basically.
i like this kid.
but my other friend is like in LOVE with him.
and it hurts like hell.
idk what to do about it.
all i wanna do is breakdown and cry.
but i know that won't help.
i'm not sure what to have you write about.
i guess write about any kinda hurt.
your first heartbreak.
your last breakup.
your love of someone who'll never love you.
listen to "I Don't Wanna Miss A Thing" by Aerosmith.
write about how it would feel to listen to that song after realising you're in love with someone who hasn't had feelings for you in months.
make me cry.
i really need to. :/
good luck to you all.
x♥-Captain Obvious
P.S. put a basic summary of your entry in the author comment box or face disqualification. you choose.
"All those scars on her
arms;
Don't worry.
She says thy're little
notes to remind her how
many times you
broke her heart."
i like this kid.
but my other friend is like in LOVE with him.
and it hurts like hell.
idk what to do about it.
all i wanna do is breakdown and cry.
but i know that won't help.
i'm not sure what to have you write about.
i guess write about any kinda hurt.
your first heartbreak.
your last breakup.
your love of someone who'll never love you.
listen to "I Don't Wanna Miss A Thing" by Aerosmith.
write about how it would feel to listen to that song after realising you're in love with someone who hasn't had feelings for you in months.
make me cry.
i really need to. :/
good luck to you all.
x♥-Captain Obvious
P.S. put a basic summary of your entry in the author comment box or face disqualification. you choose.
"All those scars on her
arms;
Don't worry.
She says thy're little
notes to remind her how
many times you
broke her heart."
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 30, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25
- Final notes: good job guys! thank y'all for entering! please look out for contest four! ♥-captain obvious.
Contest Winners
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There's little reminders on her wrists,
That tell a tale of a broken heart.by CazzieJade 40 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 6 10:09 PM 2007. In Angst, Teen, Broken.
Gold trophy winner
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you can hurt me, / because you have before / but I still go back to you / you don't know how amazing you can be / your laugh makes me cry / your smile makes me melt / your eyes are a mystery I can't find / you t• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Missing his face,
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by bloved 34 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 20 3:29 PM 2007. In teenage bs• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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How many pieces must one heart lose
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As the blood drips slowly, my life flows out of me.
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A thing on clouds
I knew it wouldn’t come aboutby Aneasthetised 35 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 31 2:46 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If your friends become monsters, it's their problem.
When you miss their company, it's your problem.by AutumnsFlame 33 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 14 6:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I sit on cloud nine
Feelings so amazingby Poetic-Goddess 50 lines, 6 comments, on May 26 11:43 AM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I got a tear in my pocket
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I think I've lost it
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Written after the end of a 2 and a half year relationship. Contains, some specific reference to my ex, but you shouldn't get to confused. L• Commented on by judge.
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her pawn-broken heart -
sold and re-sold
to hungry passers by,by DancingRed 23 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 26 6:57 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Sad, Free verse, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Unrequetted.
What we had was golden• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Don't speak, I'm not blind
Don't try to explain yourself, and try to be kind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i remember
sitting in the back row of classby infernalxfidelity 26 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 12 5:51 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Love, heartbrake• Commented on by judge. -
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The bond that we shared
I thought could not be strongerby Corinthians13-4 33 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 19 8:10 AM 2007. In love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
words now empty
we mean nothing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Day by day youre in my sight.
Day by day it just isnt right.by Susie Statutory 24 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 16 7:01 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You're a sweet nothing.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Was there something that I did?
Is there something I did wrong?by Chrissy626 47 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 22 11:15 PM 2004. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's just a little poem i made after i broke my own heart.by Danielle Samia 20 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 27 4:24 PM 2007. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The Devil Woman walks the road, / my deepest feelings she'll never know. / If I scream she'll run away, / and then return but never stay. / / She'll trick you once and steal your heart, / she'll grab your life an• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Love is a understatement
it is a contradictionby rockimmortality 17 lines, on Mar 13 3:25 PM 2007. In Heartbreak• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She’s stabbed through the heart with words so sharp…
Words so painful and callous; cold and unfeeling.
Tears slip slowly down her cheeks• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The stillness within my soul is deafening
Here in my tomb• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You left me to fend for myself alone / Now look at me, i'm all grown / There are things you should have shown / You left me to fend for myself alone / / You left me to fend for myself alone / I used to wish on aby paintitblack1001 13 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 26 8:28 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Broken Hearted, Anger• Viewed by judge.
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Why did you do this to me?by xLovinmylifex 14 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 25 7:52 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Now I know, the secret that I behold. / / That someone else is in love with you. / / When my best friend told me that she is in love with you, my heart turned to stone. / / Instead of one love to pick from, you• Viewed by judge.
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this is how i felt when my boyfreaind left me. yes im gay. and i still love him.by Emo Cowboy14 17 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 10 7:19 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Sad, Thoughts, Teen issues, gay• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Do you even remember who i am? / The girl who used to laugh at everything you said / The girl who loved you to the death / And now i lay he• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Sweet tragedy, a delicate masterpiece
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Only so much till the edge is at your feetby MOvIng iN StERiO 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 3:50 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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omg i'm going through the EXACT same thing right now!! i know how you feel! i really suck at love poems though, sorry, or else i'd enter your contest. but i hope you get a lot of entries =]
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Can we enter more then once?
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Just checking I have some pre writes that will fit and two floating in my head that should to.
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Juliakaze's Summary
I'm going to wright about my many heartbreaks and how the boy I'm in love with will never love me! -
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I just looked through a million of my poems to find one that suited it, then when I did, I read that I have to put something in the authors comments...
I didn't put a summery in my author box because if I edit it, it will take off my pretty font and such.
though, you can delete it if you'd like. It's pretty self explainitory not to mention poems should be how you percieve them; how the author sees them.
All I ask is that you read it before you delete it.
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lol. i won't delete it. i just liek to make myself look like a badass and say i will. but i really won't. i can't even tell which one is your s beaus eof the anonimmity thing. i can't see and author's names until after the contest is judged. thank you for entering though!
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