Put your hatred and tears into words, basically I need you to show me just how much you hate the way people/things make you feel.
Mix up some hatred, envy and hurt and you got some depression... put that into actual words and you have a good poem for this contest...
Enter as many poems as you want, I'm allowing pre-writes so I am expecting alot of poems.
Mix up some hatred, envy and hurt and you got some depression... put that into actual words and you have a good poem for this contest...
Enter as many poems as you want, I'm allowing pre-writes so I am expecting alot of poems.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 30, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 30
- Final notes: This was a hard contest to judge... It was filled with emo-esque poems and love poems which is the opposite of what I asked for... so after much trawling through poems (alot of them were good, even if off topic) I have found some good little poems which fit what I wanted.
Congratulations to the winners, you truly deserved it.
Contest Winners
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Recaptured rapture wreaks its
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by Edna Sweetlove 21 lines, 23 comments, on Aug 3 11:57 AM 2005. In Adult humour, Satire, Dreams, Fantasy, Dogs, Sonnets
Bronze trophy winner
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You will never forget my face
It will be the last you see• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Entries [102]
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my best friend....i really hope she reads this somedayby Pixie Girl 20 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 7 11:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Trickling down my spine as my day comes to an end
You brought me down and now's my time / to make.. you.. BEND.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to make you hurt
Pretend I want this to work• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Raven black petals-
beautifully beguiling;by Floorboards 3 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 20 5:01 AM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my feelings against stereotypingby DrownInImperfection 23 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 29 5:34 PM 2006. In Other, Life, Thoughts, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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angry words towards my ex-bf, WARNING: LANGUAGE• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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call him up and say goodbye
hang up before you hear him cry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"Do as I say not as I do."
So laws don't apply to you?by Verra Rose 23 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 7 11:37 AM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Hate, Humanity, Contest• Commented on by judge. -
I’m wondering how long this will continue.
When I’m 40 and happily married,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Excuse me (I gasp),
Did someone just drop• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by loveisthemoment 27 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 26 10:43 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Manipulation, by my fears,
Increasing my never ending tears,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sad thoughts only turn into broken dreams,
Broken dreams turn into empty love,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It was a broken promise, your lies come undone.
My chance for freedom; yours to run.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I sit in the living room
The T.V's on the news• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wish I was younger, not bothered by the world
Just one more naive child, an ignorant little girl• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The pain for her was greater
than i ever knewby MarimbaMiss 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 3 10:55 AM 2006. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Voices spinning around my head,
These words hurt,by katiekills4 27 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 4 3:54 PM 2007. In Abuse, Pain, My own style, Depression, Sadness, Anger, Beat, Personal., Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Not red in the face because of the heat
But because of the defeat• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
any way... no matter what...
someone shall get hurt!!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I cough out the fluid that constricts my will to breathe
And I hate it; this misery that is me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by antonio tan 36 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 29 7:31 AM 2007. In Personal, Other, Angst, Death, My own style, Abuse, Hate, Dedication, Message• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When he found out what she did,
what would he do?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wake me up, please,
pull me out of this black sea.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This is how i truely feel about my dad. Don't let the title fool you it aint a sweet poem so if u really love your da i wouldnt read this bby torn-apart-angel 24 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 1 8:14 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i'll admit it...
i want to kill him...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Now it’s my turn
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Oh god damnit...
god damn all of itby Inlovewithperfectio 9 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 8 5:26 PM 2007. In hate...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
like a child
allowing one to lead them
away from a fight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You took me in
As your best friend• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm sitting here
you've got your gun against my head...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Death has come for me many a times,
now I've grown used to it.• Viewed by judge. -
Here I am
I watch you all• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don't know how to find hope,
to heal this wounded soul,• Viewed by judge. -
World filled with hatred
Pain sticks a blade through lifeby okadadokie 59 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 10 7:42 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Sad, My Life, Depression, Personal, Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Red rash upon her body
brby Darker-star 16 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 29 3:43 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Alone,
and so afraid,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The blood soaked knife in my hand
It's all my fault,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Evey thing is backwards,
nothing here is right,by doctorme 58 lines, on Mar 20 3:34 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you say that you love me
you say that it's true• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm not kidding any more• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A childs love is lost,
lost inside the empty mind• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
he used to be my friend
&nby jojolu12 9 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 20 2:38 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
I wrote this a couple days ago...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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On this day of days, full of so much love and happiness,
I creep through this quiet house.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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standing at the edge of the cliff.
on the very tips of my toes.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
M y head is filled with suicidal thoughts
I ntensify the urge to• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The blood drips
The pain searingby halapalu 41 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 31 8:08 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She walks down the broken road
Looking back on everything she knowsby FlirtingWithSuicide 13 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 31 2:34 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm so sick of you and all your friends
Making my life a living hellby BeautifulDisaster9 22 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 20 5:06 PM 2007. In Sad, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Angry, Hate, Contest• Viewed by judge. -
I pound at the window screaming
Tears falling as no one can tell it's not meby Hells Bells 44 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 25 7:06 PM 2006. In Personal, Teen issues, Depressed, Death, Dark, Sucide• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Important Notice!
I am now going through entered poems... there are alot to get through, I have briefly glanced at some already. Please do not mistake this for cheating...
I haven't had alot of time as of late and am therefor now sorting through poems and commenting where neccessary, all poems are now being re-read and if they will be relooked at they are being put in for finalists... my finalists list is actually my favourites list at the moment.
Don't worry, everyone will have an equal chance.
I feel I have to post this notice from a complaint I had when sorting my last contest.
Thankyou all for the great entrys
I look forward to reading 
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Entries
I just want to make this clear, I have asked for entries about hatred, envy and pain... i.e "I hate you so much, i despise you, i wish i had what you have though, but i still hate you so much i wanna kill you"
However instead of seeing sick imagery of ripping people apart I am seeing love poems from emo's and kids. I'm finding the rare mature love poem however still, alot of love poems. I want to make clear, it's ok to start with love, but it's about HATRED.
I've spent a couple of hours tonight going through, reading, commenting and adding to my favourites (I stopped putting up finalists due to complaints) and I have found that after a while a couple of entrys have gotten repetative, however there are some good poets in here and are being overlooked.
The rest of the poems will be read and judged soon, however I am aware of new entries still being submitted and thought I would post this notice. Thankyou -
WHO WON!?!
so who won? -
Please bare with me on this... I lost my internet access and couldn't log onto my allpoetry account on a public computer, however ALL entries HAVE been viewed by me, however have not been commented... I will be reviewing all entrys before judging, however I jotted down some favourites which have been entered as finalists.
The contest will be ended soon, I appologise for the wait.
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Oh My Goodness thanks for the Silver!
I mean it's nice getting one when you're in a contest with twenty other poems but when it's like 168 others?! How did I manage that?! Thank you so very much, never happened to me before... Or not at least that I can remember! Thank you once again and well done to the other winners! 
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