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Tears

Being the emotional roller coaster that I am, I love sinking into something that is incredibly deep and beautiful. In this contest the idea is simple. Hit me with something so emotional it makes me cry. I'm going to allow pre-writes for SOME options, in the hope of getting something really good, but brownie points to fresh-writes =]

Not many rules but:

1. Max of three entries.

2. Play nice, some of these topics are incredibly sensitive.

3. I'm not sure how erotica would fit into this contest, so none of that please.

4. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Option stated in the authors box.

5. Swearing is OK if appropriate.

6. Although some fictional poems are actually beautiful, I want REAL emotions here. If it didn't happen to you, please don't submit it.

7. Pre-writes for each option are allowed unless otherwise stated. Ignoring this rule will result in DQing.


And your options are -


♥ Loss of someone close. I don't mean 'Oh, me and my b/f split up', I mean loosing a parent, friend, child or lover to death, sudden or expected. Please tell me who you've lost in the option box.

♥ NO PRE-WRITES FOR THIS OPTION Write about the suffering behind an eating disorder, or addiction to cutting/some other form of self harm. I do NOT want 'The blade slices up my flesh' or 'Bones pushing past skin'. I want how you FEEL. Talk abut the shame, the struggle, not the acts.

♥ Adoption. Just, anything. From the child's, or parent's point of view. This would mean a lot to me if you could enter under this option.

♥ Happy tears! Talk to me about someone you love, and why they make you want to cry with joy. Anything beautiful and romantic. No tragic love tales here please.

♥ NO PRE-WRITES FOR THIS OPTION Write about the suffering behind rape, domestic violence, child abuse and any other form of abusive behavior. Again, I do not want a simple narrative of what happened, please tell me how it's left you feeling.

Thankyou to all who enter under the given rules. I will not DQ without explaining my actions, so if you feel it is unfair please just talk to me, and do not be offended. I will allow re-entry of poems if they have been reworked or replaced.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 17, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Oh
    My
    Gosh

    You guys!! These were all so so moving, and judging was so difficult! I had so many amazing entries I had to start being really mean when it came to putting people on the finalist lists. The poems about adoption and loss of love were the ones that hit hardest for me, but thankyou to all who entered, whatever option. Please do not be offended if you did not make the top 3, I really meant what I said on each comment, and I felt horrble not awarding all of them! Please, take your time to read the winners. They really are incredible.

    All the best to you all, and thankyou so much.

    Frankie xXx

Contest Winners

  1. It’s times like this
    Times when I can’t stop
    by willowprincess 157 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 13 10:55 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Life, Longing, Dedication
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Embarking on parenthood,
    so much to explore,
    by -Ink Artist- 48 lines, 27 comments, on Nov 9 8:15 AM 2006. In Personal, Love, Childrens
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Poem about Abortion, used for my RE homework, made my teacher cry, can't quite think why! Determined to get a Gold trophy for this in a con
    by CatherineL 65 lines, 42 comments, on Mar 15 5:14 PM 2007. In Sad, Religion, Pain, Love, Family, Thoughts, Death, Loss, Message
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. And though I cannot remember
    Her own little heartbeat
    by EatYourSunlight 24 lines, 24 comments, on Nov 29 8:27 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Can i have just one more smile
    mabye it will stay for a while
    by Behind-blue-eyes 22 lines, 7 comments, on May 17 8:33 AM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Little Joanne, Little Joanne,
    You looked an angel asleep in your pram.
    by williamstown 23 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 1 2:17 AM 2006. In Sad, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by acrackedmirror 58 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 20 5:20 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by Freed by Mercy 30 lines, 30 comments, on Mar 31 1:18 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Lyrics, Hope, Love, Sad, Family, Death, Goodbye
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2286119, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  10. Dark and cloudy was the day,
    not a ray of sunlight could be found.
    by MoonSoldierS 40 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 17 2:37 PM 2007. In Contest, Personal, Love, Sad, Sadness, Lost love, Loss, Goodbyes
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Emotional trauma hiding inside
    Behind past regressions
    by shtrdglassheart 57 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 17 12:39 PM 2007. In anerexia, Abuse, My life, Contest, Depression, Personal., Message
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2863234, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • denrob
    April 17, 2007
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    I lost my mom 15-days after diagnosis of small cell cancer.


  • Freakish-Lizzie
    April 17, 2007
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    these are some incredibly beautiful ideas for a contest, I hope all goes well.
    xx


    • bigXfatXemo
      April 17, 2007
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      Thanks!

      I've had some incredible entries, I'm beginning to think I should add some more HMs!
      Frankie xXx


  • EMOtionalDARKness17
    April 17, 2007
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    This is a great was for a contest like some ppl would of nvr be able to enter poem like they can in this contest and i think that this contest will bring out ppl's best work.

    • bigXfatXemo
      April 17, 2007
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      Thankyou =]

      Yeah, I've had some amazing pieces through, honestly so many could be added to the finalist list I'm having to be so mean to not add some of them. Also only started this today and it looks like it will be closing so soon. Thanks for the input =]
      Frankie xXx


  • autumns rising
    April 17, 2007
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    I chose the adoption choice, i know the feeling since I am adopted.

    • bigXfatXemo
      April 17, 2007
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      Thankyou, what was the name of your poem? Who has written what is hidden from me, so I can't match the option to the writing. Thankyou for entering though, it;s a topic very close to my heart.
      Frankie xXx


  • -Ink Artist-
    April 18, 2007
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    Thanks for the Silver!

    Much appreciated. Congrats to the other winners!

    ~Lori

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