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10 Lines About You (Etheree form)

Give me 10 lines about you but it must be in  Etheree form.

 

 

 

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.  

 

 

Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

 

 

Get creative and write an Etheree with more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

 

 

Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 ...

 

 

Triple Etheree, Quadruple Etheree, and so on!

 

http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html

 

 

Mr C is co judging to assist with syllable debates.... lol

 

 

All In A Day (10 lines about me)
I'm
A dad
A doctor
A nurse,a chef
A cleaner,a judge
A bright merry go round
My home's a circus, complete
with clowns. A swinging trapeze,in
fine form. No rehearsal,it's showtime.
Really, I'm a multi juggling mum.

 

Brit/Aussie/all around the world etc etc pronunciation of words however you may feel it is wrong -  the final syllable count is decided on the site below and the judges

 

http://www.wordscount.info/hw/syllable.jsp   this is where I check syllable count

 

The Preliminary Finalists is not in a set order

RULES

- No prewrites. sorry
- i hAtE sTuFf lIkE tHiS -- Avoid them
- No bashing other poets.
- No hard to read text and background
- breaking of the rules will be instantly disqualified

- please do a spelling and grammar check
-There will be HM'S depending on entries.....

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 14, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to all the wonderful entries....
    Hope everyone enjoyed creating a poem in Etheree form.....
    Congrads to all the poets who never gave up.... Counting syllables by clapping has taken its toll on my hands....

    A hard decision to choose the winners, as each entry was great..... congrads to everyone

    Tracey

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2722990, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Light
    shines bright
    by penman 9 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 9 9:42 AM 2007. In Other
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Double Etheree. There really are 20 lines, I don't know why it says there are only 19.
    by Dead Eyes 19 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 10 8:26 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by x.digital.love.x 21 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 9 5:31 PM 2007. In self description
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by Kahliya 34 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 9 11:36 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by Misty Sea 18 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 9 4:19 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Personal, Thoughts, Fantasy, Etheree
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. by Whyitt U 9 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 9 10:00 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. by Twilight4Eternity 20 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 11 1:52 AM 2007. In Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. by Glenda L Hand 19 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 9:58 AM 2007. In contemporary, form, love, life, personal.
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. by LadyLavender 10 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 9 8:25 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. by Billbard 11 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 10:23 AM 2007. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. by Lj- 19 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 9 11:58 AM 2007. In Self, Thoughts, Lost in thought
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  13. by Viyanna Rosemarie 9 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 9 11:40 AM 2007. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  14. by Samplette 11 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 9 12:12 PM 2007. In Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  15. by Grey Mouser 20 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 10:51 AM 2007. In Personal, Life, Thoughts, Love
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  16. I am more than the sum of my parts
    by CitrineSunrise 23 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 9 2:54 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  17. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2719892, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  18. by Shenton 15 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 9 8:16 AM 2007. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  19. by sprack44 9 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 11 10:49 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  20. My message to you is not about me,
    Yet this is all about you, me, they, we.
    by cafegroundzero 42 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 9 10:26 AM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Personal., Family
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  21. by awesome awesome 9 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 10 9:06 PM 2007. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Samplette gold member
    March 14, 2007
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    congrats to the winnners!!


  • Whyitt U
    March 14, 2007
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    Thanks for the HM and the great contest Congrats to all of the winners and to everyone who entered!!

    Whyitt Uxxx


  • Misty Sea
    March 14, 2007
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    Thank you for the hon mention. Great contest- really enjoyed it.


  • poetryality silver member
    March 14, 2007
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    Thanks for your patience with me. I really do like the form, and know how to use proper syllable counts. I was having a difficult night. My bad!


    CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Dead Eyes
    March 17, 2007
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    Thank you so much for the bronze! I'm glad you thought my poem worthy of a trophy. This was a wonderful contest.

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