Please read the rules, im not going to use some stupid "post this to enter" im alowing you to be resonsible enough to look
heya, this is my first large point contest... ive poured all of my points into this so please do your best.
The aim of this contest is (as the title entails) to illustrate what your last words would be if you were to die. I want each writer to also mention the way that thay would be dying. no matter how subtly...
What would you say if you could only talk for a minute, and who would you say it to. Would it be a loud FUCK YOU! to your peers at school. or a final "i love you" to your loved one... or maybe youd pray for forgiveness to god himself... all are good ideas.
OK, the rules are as follows
1/ no sticky caps, they piss me off...
2/ no erotica, death sex is creepy, necro!
3/ not rhymings ok too, if you have rhythem...
4/ if your younger... ENTER THIS CONTEST!
expand your horizons.
5/ sorry no prewrites, i want original words told here.
6/ please try your best not to use god in your poems... he serves no dramatic purpose.
7/ no bashing, this is a freindly contest
8/ I must comment on every poem
9/ try not to make them too long
last/ be kind to other contenders... if you read their work and see something like a silly mistake they may loose points for, do the right thing and tell them about it.
I'll judge on may 10th but I may extend it a little it depends.
And if your a not so eperianced poet, and you need a little help, ask another contender... this is a freindly contest. and is open to all
heya, this is my first large point contest... ive poured all of my points into this so please do your best.
The aim of this contest is (as the title entails) to illustrate what your last words would be if you were to die. I want each writer to also mention the way that thay would be dying. no matter how subtly...
What would you say if you could only talk for a minute, and who would you say it to. Would it be a loud FUCK YOU! to your peers at school. or a final "i love you" to your loved one... or maybe youd pray for forgiveness to god himself... all are good ideas.
OK, the rules are as follows
1/ no sticky caps, they piss me off...
2/ no erotica, death sex is creepy, necro!
3/ not rhymings ok too, if you have rhythem...
4/ if your younger... ENTER THIS CONTEST!
expand your horizons.
5/ sorry no prewrites, i want original words told here.
6/ please try your best not to use god in your poems... he serves no dramatic purpose.
7/ no bashing, this is a freindly contest
8/ I must comment on every poem
9/ try not to make them too long
last/ be kind to other contenders... if you read their work and see something like a silly mistake they may loose points for, do the right thing and tell them about it.
I'll judge on may 10th but I may extend it a little it depends.
And if your a not so eperianced poet, and you need a little help, ask another contender... this is a freindly contest. and is open to all
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 2, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering my contes... youve all been magnificent!!! im happy to have opened this contest and hopefully done something somewhat original... i wish i could give all of you points, but i dont have enough to go around... sorry.
and id just like to say this
"like the everlasting storm, life too has an eye where things are peacefull, that could be ones friends, lover or family. i hope you all who havent yet fint that eye to your sould and all live happily ever after."
Contest Winners
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sorry for being the person i was / i never meant to hurt you / i know you will cry over me but pleas / don't let me see / i cant bear the pain of watching you / i loved you with all my hearby Emo Cowboy14 49 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 26 5:53 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Dark, Death, Suicide
Gold trophy winner
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Daddy, I'm sorry I couldn't be around for you. / and Mommy I'm sorry I want you to know I love you too. / Elise, My big sister I wish I could tell you how much you mean to me. / I never wanted things to end l• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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This darkness once around me, / holding me breaking me, I couldn't be free. / Bright lights flashing up a head, / I see it, feel it, everlaby Bruised.Roses 14 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 26 5:54 PM 2007. In final words, suicide, pain, sorrow
Bronze trophy winner
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As the cancer spreads through my system, / cry or don't cry, / just let me say the things I never got to / / I wish that I could erase my mistakes / so that I wasn't so disappointing, / I wish that I hadn't pusheby cadm14 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 26 10:04 PM 2007. In Personal, Angst, Thoughts, Other
Honorable mention
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Hey mom, please don't be sad / I'm just going to sleep for a while / I've had this heart disease / Ever since I was a small child / / You• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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There's no way back anymore / the needle is going to go through / i will get to close my eyes / and never open them never again / I'm sorry darling, i cant take it anymore / its the weight of it allby Domine Pestilentia 20 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 26 4:48 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I guess I didn't respect this life as much as I should have. / My family and friends / The innocent by-standers / The crime and passion. / / I loved with every fiber of my being / As for it being returned, It was• Commented on by judge.
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/ As I'm gasping for breath and holding on for dear life, / I turn to my friends, kids, and to my wife. / I ponder a thought of what my laby Father McKenzie 19 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 26 6:47 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Before departure onto those / sacred, sanctity lands, acknowledgement / towards all leaves no regrets made... / / Granted that life has its pros / and cons, this soul will simply / wait and therefore stand along• Commented on by judge.
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by MOvIng iN StERiO 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 26 10:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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>In this bloodshed I lay alone, / Surrounded by fear of what lingers beyond. / My mind hazed with thoughts of an exquisiteby XXBrunettexBarbieXX 14 lines, 25 comments, on Apr 27 1:11 AM 2007. In Suicide, Humour, Death, Blunt• Commented on by judge.
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I had no more to give / No more smiles / No more tears / No more fears / / I gave no more than / What I had / In good times / & in bad / / I did all that I could / With the strength allotted meby 2lullabyhaven 24 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 3:00 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I'd love to say I'm sorry for my sins / To maybe comfort all of the innocents, / But I'm too busy to notify your kins / I'm running a rampage to do my justice. / / There isn't a clique problem here / And it isn't• Commented on by judge.
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my last words before I leave this body
the last words before leaving this body would be "THANK YOU ..."
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please dont leave us ^_^, loved your write
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I edited my comment for better understanding 
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I'll be entering
Moch love
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"or maybe youd pray for forgiveness to god himself" then you go on to say try not to use god in your poems...
Just a note. Love the contest, will try to enter
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Excellent idea
Azrael,
This was a great idea for a contest. I'm glad I entered. I hope the judging is going well.
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the judging is 'really' hard!!!
but im almost there...
iva managed to narrow things down a little...
there are six awards, so only six can win the contest, but everyone here has written a winning entry into the hearts of the readers. and if anyone has used this contest to 'in fact' say their last words before the end has come... i am honored, and may hell be easy on you....
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