Rules are simple.
1. Your entry must be two original lines (or two sentences, depending on the structure you choose).
2. Use spell-checker.
3. No sticky caps or internet lingo.
It can be happy, sad, meaningful, pointless, thoughtful, silly, etc.
Any questions? Just ask me, and I would be more than happy to help out.
1. Your entry must be two original lines (or two sentences, depending on the structure you choose).
2. Use spell-checker.
3. No sticky caps or internet lingo.
It can be happy, sad, meaningful, pointless, thoughtful, silly, etc.
Any questions? Just ask me, and I would be more than happy to help out.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 19, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 6 people
- Final notes: I am sorry this took so long to finish. I made the mistake of pairing this contest with finals time. I hope you all forgive me because I did comment on every single one of your entries and ended up including honorable mentions in my contest. Thank you all for sharing your two-liners, and I hope you will enter one of my future contests.
-BabyBear
Contest Winners
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Give time to let my thoughts ferment
get drunk on that sweet wine of enlightenment• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by -Ink Artist- 12 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 27 9:07 AM 2007. In Self, Personal, Sadness, Thoughts, Contemporary
Bronze trophy winner
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Time.
It never ends,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
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Everything starts with a first,
except time, which starts with a second.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I dont always know where i stand
all i know, is that i still can• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2913102, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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don't shut your door to love
it'll just find a window!by RhiannonMari 1 lines, 18 comments, on Apr 17 2:29 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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by Flying-Flamingo13 1 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 2:45 PM 2007. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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We have lost what remained of our innocence for the cost
of one broken heart, and a box of bulletsby E A Collins 1 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 2:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I turn on the news and see
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All i will say is i'm sorry,
and hope it will be enough.by Dirty and Broken 2 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 3:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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A twinkle in his bright blue eyes,
continued on till it sparked a fire in his heart.by WhollySurrendered 1 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 4:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Hands slip away from the past, irreversibly
The end descends as it always has, inevitablyby blindingblur 1 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 4:30 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Take comfort in words so loving and dear
Cherish the ones you hold so nearby Twins 4 me 1 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 17 4:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
You are a warrior with a broken sword
living on a wish to die.by ZzBrokenHopezZ 1 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 17 4:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
short but cute!...very shortby Jadegreentiger 2 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 17 5:50 PM 2007. In Weird, Other, Lost in thought, Freewrite• Viewed by judge.
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I found a penny on the ground,
and placed it with the rest.by Third Orbit Mars 1 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 17 6:10 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
blowing by the wind, following the ivory path of the stars
keep yourself together, we may not catch you this timeby Domine Pestilentia 1 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 6:30 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
My brain, isnt that big, or so u say
but apparently my skull is thick, on most days• Commented on by judge. -
You cast me out of your home
But you still loved meby whatever girl 1 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 7:15 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
We were in love but you're a heartbreaker / Guess I knew it'd be tough to fall for a heartbreakerby lovelight05 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 10:50 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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There goes the tea / and civilization along with it.• Commented on by judge.
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Life,Death / and hell in between.by Dark Whispers 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 4:15 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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According to me......• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by TragicallyInspired 1 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 27 10:42 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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My wrist bleeds from pain / My heart bleeds for love• Commented on by judge.
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by sharkofdhoom 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 8:19 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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you could learn everything or nothing in from the world
and i would still love you, just because you areby please dont believe 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 9:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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Just two lines is not just two lines.
Certain and heartfelt each line is.by AriesKing1 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 11:16 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
by Alleksa Jan 2 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 29 12:21 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She whored hells horizon to rise into my unholy heart.
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One cannot distinguish wrong from right
When one the world in black and white.by Minstrel Knight 1 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 20 2:28 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
AS YOU LIE ASLEEP
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A Thoracotomy is a procedure where the chest is cut open (i.e., open heart surgery) and is closed with staples.by Lifecycler 3 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 25 10:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Standing on the edge, stepping out into thin air / She wanted to know what it felt like to flyby My Nemesis 1 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 6:19 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by Twinstar 2 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 28 1:14 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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We all welcome our healthy baby boy, / First son, who will bring us so much joy.by Dee23 1 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 29 10:29 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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People can take advantage of someone and not realize what they really mean to them until they're gone. A terribly sad mistake for some...by PoetryDove 2 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 29 8:32 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Every taste and good sensation - Tainted / Spinning and dissolving...Oh look, She's gone away.by Cherry.Cyanide 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 3:52 AM 2007. In fantasy• Commented on by judge.
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She left rapidly, like the sun after 7:55 p.m. / Her memory, however, sits and visits like the fog.• Commented on by judge.
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satin drapes enfold the night and hide us from our current plight / we breath not air, but viscous dark, its vicious whip, leaving it's sullen mark / / / /by anguish 2 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 12:23 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Give me your hand and close your eyes. / Then part your lips and give our love a try.by asimplepoeticmind 1 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 30 3:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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cute idea! *smiles* it's so amazing what one can do and express with simply two lines! great contest!
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Can we enter more than once?
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nope... just one. pick your best
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thank you very much for the gold!
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Thank you for the honorable winner! Quite an ego boost!
See if I can top this one...

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Thanks for the Bronze!
It is most appreciated. Congrats to all the winners!
~Lori
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