I want you to write about your depression, I dont' mean, the, being depressed for a few days, I mean full on months on end sadness, emptyness. or a suicide atempt. how you plan, how you might have tried, faild, how it has changed you. or how someone has hurt you physically, like a relvative, or friend. mental or physical. even if it was a rape. I want to hear about a lost lvoe, how he or she hurt you, stomped on your heart, tore it to pieces. made shame to you. I want to know how you would stay up late nights with your sharp object, how you would sneak off form class maybe to hrut yuorself. none of the hurting for attention crap, I want to cutting hurting because you wanted to relive the pain from inside.
I want to feel the pain your giving me. I want to know what it was like in your shoes. give me the pain, teh griving from you.
-Rules-
1.no sTiCkY caps
2.no prewrites
3.no bashing others poems
4.must be over 10 lines, and no skipping a line, it has to be a line with at least a word in it
5.shouldn't really be all happy, can have some happy in it I gues,s but mainly sad, angery, stuff like that.
6.use at least 3 words from teh list that follows
-hate
-hurt
-forever
-pain
-lost
-alone
-tear(s)
-blood
-sad
-away
-shame
-black
-dark(ness)
-shadow
-love
-death
-kill(ing)
-broken
I will check to see if you have the required amount of words from teh list.
7.you must comment my page and tell me what you think of your own poem. I like too see if people like tehre poems or not, it wont change how I veiw your poem. I jsut want to know what you think of your own work.
8.don't try sucking up. it's a wast of time and I'll disqualify you if you do. cause I hate suck ups.
9.try not to cuss or make it adult veiwing only, because I can not veiw your poem and therefor I will not be able to judge it. thanx!
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just a side note. just because you are a gold member and have a picture on your page doesn't mean your poem going to get better rating from me. if you have any questions however be free to email me and ask. or leave a comment on my page. have fun writing.
I want to feel the pain your giving me. I want to know what it was like in your shoes. give me the pain, teh griving from you.
-Rules-
1.no sTiCkY caps
2.no prewrites
3.no bashing others poems
4.must be over 10 lines, and no skipping a line, it has to be a line with at least a word in it
5.shouldn't really be all happy, can have some happy in it I gues,s but mainly sad, angery, stuff like that.
6.use at least 3 words from teh list that follows
-hate
-hurt
-forever
-pain
-lost
-alone
-tear(s)
-blood
-sad
-away
-shame
-black
-dark(ness)
-shadow
-love
-death
-kill(ing)
-broken
I will check to see if you have the required amount of words from teh list.
7.you must comment my page and tell me what you think of your own poem. I like too see if people like tehre poems or not, it wont change how I veiw your poem. I jsut want to know what you think of your own work.
8.don't try sucking up. it's a wast of time and I'll disqualify you if you do. cause I hate suck ups.
9.try not to cuss or make it adult veiwing only, because I can not veiw your poem and therefor I will not be able to judge it. thanx!
-no more rules-
just a side note. just because you are a gold member and have a picture on your page doesn't mean your poem going to get better rating from me. if you have any questions however be free to email me and ask. or leave a comment on my page. have fun writing.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 13, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: thank you all for entering. I loved all your poems. I wish I oculd have given all fo you a place but I couldn't. thanx for antering though. some of you could have gotten a gold/silver/bronze if you had followed all teh rules. I said you had to comment and some who I had orringinally chosen to get a place didn't so I couldn't place them cause it would be unfair to teh other who did. not that the otehrs didn't deserve it, they should at least be happy you didn't take teh 5 seconds to say I wrote such and sich poem and I like it or hate it. that easy. well. sorry not all of you won something. hope you had fun writing your poem though. thanx for helping me with an actuall contest. hope to see you next time I hold one. later!
Felix BlackHeart
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I'm falling away from the pain / the blood drips silently to the ground / my wrist lays limp upon my side / as my tears create a crying sound. / I hate my life I hate my death but what can I do? / My heartby Fallen Archangel 40 lines, 6 comments, on May 9 11:27 PM 2007. In abuse, dark, life, love, lyrics, other, pain, personal, sad, thoughts
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There's no over-coming this empty feeling within me.
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I once was a small child forgotten in a room
there was never nowhere to go, Mom had left us on our ownby whitecities 26 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 10 9:15 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Slipknot...option 2by xlilliexdiesx 38 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 10 1:33 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You were only
A fake.by SarahEatsAirplane 43 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 14 6:22 PM 2007. In personal, sad, dark, angry, missing him, fucking angry, love• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
He would touch me every night
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Chained to the wall,
While the walls are falling.
Stuck beneath concrete.by Luna Argintie 48 lines, 3 comments, on May 7 10:17 PM 2007. In Depressed, Personal., Sadness, Depression, Pain• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2943542, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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So if You knew / just what You do / to Me would You / even care a bit? / And if You knew / what You put Me through, / would You even / give a s*@%? / So if You saw / behind closed doors, / would You happen• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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I hate the way I am / The tears of pain forever in my eyes / My broken heart can't take much more / Darkness alone in my forsight / The black shadow of lonliness following me / I'm alone without your love / It cheby seasonsoflove 19 lines, 7 comments, on May 9 9:06 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Personal, Contest, Depression, Lost love, Death of my happiness• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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An empty gaze will shadow my face / my skin shall become without blush / for my existence will banish with no trace / and all of my thoughtby Xcallostxbleederx 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 9 11:44 AM 2007. In Death, My life, Depressed, Teen issues, Pain, Dark, Personal• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Waking up in the morning / Weak from nightmares / That empty the mind / There's that pounding / Once again / THUD thud thud / Thud THUD thud / My head? / Or my heart? / Either way I want it to / Just / Sby AnorexicShadow 36 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 12:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I hate you, / but you don't get it / and your selfish black heart / never will / / You hurt me / but soon you seem to forget / you ever ha• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Everyday / When I wake up / It always is the same / I don't want to get up / and out of bed / it just doesn't feel right to me / The thoughts I have won't go away / they keep me awake at night / the thoughtsby XxpooranatevkaxX 32 lines, 4 comments, on May 9 3:04 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Dark, Life, Pain, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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by Artemis Revenge 16 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 10:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Save me from my everlasting nightmare / for this thing i'm living is not fair / I've had to watch my friends and family die / I've seen eternal darkness grow in the sky. / / In this broken lonely world I will stay• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I like my write "Suicide Map". It's probably one of my best actually.
Not sure if I was to comment on the contest page or your bio page, but anyways.
Nice contest too by the way
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About "Keep an Eye Out..."
So, I wrote "Keep an Eye Out, I'll be on the Ground". I thought your contest sounded interesting and I thought that it went well with how I feel right now so I wrote it. I am pleased with how it turned out, but there was so much that I wanted to say and couldn't find the right way or something like that so that frustrated me, but other than that I am pleased with how it turned out.
I'm glad I found your contest though because I've been meaning to write something like this and this contest kind of pushed me into it. -
I wrote Hurt - to be honest I don't know what to think of it! It's a bit all over the place but then so are my thoughts and feelings on the things I wrote about. It's an honest reflection of what is in my head and it's basically just what came out when I started writing.
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Well, never mind. I entered but then I accidentally removed it from your contest so...I guess I just disqualified myself. lol. Great contest and later.
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Cage of reality
I like my poem,even though it's not the best I've written, yet it has personal significance as I am going through a hard period of time and I feel like I can't get out no matter what I do or what I say, as the only way out would be for me to die and that won't happen for a long time. -
"Suffering because of You"
this is the first time i actually liked one of my depressing poems. its not my best poem, but its ok anyway -
Razorblade Pendulum
I like my poem because it was a chance to talk about something that has affected my life. Although I've never self-mutilated, I have friends that have, and that I've helped overcome their routine. -
"Say Sorry"
I like my write "Say Sorry" although I am a little worried the title doesn't quite go with the poem. I hope you like it, because I think it's pretty good, but I do like some of my others better. -
Contimplating Someone Elses Suicide
I could vividly picture the scene as it unfolded into the words. Defintly one of my better works.
For now I think I did very well, later I may look back through it and find problems or things i could have done better on. but oh well.
Thank you very much for the oppertunity, I would not have thought to write something quite like this without the help of the contest.
--Lucian Adonis
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