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Alone.....Prewrites allowed

so lately i've been well... alone and i want to know im not the only one.

give me a poem that shows the meaning of lonely

the sadness

the pain

and what it's like to be in a crowded room and still feel alone

i want bf/gf leaving crying tears broken hearts missing people i want it all!!!!

i want to see the pain when i read it



in the author comment splease state whether or not i can put this on my myspace if its really good then i usually put them on there thx

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 17, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 45, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Congrats to all...

    large as lonely
    by DancingRed


    Silence of the Years
    by PerfectImperfection

    Sadistic Symphony
    by NickBlaze

    Honorable Mention:

    Gone Away
    by Daddygirl530

Contest Winners

  1. large as lonely
    by DancingRed 16 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 12 11:20 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Sad, Angst, Free verse, Contest, Short
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Sadistic Symphony
    The rain bore no mercy to the traveler,
    a downpour that filled over the rivers,
    by NickBlaze 74 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 6 4:22 PM 2006. In Nature, Love, Spiritual, Mysterious?
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Gone Away
    It was like we were conjoined twins
    Through heart, Through spirit we always win
    by Daddygirl530 13 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 15 11:44 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Darkness
    No one sees the tears that fall from my eyes
    or feels the burning pain as my heart slowly dies
    by Twilight4Eternity 18 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 11 11:19 PM 2007. In Dark, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [93]

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  • [ You're never really here ] (edited)
    You're never really here
    You're always in some foreign land
    by halapalu 31 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 27 4:45 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Goodbye
    by T-106 77 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 9:32 PM 2006. In Personal, Other, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • So long.
    You never really said goodbye as you were walking out the door.
    And suddenly I couldn't take it anymore.
    by ashthefantastic 16 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 10 9:40 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Cold shades of gray
    These dark feelings drown me in thoughts of what could've been.
    Why i couldn't amount up to the person you wanted me to be.
    by without the night 11 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 6 10:56 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Swallowed
    The silence
    visiting like a haunting banshee
    by penman 25 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 10 9:56 PM 2007. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A lost shadow
    I am the waiting shadow,
    standing here alone in my dreams,
    by th3sl4y3r 24 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 10 10:30 PM 2007. In life, alone
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Loneliness
    It's dawn again,here comes the light
    to end another sleepless night
    by serious clown 18 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 23 1:51 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Wish You Were Here
    Now November and you were still delayed
    Meant I travelled alone on leave, or not at all,
    by williamstown 34 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 25 10:26 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Empty nights
    Frozen in night’s silent chill
    Eyes wide open, I sift aimlessly through sleeplessness
    by Moonlit-Reveries 29 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 14 7:04 AM 2007. In sad, loss, loneliness, pain, personal, love, heartbreak, lost love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • ~Loves echos...
    by Nature Song 25 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 10 5:16 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Broken
    More broken than anyone can see
    Looking out from blank eyes, you'll find me
    by Kiru7 26 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 10 6:50 PM 2007. In Pain, Heartbreak, Sad, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • [ Alone, while the world rushes by. ]
    My tongue laden with the weight of
    my loneliness. I long to yell to
    be heard to be acknowledged.
    by Aphoticbeauty 27 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 11 3:05 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Another Year
    A Birthday had come round the corner once more,
    Life was just passing him by,
    by urehooked 22 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 9 4:38 AM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Lonely little girl
    verse one-
    The days grow colder
    by lovelight05 35 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 15 10:01 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Alone
    I walk into this place
    And I see all the mothers and daughters shopping together
    by StegsGirl 20 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 21 8:52 PM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Feelings Fray
    I remember the day
    he pulled me close
    by Danna Hobart 21 lines, 20 comments, on Aug 3 4:49 PM 2003. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • My face doesn't fit.
    Sitting smokin' fags-
    at a nightclub in the town;
    by Floorboards 65 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 21 11:11 AM 2006. In Society, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • "O" to Othello
    Follow your heart in everything.
    Don't let yourself be decieved
    by Humminbird 36 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 5 11:08 PM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Every Tear Tells A Story
    You told me you didn’t love me
    You told me you didn’t care
    by Tempa Lee 31 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 27 8:26 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Did They Matter
    Threw me in the background
    you were never there,
    by Hadji Murad 78 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 11 2:56 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Empty
    This is a poem I wrote when I was cutting!
    by XXStOlEn-HaLoXx 18 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 15 1:14 PM 2006. In dark, cutting, suicide, Death, Sadness
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • phyco
    a lost part of my life 4 her. and she jus fucked it up
    by wickedclown 53 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 25 12:32 PM 2005. In Other
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Bulimia
    Her hair flowed like silk through the midnight breeze,
    Faint sounds of whispers followed above the trees.
    by McrSAVEDmyLIFE 26 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 31 5:18 PM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Contagious Emotions
    If your friends become monsters, it's their problem.
    When you miss their company, it's your problem.
    by AutumnsFlame 33 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 14 6:31 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Alone.
    I feel alone around you.
    I can scream and you won't even move.
    by ashthefantastic 17 lines, on Apr 11 6:09 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • The Preference of Flowers Over Salt
    A monsoon of passion,
    flooding into sorrow
    by MotherMachineGunn 20 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 12 4:01 AM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • leaving me alone
    Your leaving me alone to fight my own wars
    its not fair I have never been alone
    by joleahe 23 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 2 5:48 PM 2007. In Love, Dark, Sad, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Goodbye
    by Dragon of Tao 5 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 14 9:48 AM 2006
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • [ goddamit just go and don't look back ]
    an old poem i found in a book from my tweaker days
    nothing to do with current times but it was def one of the darkest parts of my life
    by lust in a grenade 20 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 13 12:43 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Not Even You
    You ask me if there's someone else,
    Someone to take your place.
    by Kathyarin 15 lines, on Apr 17 8:07 PM 2007
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  • Why?
    I try to move on now
    for I know that I must
    by God of Thunder 41 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 1 2:30 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Goodbye
    How I discovered you I have no clue,
    But a part of me was missing and I found it in you
    by TrinityMBS 38 lines, 41 comments, on Dec 6 10:21 PM 2003. In Personal, Love, Angst
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The Pain Inside
    the feeling of being lost is setting in,
    The pain inside hurts so bad,
    by RedNeck 20 27 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 26 9:13 AM 2006. In Hope
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  • darkness
    They were my world, my everything.
    I feel lost without them.
    by wynnie 17 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 10 6:09 PM 2005. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Thrown Away
    Do you ever really know someone?
    We think we do but sadly sometimes we don't
    by DolphinLass 47 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 7 12:26 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Absinthe Makes the Heart Grow Fonder
    Our only hope of salvation lays crushed,
    betrayed by words of love now hushed!
    by Vae Victis 41 lines, 22 comments, on Nov 14 6:33 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Heart Break
    Lost in my Sorrow,
    With No Love left,
    Into A dark void where I am Falling.
    by Shadow Seraphim 38 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 12 3:20 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Pain, Sadness
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The Best Conversation [You Never Had]
    i just wanted to let you know how black the sky is at two am
    the clouds are covering the stars, and the moon forgot how to shine
    by moonjava 39 lines, on Apr 23 7:47 PM 2007. In Life, Lyrics
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  • Looking For You In My Dreams
    If the glistening brookrefused the face that sought its twin,or chances of the sungreeting another dawn w
    by Carly Pop 20 lines, 10 comments, on May 16 10:33 PM 2006. In Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • a single tear
    a single tear rolls down her cheek
    her black hair blocking her puffy eyes
    by Evil-Gurl08 13 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 11 10:02 AM 2007. In sad, pain
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  • The untold chapter in the book of love
    Upon looking in her eyes,
    My heart is torn open and filled with acid and slowly dies.
    by JacobMann 34 lines, on Apr 22 6:45 AM 2007. In Love, Pain
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Because of Me I Am Lonely
    I’m left alone, all alone
    I put myself in this dilemma
    by oh willoughby 27 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 7 4:50 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Solitude
    Sometimes I wonder
    If I could live in bliss
    by MJ Donnelly 12 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 14 11:55 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Dreaming of love in the midnight.
    by Floorboards 24 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 23 1:44 PM 2006. In Other, Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I am alone once more
    A broken heart
    That is what i have
    by You Foolish MUGGLE 27 lines, on Apr 23 10:04 PM 2007
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  • Get To Me
    I wish you were here with me,
    as I sit alone.
    by OnlyInMyDreams 26 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 13 4:48 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Other, Sad, Life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • To Emptiness
    To wake into an empty morning
    an empty sun
    by Vinny 31 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 3 11:15 PM 2006. In Personal, Other, Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • December Cells
    The stillness within my soul is deafening

    Here in my tomb
    by kaibab 89 lines, 32 comments, on Feb 28 6:07 AM 2006. In Angst
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The Sound of My Heart Breaking
    Ominous and pleasing sounds emanate all around.
    Listen intently, they can easily be found.
    by PureCountry 19 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 10 5:21 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • couldn't help
    Just a wizened, weathered mobile bag of rags
    Shuffling, stumbling along the cold, lifeless stone
    by Satans Advocate 41 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 2 7:16 AM 2006. In Dark
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  • one grey day
    I sit in the corner all alone,
    My blue eyes staring set just like stone,
    by hungermuncher 21 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 6 4:42 PM 2006. In Dark, Hope
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Missing Me
    Wind howls in the night,
    Maybe someday you’ll have woke up,
    by Shadow Seraphim 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 8:30 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Humor
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Stupid Questions
    I am silent.
    why?
    by sherbear 26 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 23 7:09 PM 2007. In Love, Pain
    • Viewed by judge.
  • inside
    Everything important is gone.
    I'm dead inside.
    by wynnie 12 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 10 3:26 PM 2005. In Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Everybody Leaves
    The sum of my life’s experiences
    Has taught me that
    by dance11 63 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 28 4:35 PM 2006. In Sad, Angst
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • ~*~*~Long, Cold, And Lonely Roads~*~*~
    As I look back in time
    I see so much more
    by anguish 28 lines, on Oct 6 2:50 PM 2005. In Personal, Dark, Angst
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  • blackened death
    chained up in the room of no return
    for sunlight and blood is all i yearn
    by Gasp 74 lines, 33 comments, on Feb 15 12:03 PM 2007
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  • Solitary
    The truth fights to escape my lips.
    So much joy is filled with in me ;
    by Dark Whispers 8 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 23 4:02 AM 2007. In sad, joy
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • To my loving Father
    My father was the greatest man alive / he would help anyone no matter the time / I miss him so much that I could cry / because he was taken away / before my eyes / the last time I saw him / he was in a grave
    by kyo kurai kori 32 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 31 5:47 PM 2007. In miss, dad, love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Alone
    Except for the few glimmers of dying sunlight,
    I was alone in this world. Alone and tired.
    by Know1 27 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 11 10:19 PM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Longing, Sadness, Goodbyes
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Beautifully Broken
    And when I break
    You won't care
    by JulietteArielle 55 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 21 8:53 PM 2007. In Angst, Love, Pain, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The Porcelain Doll
    The Porcelain Doll
    The porcelain doll
    by JulietteArielle 27 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 10 8:03 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Sad, Emo
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • The One
    I’m still waiting…………..
    Holding my breath…………………………. (gulp)
    by dance11 49 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 29 1:15 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Angst, My life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Suicidal Thoughts
    Scars and marks of memories
    used and abused, taken and forgotten
    by Wulfareika 16 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 12 8:34 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Behind the Looking Glass
    All that ever was is gone
    And you deserve this place.
    by Jai Guru Deva 34 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 11 3:11 PM 2007. In Life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Sailboat
    I'm a lonely sailboat in the endless oceanic maze
    The bittersweet winds had chapped my masts
    by Alleksa Jan 18 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 8 3:59 AM 2006. In Hope
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Hoarse Flies
    by Noledge 0 lines, on Jan 23 3:49 PM 2007. In NOLEDGE
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Aftermath
    Red rash upon her body
    br
    by Darker-star 16 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 29 3:43 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • [ ]
    I'm gonna run away from you
    you will never know why
    by onlyinmyheart 62 lines, on Apr 13 12:25 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark
    • Viewed by judge.
  • [unawoken]
    by WhenWillsCollide 29 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 31 3:11 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Come Back!!
    Come Back!!
    Is it wrong that I boil with rage
    by shadow-of-the-sun 49 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 15 8:08 AM 2006. In Sad, Love, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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  • LoveNeverDies
    April 10, 2007
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    RULES

    im very big on reading the rules so please please read them so i dont have to delete your entry i have already deleted 2 and the contest has been open for maybe 10 minutes


  • Narcissus In Chains silver member
    April 10, 2007
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    Are we allowed to enter more than one poem?


  • Aphoticbeauty
    April 11, 2007
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    Myspace

    I don't mind if you use mine on Myspace if you feel it is good enough. But please give credit if you do..I'm sure you will anyway.. You know standard paranoia! lol Thank you for hosting! Have an awesome day!


  • animated lies
    April 13, 2007
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    Why is the Bronze worth less than HM?


  • shadow-of-the-sun
    April 17, 2007
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    You can use mine if you want


  • DancingRed
    May 18, 2007
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    Thanks ever so much for gold!
    If you happen to put my piece on myspace can you send me the link so I can take a peek? Thanks.
    Many congrats to the other winners also.


  • PerfectImperfection
    May 19, 2007
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    Congrats to ALL! Thank you so much for the silver - I am honored!

    Wendy

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