to your feet / laying on the cold soil again / Laughing and lashing you away
    by Domine Pestilentia 4 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 27 10:15 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You Work
    You, work all day? /   / Someone now wants a slave. / / You hurry on home. / / Yet they rant and rave. / / Still tomorrow is another day. / / / 4-28-2007
    by mcheadle 11 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 28 4:58 AM 2007. In Life
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 2, 2007
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    Thanks for the contest. Congratulations to all the winners.
    Great entries!
    Love


  • intanglio2ring
    May 2, 2007
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    Wonderful Contest!

    Thanks again for the great inspiration!
    & for the Silver!
    Tang


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 2, 2007
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    Congratulations to the winners and thanks for hosting yet another great contest
    Gaylene