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rythm upon a line

okay so this is my second contest, this time i offer options and these options must be carried out with a rythme pattern of your choice.

poems about society

poems about saving someone from society

GOOD poems about the war

poems about the emptiness that our careless society has left each and everyone of us in

or a poem about the perfect society
the challenge in this is

you can't you the word perfect
and it can't be about people who all get along because that society would suck ass,

ready
set
go.

i should be able to tell the options by the poem, if i can't i might just DQ you or if i think it's good i will ask, if your combining options let me know.

people who choose the harder option will be most likely to win. i will comment on every entry even if i DQ it.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 22, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 60, Bronze: 40, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Congrats to all:


    A Letter
    by sewasham

    Warriors in the Sky.
    by Bazza

    Society 2
    by Poetesse

    Honorable Mentions:

    Why Us
    by Autodidact

    A search for morality
    by Shadows-stars

Contest Winners

  1. Warriors in the Sky.
    by Bazza 62 lines, 20 comments, on Nov 7 5:10 PM 2006. In Spiritual
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Society 2
    by elemental angel 20 lines, 26 comments, on Mar 27 12:29 PM 2006. In Society
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Why Us
    Sending us to war just to die
    For a country that has no alibi
    by Autodidact 12 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 15 6:24 PM 2007. In Pain, Sadness, Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. A search for morality
    Construction, production, the world a man destroys,
    Destruction. Little boys and their deadly toys.
    by th3sl4y3r 21 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 1 2:06 PM 2007. In life, society, thoughts, drugs
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [15]

1 - 15 of 15
  • Grave Robbers
    12 hours past noon.
    Under the deep white moon.
    by Trueheartforlife 11 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 7 5:30 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Nympholepsy
    Once there was a jungle
    by malkinpuss 17 lines, 40 comments, on Sep 17 8:22 PM 2004. In Spiritual, Society, Contemporary
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The path of poppies red
    I walked the path of poppies red
    by JustADutchie 28 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 28 5:40 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • DOMESTICATED
    Contemplating the ways of the democrat
    I tried to remember when I was like that
    by deercatcher 37 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 13 10:00 PM 2005. In Society, Humor
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The World's Sorrow
    Can you imagine the sorrow in the world?!?!
    While we are snugged warm, others are freezing cold.
    by Ashaq 46 lines, 8 comments, on May 27 11:42 AM 2006. In Society
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Ziggy the Bagman
    I don't pretent to understand what drives a man to this,
    Does he know and does he care that something seems amiss?
    by eamarti 34 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 22 10:06 PM 2006. In Sad, Society, Hope
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Celebration
    Our American boys are going to sandy places / and sacraficing lives for other races. / Exchanging Nintendos for weapons of war / causing d
    by Tamera 27 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 28 12:29 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Dying For Peace
    We are wishing, hoping, dreaming
    by serious clown 13 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 10 6:20 AM 2006. In Society
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Flying High
    Let the guns brave to fall silent / / Let the doves as ambassadors of peace have sturdy wings / / Let all the war theories slip into obli
    by Purush 11 lines, on Apr 28 9:10 AM 2007. In Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge.
  • 360 Degree View
    Some people go too far, they eat too much roll appetizer
    You can see it in the president, see it in his advisers
    by DFind 138 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 28 6:30 PM 2005. In Beat
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The Lady
    The Star Spangled Banner, the girl next door,
    Uncle Sam and Mom’s apple pie.
    by Beret55 22 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 18 3:55 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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  • cherche -d -ame
    April 28, 2007
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    do you mean rhythm or rhyme? I am a bit confused
    reenie


  • sewasham gold member
    May 22, 2007
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    Thank you for the gold trophy and for hosting a great contest. Congratulations to the other winners. Take care and Have fun. Steve


  • Mythtress
    May 22, 2007
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    congratulations to the winners...