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Murder

Give me a poem that talks about murder. Let it be dark, mysterious, and evil. I want to see a strong ending too. Put passion into it. This is the first contest that I post, and I hope to see some good writes.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 3, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 350
  • Final notes:
    This was my first contest, and I saw some really great writes. My next one will be more strict!!!! Thanks for entering everyone!!!!!!!!!!

Contest Winners

  1. D R E S S .to. ----->{kill}
    Good morning, it's [me] / His face looks so beautiful in the light / Daddy told me to l e a v e / but my bursting heart wanted [MORE] / /
    by LucyLightning 73 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 19 10:51 PM 2007. In Dirty Pretty, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Angst
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. It matches her lipstick
    by Floorboards 77 lines, 123 comments, on Aug 5 12:59 PM 2006. In Adult, Love, Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Something Evil
    evil, Evil, EVILLLLLLLLLLL!!!1 This poem screams EVILLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!
    by SilverMoonFeathers 58 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 12 7:45 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Dark, Fantasy
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2861566, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. A Vision Of A Massacre
    I walk the dusty floorboards-
    My grandfather's old estate,
    by ObsidianEntity 128 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 2:17 PM 2007. In Dark, Murder
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Somnambulant will be my poetry
    Unfortunately, he had nothing to say.
    And it was on that day, that he opened the window,
    by David Berry 31 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 23 11:35 PM 2007. In sad, pain, personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2547788, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. Dark forest
    A Place In our world in our minds
    There a place that people go to but some never return from this place
    by Dark hunter 769 11 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 16 1:46 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Why I Cut
    by bigbird89 25 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 9 2:10 PM 2007. In Abuse, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. You
    My blood runs cold
    at the thought of you.
    by wynnie 24 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 13 1:59 AM 2005. In Other, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2610718, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  12. Seeing Red
    And blood spills forth from the volatile chasms of the eyes
    Encasing all the world in a sheathe of thick, furious red.
    by Minstrel Knight 37 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 19 12:40 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Was it Murder?
    A river of crimson on pebbled walk
    A flower head lying without a stalk
    by Sabindi 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 12 12:40 AM 2006. In Love, Humor, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2845335, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  15. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2276593, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  16. [ Today I bought a new gun ]
    Today I bought a new gun
    and a bullet yes just one
    by J-Lee18m 28 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 12 5:14 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  17. What Happend????
    There's blood on the walls
    The smell of death in the air
    by DepressedAngel 17 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 18 4:12 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  18. Blood Red Sunset
    Too early to go home just yet,
    she takes another path.
    by Angierie 59 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 19 5:23 PM 2007. In Abuse, Rape, Murder
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  19. My Hell, Your Fate
    Oh no my sweet
    You won't be leaving soon
    by Trixie08 42 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 16 5:32 PM 2006. In Dark, Angst, Death, Murder
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  20. Joanna
    by Vera Rich 49 lines, 17 comments, on Jan 6 6:18 AM 2006. In Humor
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  21. Brutal Blood
    You fight / At night / Awake / To take / Their life / A knife / / To cut / Their gut / They bleed / Indeed / Their blood / A flood / / / A thrill / To kill / Some one / For fun / Their
    by Luciferschild 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 4:32 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • HerbalGoat
    April 20, 2007
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    Not the brightest of subjects, considering all that has been happening lately, at least in the U.S., but this contest seems promisable. Good luck with it.


  • Floorboards
    May 3, 2007
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    thank you very much indeed for the trophy, much appreciated!


    • Blossom
      May 4, 2007
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      No, thank you for writing such an awesome poem!!! Great job!


  • LucyLightning
    May 3, 2007
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    I'm really excited!!!!

    • Blossom
      May 4, 2007
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      You should be. I loved it! I loved the form it took!!

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