write a poem (or 12) about anything dark...like ur past, emo (tell me y ur emo), ugly relationships, betrayal, ur world, u know, ANYTHING DARK!!!
DA RULEZ:
1) i honestly dont care if u use wRiTiNg LiKe ThIs...i can read, i aint blind
2) cuss all u want i dont care
3) no purchase necessary
4) it HAS TO HAS TO HAS TO HAAASSS TOOO RHYME!!! i cant STAND freewrite...AND DONT U DARE ask if i should sit!!
5) u can bash other peeps poetry just not mine and i most likely wont pick u if it aint dark and rhymes
6) dont comment meanishly on other peeps poetry...my bro stuck his poetry in a contest and another chick wuz picking on him calling him a crybaby and dude hes only ten and she wuz like 43...RAPE!! i thought that wuz stupid so i wont pick ur poem if i catch u bashing another's poetry using comments (i never said nothing about messages tho)
7) *this rule thought u were ugly and it died*
8) dont write erotic...or under adult...im only 13...i cant read that crap and i dont want to...if i havent commented on it yet its cuz its under adult and im 13 so yeah
9) DONT WRITE UNDER ABUSE I CANT READ IT!!!
10) WRITE DARK!!!
now lets get started peeps!!!
DA RULEZ:
1) i honestly dont care if u use wRiTiNg LiKe ThIs...i can read, i aint blind
2) cuss all u want i dont care
3) no purchase necessary
4) it HAS TO HAS TO HAS TO HAAASSS TOOO RHYME!!! i cant STAND freewrite...AND DONT U DARE ask if i should sit!!
5) u can bash other peeps poetry just not mine and i most likely wont pick u if it aint dark and rhymes
6) dont comment meanishly on other peeps poetry...my bro stuck his poetry in a contest and another chick wuz picking on him calling him a crybaby and dude hes only ten and she wuz like 43...RAPE!! i thought that wuz stupid so i wont pick ur poem if i catch u bashing another's poetry using comments (i never said nothing about messages tho)
7) *this rule thought u were ugly and it died*
8) dont write erotic...or under adult...im only 13...i cant read that crap and i dont want to...if i havent commented on it yet its cuz its under adult and im 13 so yeah
9) DONT WRITE UNDER ABUSE I CANT READ IT!!!
10) WRITE DARK!!!
now lets get started peeps!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 29, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: srry it took me sooooo long to judge this...there wuz a glitch and it wouldnt say that i read the poems that were adult or abuse or some stuff like that...anyho, u all did good...some of these writes were just weird but they were awesome anyway...thanx all u peeps for entering
Contest Winners
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by Medea.Macabre 23 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 26 2:22 PM 2007. In paranoia, death, morbid
Gold trophy winner
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Dramatics are addicting... but what happens if you drop it and make the enemy go cold turkey?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Dressed to kill with her crystal eyes,
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this is what i hide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Searching for something concrete to hold onto,
looking for a way to begin,by Patricia Oliver-Jen 28 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 8 11:02 PM 2007. In Society, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Other, Observational Expression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
When I die, I can...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I stood above your grave alone The hope that held me strong no longer reigned.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Tiered of cryinG,
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The pain inside
wont seem to subsideby Poetic Obscenity 33 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 8 9:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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We live on a planet whose sun is a blacklight
We wander the shores of the seas we have made• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The blood spurts in this loving scene
Death awaits behind every doorby annoyedfairy 15 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 29 8:45 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tickle me, Tickle me
With your black painted nailsby annoyedfairy 15 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 28 8:01 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I once was a small child forgotten in a room
there was never nowhere to go, Mom had left us on our ownby whitecities 26 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 30 10:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Will I ever be accepted...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Her heart was heavy
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She's swallowing those pills
herself she wants to killby burningxsoul 10 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 7 10:58 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you have reached an obstacle in life you just cannot decide what to do or where to go...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A young woman siting with a broken smile.She looks at the phone before she dials.She talks to the young man without a heart,feeling that shby JustFallingApart 15 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 23 8:32 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She is dead
because of meby xXshadow911Xx 38 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 6 9:33 PM 2007. In Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I lay staring at my ceiling...and simply give in to black.• Commented on by judge.
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Dead Love
Love of death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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the beautiful rose fell to the floor
as the rain begins to pourby golden falcon 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 18 2:30 AM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
wooden stairs polished to a gleam
age smoothing the patina to a rich slippery sheenby malkinpuss 28 lines, 67 comments, on Jan 3 9:56 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
nothing but a name in the papers,
another slit wrist suicideby Poetic Obscenity 6 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 7:47 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Will someone out there hear my cry?
With every slice time comes closer till i die.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hide away from the murderer in me.
Vengence is all I see.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look at you and what do i see?
the darkness thats the same for you and me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Poetic Obscenity 39 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 23 1:02 PM 2007. In song.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am here ensconced in my room.
I'm sentenced to be alone, for this is my doom.by Poetic Obscenity 16 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 7:41 PM 2007. In boom• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Thoughts racing quickly through her mind
So much said, so little timeby Poetic Obscenity 41 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 6 3:28 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm the girl you pushed around
I'm the girl who never made a soundby Poetic Obscenity 18 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 8:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i sit here in my broken home
will my father ever return• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
chained up in the room of no return
for sunlight and blood is all i yearnby Gasp 74 lines, 33 comments, on Feb 15 12:03 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
daddy stop yelling at mommy it ain't her fault
I spillt the milk and knocked over the saltby Babyboo1607 9 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 24 2:57 PM 2006. In Abuse, Sad, Sadness, Beat, Pain, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lithium, What's wrong with me?
I feel I am being locked up inside,
Can't Hide my Emptiness,by Shadow Seraphim 26 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 31 5:29 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Longing, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Framed inside my window
Looking at this chilly little worldby Alleksa Jan 23 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 21 3:51 AM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He's lying there beside me
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The world begins,
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Are you near?
Can you hear?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i also cant read 'ataraxis abstained'...it says i read it but i havent so plz change that so i can
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Emo poetry is not the same as dark poetry. There are many differences. Although, both may seem gloomy, the two are technically different types of poems.
Another fact, most emo poems that rhyme, have poorly flowing and forced rhymes.
Perhaps with the contest that your brother entered, she was simply giving constructive criticism about his poem.
Anyways, good luck with your contest. Whether you receive angsty emo poetry or real dark poetry, I hope the poems are good.
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ur right...emo poetry isnt the same but i have read some very good writes about cutting and stuff like that and i wuz hoping i could get some here
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and caliginosity...i cant read that either
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whoever wrote becuz of u i cant read that either cuz im oly 13!!
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who ever wrote bulimia i cant read it cuz its under abuse
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i cant read the follow ing poems:
the Night Before the Suicide, The Stalker, Look into her soul, Warped and Twisted
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Thanks a lot for the bronze trophy and points. Congrats to the other winner's as well. ~
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