This is my 17th contest; I can't believe that the number just keeps getting higher and higher each time. I want your deepest and most spiritual poems. I want you to free yourselves and get me lost into your world. I want to be able to feel what you are writing about from within.
The Rules
1) No StIcKy TaPs
2) Stick to the topic or get DQ'ed
3) Keep the background where it's readable or I'll ask you to edit
4) Please don't send me crap
5) Have Fun!!
I'm looking forward to seeing all of your entries....
What are you waiting for????
Get Writing!!!
The Rules
1) No StIcKy TaPs
2) Stick to the topic or get DQ'ed
3) Keep the background where it's readable or I'll ask you to edit
4) Please don't send me crap
5) Have Fun!!
I'm looking forward to seeing all of your entries....
What are you waiting for????
Get Writing!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 2
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Congrats too all
Contest Winners
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I am a fading flower / planted here by God to add / beauty and joy to those around me. / A poetic creation swaying / in the verbal breezes• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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This is the true and only power of all
We guide ourselves into the heart of the path• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
As winter's now upon us-
the sadness that we feel intensifies.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A vastless sea of white lies befor me
All at once I am submurged in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
If someone had foreseen what would happen to me.You would have not allowed them to breathe.by Lady Nightshade 55 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 5 7:20 AM 2007. In Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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There is an energy beyond the starswhere brilliant beauty seeksthe slightest hope for long lost souls<p class• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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“Christmas’s mourning”
I stand and watch pillar without end• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
dont let the shed of blood
control the out look of life itselfby Aligirl1155 85 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 12 10:32 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 2968977, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by BloodStainedTear 3 lines, on Apr 13 7:28 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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So you stared down on me... / Now all you can do is frown on me. / You exist, but I've lost respect. / I'm your loneliest defect. / I'm your tiniest insect. / I'm your permanant reject! / So you watchedby XChrisUnknownX 48 lines, 6 comments, on May 19 6:52 PM 2007. In Religiously Contradictive, Feelings, Pain, Thoughts, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 2171655, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [182]
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As I lay there on the cold hard ground
I start to dream of everything thing I ever doneby kyo kurai kori 46 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 9 1:36 PM 2007. In sad, pain, dark, personal. thoughts, goodbye• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know a place-
it's not far from here.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The last stanza is the unfortunate truth for many• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’m back in my world of depression again, and that unstoppable monster has been relinquished it has taken over my mind body and soul• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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ageless Stone dropped in
the wanton face of the deep.
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In the depth of my
mind rages a beast of• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
to help me be honest
with out using the truth• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How I feel about you.... I can't explain.....Its all just weird..... I feel no pain......Your different from ......All the rest......I just know it.....There's no test........I mean its like wow.....I don't understand.......Iby gothic diva 0 lines, on Apr 26 9:22 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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written from a werewolf's point of viewby zhaniswolf 11 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 17 11:30 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It is when you move beyond / all the layers of senses, sight and sound / till something quakes you incredibly inside / rising in fiery touc• Viewed by judge.
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I got tears dripping down to my soul Because I already know I'm alone.
Lost all my friends so I never hear the ring from the phone.by We da Best 20 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 12 11:32 AM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This Poem is about What Should have been• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Awake, O genteel Spirit man, Your gown about your breast. Rebuke your rabid bedfellow Who rages as you rest!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Breaking through the azure vast
Touching home of want and will.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Auntie of mine your name is a flower the beautiful kind.
When i was young you taught me so much.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Glorious treasure upon my soul you delicately did bestow / Apathetic writing of American poets' articulation my eyes did unforrow / How canby MissAnonymous 18 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 26 2:38 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When im losing myself
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She embarks on a souls quest, against a minds enemies,
hurt she longs to divest, she faces her darkest memories.by th3sl4y3r 28 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 13 4:06 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I saw you yesterday, but you are no
longer here.by Dark Whispers 24 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 23 4:43 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In the halls I pass him,
in class he stares with an evilby Dark Whispers 36 lines, 38 comments, on Apr 20 10:21 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Hopeless she kicks
and scream, still hope• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In an ally way lays a little boy,
scarred.by Dark Whispers 25 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 4 6:41 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lost in a dream in Everland.
Where God extends his hand.by Dark Whispers 16 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 20 1:06 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
in the ashes of November
lie the remnants of the day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I may have made a new type of formed poetry-please let me know if I didn't; if I happened not to know about it, and did one.by Zephyr Aryn 16 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 26 3:52 PM 2007. In Personal, Other, Nature, My own style, Contest, Waterfall• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Acrobatic beings
constantly dipping effortlessly,by Zephyr Aryn 9 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 20 9:38 PM 2007. In Other, Nature, Weird, Contemporary, My own style, Contest, Freewrite, Escape• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I had to have an ultrasound,
To find out what was wrong.by slipperssun 26 lines, 31 comments, on Dec 18 5:56 PM 2006. In Love, Personal, Goodbyes, Loss, Dedication, Pain
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I smack you with it, shatter your skull like a melon,
hit you so hard, I become a convicted felon.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Again not exactly a poem but more of a story, a continuation of the dream in White Orb
Part II. I’ve awaken from my slumber drenched in c• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's not O.K. / To speak to me / Emotionlessly / To rape my mind and body / Endlessly / To walk and talk with me / And lead me the wrong wa• Viewed by judge.
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clouds gather over my head / And after things are done and said / I feel the weight of pressure undo / I can't discern what's good or true• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I have sat and watched the skies,
the wonders that lurk up high.by th3sl4y3r 36 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 20 12:37 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Illogical Journey.
I’m ripping my hair out• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Endless pain, in the endless rain
a path does end, then repeat -- again.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In a time of endless struggle
In a time of constant strife• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Whizzer is what you should name him• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My unseen superman watches me from above.
His love shines down like rays of sunshine• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Rage the favorite tool of the devil.
Our actions are on his level.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I cannot believe i juat wrote this!. Hope you like it.
by FleetingImage 54 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 31 8:10 PM 2007. In Life, Hope, My own style, Lost in thought, Longing, Inspirational, Happiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I have been running all my life
to find a place called homeby gaiascully 37 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 28 7:02 AM 2005. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She's every whisper of every leaf in every blowing tree / She's every sparkle in every eye of every child I see / And every time the sun shines down, she's shining down on me / / She's every petal on every flowerby Earthmagick 12 lines, 4 comments, on May 6 4:23 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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You never even loved me,
Just used me as your whore.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
it's late at night, my vision is blurred,
the alcohol is seeping in and my speech is slurred.by semperfichic 35 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 11 4:35 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Since you're alive today,
God has something to say.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm done, / hold this for me / pluck the razor from my hand / and hold it for me / till the next time i turn around / and ur there / then give it to me / let me slice away my pride / and then hold it for me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Nature with human emotions.by Hells Bells 46 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 18 3:47 PM 2007. In Sad, Fantasy, Depression, Pain, My life, Sadness, Escape• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I don't understand
What people say, what they want• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Soul of the self / ++++++++++++++++++ / When ever I desire to come to you / I enter your chest zone in perfect silence / Unable to bear this sudden entry / You just smile at me inconsistently /• Viewed by judge.
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Another title provided by Uthrem• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Righteous!
I love this idea! Trixie you never fail to amaze! -
Hi
what do you mean by multipule writes?
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Multipule writes means that you can enter more than one poem in the contest as many as you would like to enter is fine with me. Plus you can rise your chances of winning the contest. Thank you for asking and best of luck in the contest.
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Of coarse it does
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How many entries max?
If you want me to throw one out, please let me know...it had no maximum posted, so... -
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As many as you wish and as many as it takes to rise your chances of winning the contest is fine with me. Thank you for asking though and I'll glad that you did.
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the first part is a pem the other 2 parts are more of stories but they are good please read them and tell me what you think i haven't entered many contest and this is a new experience for me, i think of it more as a test for myself to see if i have what it takes
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I love that album!
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Thank You!!
I'm so sorry for the delay in commenting
Have not been online as much and just realized this contest closed~
I'm so Honored and Appreciative for the Trophy
Made my day!!
Thank You for Hosting~
Wonderful contest to feel inspired!!
Congratulations to all who placed
Thanks again!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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