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I wan't to get lost in your eyes

  Ok this is my 5th contest, and I have desisted to do it on something I love EYES.

THERE WILL BE 5 OPTIONS, THE POEMS CAN BE HAPPY, SAD, DARK, EYES ARE VERY VERSATILE SO JUST ABOUT ANYTHING. ALL I ASK IS THAT THERE IS NOTHING ABOUT CUTTING AND DOING DRUGS THATS IT.


--Option #1- Picture inspired, send me a message and I will give you a picture.


--Option #2- Titles
1- Emptiness
2- Blank look
3- Bleeding Tears
4- Dried out eyes
5- Black and blue, Bit I still love you
6- Baby Blues
7- Lost
8- Crying love
9- The Sparkle
10- The first glimpse


--Option #3- Shape poetry about the Eyes. It can be an eye or anything relating to eyes.


--Option #4- Quote inspired. Message me and I will give you a quote pertaining to the eyes.


--Option #5- Ok i can't think of another option. sooo if you think of another option that you want to write about let me know.


----RULES---
1. Swearing is fine, just not every other word
2. nO dOInG dIs spell normal and only use caps if necessary.( spell-check)
3. place your option in your author comment box

OK there we go i will add pre-writes later on ok. Well go for it and I look forward to reading what you write!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 13, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 40, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    WOW this has been my best contest so far. I really didn't expect to get so many entries, especially since pre-writes weren't allowed. I was very happy to see all the different takes on EYES as i did and i loved them. This was very close they were all GREAT writes. Again thanks for entering, i really enjoyed reading them

Contest Winners

  1. Tears in the Wind
    See who I am beyond the obscuring tears / that paint the meadows of past. / My world is yet to turn mortal with fears / when this broken heart is recast. / / My soul strolls without a vivid
    by Denierim 27 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 25 2:28 PM 2007. In Sadness, Lost love, Darkish, Longing, My own style
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. To Lose Myself.
    Staring over my shoulder / Into a world of color / That I create, separate / Yet unable to match / That work of art / Which watches as I move / Pencil poised, can't think / I know you're watching / And I see t
    by FreeStyleBlue 21 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 9:22 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Bleeding Tears
    There are no easy ways to say good-bye / whether it is throw the divorce or you die / / I sat alone last night with blood shot eyes / hol
    by crystallynnbradford 17 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 25 1:12 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Blank Look
    Your eyes hold secrets, / feeling so dark and tense, / but you hide them / behind a mask of faceless expression. / / Yet, behind the emoti
    by penman 27 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 26 10:22 PM 2007. In Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [19]

1 - 19 of 19
  • The Momet I gazed into your Eyes
    The moment i gazed into your eyes / I was mesmerized and lost / Your eyes took me to a place / That was full of care and love / / The mome
    by Danielle Samia 14 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 25 5:02 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Crying Love
    I hate the way really old people's eyes / Start watering at the slightest thing. / It makes me feel so helpless / When there's nothing I can do / Because, as much as I would desire to know
    by MarriedToTheDevil 35 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 25 1:04 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Thoughts, Crying, Angst, Pain, Personal, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • lust at first sight.
    I sat in the back of the room / silently writing / poetry of real gloom / / battered and bruised / I felt alone / my heart had been brutally abused / / The sound of the door slamming
    by LeaPan 55 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 25 1:41 PM 2007. In love, sad, thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Crying Love
    I chose the topic "Crying Love" for my poem. Hope you enjoy it!!
    by MahoganyFlow 20 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 2:44 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Emptiness
    You will know them from their eyes / Full of more reality than most will ever hold / Far away and filled with painful memories, / Their eye
    by FelineMuse 10 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 25 5:25 PM 2007. In Abuse, Pain, Sad.
    • Commented on by judge.
  • "Mom"
    /                 "BROTHERS" / Brothers are supposed to stick together / I've always heard blood is thicker than water / Fuck i'd still do life for my brother / But the punk
    by whitecities 26 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 25 11:14 PM 2007. In my life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Eyes
    Hiden away are her emotions / locked behind the mask she wears / / her eyes give no hint to the pain and fear / but if you look close you
    by Maybe Anastasia 12 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 26 3:35 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • [ try not to look deep inside his eyes ]
    try not to look deep inside his eyes / his glare would freeze you and burn you / his fists, dripping with black blood / he lays in his bone
    by Domine Pestilentia 22 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 26 5:51 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Baby Blues
    Those baby blues / I fell in love / With out a chance / I lost my life / All because those baby blues / / Those baby blues / Had me stuc
    by StegsGirl 48 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 26 10:15 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lost
    A thousand soulful eyes in a sad, sunken face. / A desperate plight in this lost forsaken place. / My dreams are haunted by thier unmet nee
    by Tamera 24 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 12:32 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Blank dried up eyes
    As she watches the crowd walk by / Not suprised as the push and shove their way through / Ignoring the bruises and cuts / That she hides /
    by Hells Bells 37 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 7:35 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Breakup
    / This one is going to hurt / oh, breakups were nothing new / these feelings were new. /The woman he could not resist; / one that
    by Peteskid 39 lines, 6 comments, on May 8 9:56 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The first glimpse
    when i was strolling on the walk ways of green meadows / astonishingly I came across you and found you in the rose garden / / Unable to pluck a white rose flower from its plant / you cried aloud with afear of being s
    by Purush 10 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 7:47 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Domine Pestilentia
    April 26, 2007
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    Requesting a picture =]


  • crystallynnbradford
    May 9, 2007
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    this was a really interesting contest and it got a lot of attention


  • Never Fall in Love
    May 13, 2007
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    *looks at contest page*

    *stares for a very long time*

    *understanding reaches my throat*

    *JUMPS ALL OVER THE PLACE*

    LOL, I so cannot believe this ... I got gold?
    Oh thank you thank you THANK YOU

    I was definitely not expecting this
    Just thank you