A song can be inspirational, thought provoking, and highly catchy. What I want to see in this contest in a highly powerful and thought provoking song. All you have to do is simply write out a poem in song format. If you are still to thick to understand what I am looking for, I have a poem I wrote that matches what I want in my profile called, "Freedom of Choice" I want to see something along the lines of that.
I want to feel emotions, I want to feel stirred by your words, I want little shivers down my spine as I read it and I actually want to be so amazed by your poem that I show it to other people.
My first contest bombed so I am hoping this will go better.
No StIcKy CaPs
No Erotica
A song, not a 20 page long ass Sonnet
Once again a song, not a cute little riddle
Songs have chorus lines, a good rhythm, good rhymes, and don't take super long to read. Yes I have seen some that I don't, but I don't listen to them. Take that as a hint as to what will happen if these rules aren't followed
I want to feel emotions, I want to feel stirred by your words, I want little shivers down my spine as I read it and I actually want to be so amazed by your poem that I show it to other people.
My first contest bombed so I am hoping this will go better.
No StIcKy CaPs
No Erotica
A song, not a 20 page long ass Sonnet
Once again a song, not a cute little riddle
Songs have chorus lines, a good rhythm, good rhymes, and don't take super long to read. Yes I have seen some that I don't, but I don't listen to them. Take that as a hint as to what will happen if these rules aren't followed
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 10, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: I felt that many of the entries did not match what I was looking for and I couldn't find a poem that i liked enough to add to the finals list. I finally had to have a friend look over them all as well. We each looked at all the poems around 3x each and decided on this order.
I chose the gold and silver, and Celestrial chose the bronze winner.
I asked for inspirational songs that changed the way I view things, many simply wrote about their love life which really wasn't what I was going for. I however do thank everyone for their entries and for a far better contest than my last one.
Enjoy!
Contest Winners
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So point a boney finger
From the silence of your eyesby Violet Moodswing 72 lines, 19 comments, on Feb 2 8:31 AM 2007. In Society, Lyrics
Gold trophy winner
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VERSE ONE
I thought I was getting something good:by thankful4theSuNsEt 55 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 22 3:10 PM 2007. In Lyrics, break-up, life, title inspired
Silver trophy winner
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I'll let the words in
and get the word out...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [20]
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I could stay all night
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I hope it's obvious.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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\Written in the rain
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by blood tourniquet 40 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 9 2:22 PM 2005. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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With these souls that I have bought
I intend to sell my souls for the freedom
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Years...
Spent hoping i could change,by BlackenedWhiteRose 35 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 21 4:36 AM 2007. In Personal• Viewed by judge. -
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Just a Dusty Old Rose
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You bit your lip open / just to see what it's like / to kiss your insides / / So now you know / your blood runs cold / and just as deep /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You There in the Darkness
By Robyn Dunsdonby Robbi 30 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 11 3:20 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Get it on / Don’t slit it on / We’ve been gone / It won’t be long / Come along / We belong / / Who you gonna be (chorus melody) / Before this glee / Watcha gonna do / Ambiance comes for you /• Viewed by judge.
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The gardenar stood at the garden gate,
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Verse 1: / You were sleeping by day, / And a drunk by night. / You were a part of my life, / Just get out of my sight. / Chorus: / Leave me alone, / Leave me alone. / We're not friends,by FatherlessLovely 26 lines, 1 comment, on May 4 9:21 PM 2007. In Personal, Other, Childrens, Lyrics• Viewed by judge.
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Verse 1 / I am lost without you / I need you here with me / You are the one who gets me through / / Verse 2 / I know you'll never let me go / And I have fallen in love with you / With you / / Chorus /by RevHead 17 lines, 8 comments, on May 5 1:10 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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hello
thise are all very great poems keep up the great work!!!!.
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CONGRATS TO ALL
Keep rocking;
Pretty.
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