1. No erotica (I'm only 13)
That's it......so have fun!
I will comment on every poem. Thanks to all who sbmit their poems in my conetst
At the moment I only have enough for a gold trophey but I shall be adding more points for the gold and have silver and bronze trophy. There will be at least 10 HM. Thank you! If you have any questions feel free to msg me.
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As you can see, I have already put some poems in the finalists, because these are the poems that I see fit for the next round. However, there is no limited amount of spaces for the next round yet. If I like your poem your in so don't worry. As long as I like your poems your in the next round!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 18, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 29 people
- Final notes: Wow, this was a really hard contest to judge. I never expected that many entries lol. But there were sooooooo many great poems! If I had more points I'd put more HM'S but unfortunatley I don't. I'm very sorry for the lon delay, I was recently in a car accident and I fractured my right arm making it really hard to type. Again I'm really sorry!
To those who made it to the next round, I will message you to tell you when the next round will begin. Pre-writes will be permitted for the next round. Just in case you don't know whther or not your in the next round, if you receieved a trophy from me in this contest your in the next round.
Once again thank you! The poems were all amazing!
Contest Winners
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Come to me when I am sleeping,
in the darkest hours of the night.by Lovely Amaranth 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 26 7:03 PM 2006. In Personal, Dark, Hope
Bronze trophy winner
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I sit and watch her playing, the smile in her eyes
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Cause the world around you
Is nothing but a nightmare nowby loveaswellashate 41 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 19 5:03 PM 2006. In Sad, Dark, Angst
Honorable mention
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Space was lost in darkness before words give birth to light.
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I bled the night for promises
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She sat on the ground crying in pain,
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As I lay outside
watching the skyby Phoenix-Flame 54 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 13 2:12 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Pain
Honorable mention
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And when a new horizon
Meets the corner of a smile,by Blankscreen2222 28 lines, 43 comments, on May 24 1:11 PM 2006. In Thoughts. When enough is enough. Philosophical outlook., Time to Move on., Love
Honorable mention
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by -Ink Artist- 23 lines, 100 comments, on Jan 11 8:53 AM 2007. In Personal, Reflective, Thoughts, Rhyme, Nature
Honorable mention
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3 Lives, 3 stories, 3 dead ends!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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She stood, once more,
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When sleeping beauty lies
Here darkness subsidesby fairytalelovestory 18 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 2 11:11 AM 2007. In Dark, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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I'm sorry my friend, my love, my loss,
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Entries [171]
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He loves me,
he loves me not-by deadcolor dreams 30 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 18 4:26 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart is torn,
I have fallen,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
another 'off' my usual poems...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sugar
You taste too sweetby Sugoi Panda 29 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 11:52 AM 2007. In Panda• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My vision blur's,images phase through
unobtainable thoughts compelled of intensity.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm through with all of this religous crap!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The gun was sold for a chunk of gold
Mined by a child of six• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You wake up from the dream.
Wondering where you were.by PentiBabe 27 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 4 4:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In this metaphysical state,
a story was once toldby B Chandler 34 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 24 11:01 PM 2006. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm a dictionary; quite contrary,
To the path God chose for me.
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so i fixed it up a bit and i think i like this edit a lot better• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A simple description of a werewolf hunting.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Black boot prints;
They were the first thingby W B Burkholder 68 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 8 3:19 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wrote this as I thought of the general state of Mankind.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i wake up in my bed,and then
it caught my eye.the trends• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You know you still throw pennies
Into the fountain outside Bath and Body Works• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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She swayed on a pin before me, picking thorns• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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so this is how it works
this life, this world,by Avendesora Dreamer 12 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 20 8:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Who are you to Judge me?
When you look at me what do you see?by J-Lee18m 39 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 20 6:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She dips her feet in the loose
stardust and water...Sitting onby poetreeluvr 26 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 6 11:21 AM 2006. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Dear students,
I have a subject hereby Rizzo-in-the-box 45 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 24 10:08 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
There’s a spider in my shower
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Shh, its okay honey,
this is what daddy's do.by Temprance 31 lines, 28 comments, on Jan 10 10:54 PM 2006. In Other, Abuse, Angst, Dark, Pain, Depression, My own style, Family• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Closing my eyes, again, tonight,
emotion storm pleas sent heavenward.by S D McDaniel 40 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 10 3:10 AM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A fallen regiment about me
a field where a thousand corpses lieby Chibi-chan 77 lines, 32 comments, on Jan 13 1:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The conscience of the court
Is watching everyone pass byby outofbreath 30 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 25 3:22 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I still dream of times from the long ago left Scottish land,When an innocent youth unsoiled and filled full with hope,Conte• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Consider me sad
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and feathers tickled my insides
like a swarm of confuzzled beesby ddollfacek 25 lines, on Mar 7 7:18 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Beauty, the epitome of every teenage fantasy,
To lose that extra pound; that extra inch.by Marilyn. 30 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 5 1:22 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
An assortment of the angel and the devil
A sphinx with the head of the a humanby Chweetkavi 18 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 25 9:21 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
When times are tough
And you think you’ve had enoughby phantomfaith 16 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 4 10:18 PM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alone she sits by the waters edge
She gazes at her rippling reflectionby Twilight4Eternity 30 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 25 9:04 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Love, Abstract, Happiness• Commented on by judge. -
The world is a canvas to be painted
A different, adjacent place
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Slipping, slipping back and forth along the streams of time,
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by princess-bubblegum 13 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 1 7:56 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is not where I belong
In the crowded, rainy streetsby phantomfaith 22 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 29 11:44 AM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dearest reader,
This is not a poem of average hate or darkness. It is not a cutting poem and does not contain your popular cliches of pain and anger and insaniby Rizzo-in-the-box 59 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 2 12:11 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"And now my dear, you are ready for the ball!"
Cinderella's fairy-godmother criedby phantomfaith 47 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 8:42 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tok walk along the halls of kings,
To see the world in a grain of sand,by sharkofdhoom 10 lines, on Feb 14 9:12 PM 2007. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Now I don't love to dream
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dark shadows about
when I was devoutby BlueEyeWonder1988 34 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 24 10:08 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Past, Personnel, Hopes, Prayer, and Faith.• Commented on by judge. -
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Queen Muffet sits
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Saving a girl,
Whose life was bad.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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just thought i'd let ya know you have it set so we can only enter one poem =)
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Weird.....
Oh sorry, but when I checked my conetst over again, I never checked the box saying 'limit one entry per person' I'll try and see if there's a way I can fix it. Thanks for telling me
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I thought we could enter as many times as we wanted but it only let you enter once.
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just edit the contest, that's all you have to do to change it.
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Sorry ppl, I did edit it, but I don't know why it's still not working try again and if it still doesn't work I'll ask one of the Ap staff if they can fix it. Thanks for telling meh
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Love it!
i shall enter your contest with a song-written poem! but i see you have sasuke as yourpicture! yay! i ♥ that show! ^_^ -
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Lol, yep I love Naruto, My fav show
Whose your favorite character? Hope to read your entry soon
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I totally love Naruto! My Bro-in-law got me into it just a few months ago! I think perhaps after I have seen enough episodes I might make up some sort of Naruto contest!
Anyhow, my poem is not showing up on here, but I entered it and you even commented on it, and it says that I am still entered in it!? what's up with that?
OK, so, thanx for the comment, and ciao.
Oh, also- Sasuke is the kewlest by far, but I like the ANBU!
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why did you have to say that we could enter any poem? any type of poem!! I don't know if I can do that. I have too many that I like and I don't wanna waste your time by entering heaps of them!! WHY??!! lol
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lol if it helps....i like dark poems
haha srry
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Hey you have a great contest there! and more too come! Love, Raneika
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i have no clue how you are going to judge this thing as you have so many entries but i am going to give it a try anyway and hope for the best. thank you for hosting a contest on all poetry. viyanna rosemarie
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Lol oh I will manage, last two contests I had, I recieved at least 167 entries so I'm fine with judging this contest, and I would love to read your entry
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Great idea
I feel there might well be too many entries to judge adequatly mind you. Good luck and God Bless, I hope you manage to pick only the best.
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lol ok ye this is gettin to have a lot of entries so I'll be closing it in in 10 mins. Thanks to all of you who have entered
I should finish judging by tomorrow o tuesday
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BRONZE TROPHY
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it will not let me enter more than one either.. lol. Sometimes AP likes to be dumb. Oh well. It does not say anything about only one entry.. so it should be allowing more than one.. does not make sense. Anyhow.. have fun judging the gobs of poems here. (probably a good thing that there cannot be more than one entry)... LOL. This aught to take you a good week to get through.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for the 2nd place trophy and points I really appreciate it. Thank you also for hosting such a great contest.
Congrats to all who got through and the other winners.
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Thanks for a great contest, you sure got through a lot of entries.
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Waiting on the comment on every entry. It was stated in the rules.
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Wow. I am honored. Out of 232 entries I got gold! WOW. Thank you so much for this high honor!

















