Hey Guys if you conider yourself a romantic here is a contest for you. I am a wicked critic of a guy that thinks he can write good romance poems. If you can get my attention with your poem or think you can... please enter...
~<3~
Gabrelle
~<3~
Gabrelle
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 5, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: You all did an amazing job. Thankyou for entering I hope to see you in my future contests
Contest Winners
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Baby I love u so much that I cant fully explain
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YO DON'T CARE FOR FEEDBACK ON THIS POEM if u want to leave a comment fine just don't point out mistakes because i'm not gonna change it pei• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I've waited here all day, trapped in mist and shadow...
waiting for you to call me, waiting to let my spirit go.by Lone Defender 59 lines, 16 comments, on Feb 27 11:42 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [37]
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I still feel the fear of giving
For what have I to give?by Idle Mind Wondering 26 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 16 9:55 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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So, It's all been said before
'Tis the stuff of ledgend and lore• Commented on by judge. -
I love you what more can i say
All i can do is love youby Jack of Blades 23 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 29 2:15 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"There is no difference from a wise man, and an idiot, when they both fall in love"• Commented on by judge.
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So. this is an invitation
Full of love and passion• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
LAST NIGHT
As you fell sleeping• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
[i am feeling awash in sacrilege
your vagrant, fragrant skin• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I long to merge myself in you
And lie with you all my last long night,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Upon dusk's doorstep where his day stood still,
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The cold takes my breath away
Holding you never felt the same• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The day was a scorcher.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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[Verse 1]
So go on tell me what's been going onby The Last Truth 58 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 1 7:01 PM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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She pulls me in
Her eyesby oothesaxmanoo 67 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 26 2:03 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Well the house is still,
A silent tease.by DystopianDweller 26 lines, on Feb 16 4:03 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
An action will speak louder than a word
at least that is what we've all always heard
but inaction can be the loudest of them all• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I really appreciate the view,
Down here on the Avenue.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes missing someone can make you want to share random thoughts.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"...For those of you who have lost LOVE, and seen a new LOVE blosom in its place..."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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To you my special Valentine,
upon this day for love.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why do you cry,
when i am not around?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Cuz I don’t want
To die alone• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hey I was wondering if I could submit a song rather than a poem? Is that okay with you?
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I think you'll be surprised by the wonderful entries you'll be receiving as I know a lot of great love guy writerso n this site
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Wow this caught my attention lol my girl friend says 'Bryan, your such a hopeless romantic - and a dumbass. But your my dumbass, the hopeless romantic thing we're going to have to work on' XD -
Hmmm...
Gabby,
Not sure I can impress you with my romantic side, but I'm entering anyway. I guess I'll take any coarse words you may have for what I enter.
Brian -
hey thanx for hosting this!
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erotica allowed?
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Guess a comment would have been too much to ask. Oh well, sorry I entered your contest.
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Mmmmm
Maybe you should limit your contests to 15 or 20 pieces in future. I see you took weeks to read and comment on about 15, then overnight the other 40 are viewed and some-how, we are to assume you have made a valued judgement. Mmmm
Congrats to the winners however
Think about your contest structure in future, please. I really fell like I wasted a new piece, which now, unfortunately is a pre-write, and not even a comment
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Thanks host for this ocntest. Do not take too harshly the critisizm of some sour grapes. Time presses on us all and it sometimes is difficult to judge and comment on so many pieces.
BEst to you in your future contests.
Mouser
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