I want to really relate. Make Me cry and I'll definatly put you as a finalist! To make sure that I'll relate, you can check out my poems.
I don't want:
1. Erotica
2. People who cut for attention
3. Happy go lucky crap
What I do want:
1. Really good writing!!
2. I am also looking for really great picture inspired poems...
This is my first contest so please help make it a good one.
Good luck.
One other note, i am only 14. No adult entries please.
I don't want:
1. Erotica
2. People who cut for attention
3. Happy go lucky crap
What I do want:
1. Really good writing!!
2. I am also looking for really great picture inspired poems...
This is my first contest so please help make it a good one.
Good luck.
One other note, i am only 14. No adult entries please.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 14, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 10
- Final notes: Wow, this was a close contest. All of the entries were great and showed so much emotion. However, some really got it down, and it shows. Congratulations to the winners; and for everyone else, keep up the good writing.
Contest Winners
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by BeautifulDisaster9 42 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 10 5:00 PM 2007. In Personal, Angst, Cutting, Teen issues
Silver trophy winner
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You don’t even know…by WickdlyUndrstanding 24 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 2 1:34 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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A fake life,
Painful existence.by hopelessly-broken 20 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 8 5:19 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I cough out the fluid that constricts my will to breathe
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One more day is to much to bare
People act as though they don't care• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
the dreams that she had
vanished long ago• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Tears stream down your face
You loved someone• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I want to cry,
But I've cried all my tears.by NicotineHeartbreak 23 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 7 12:58 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [116]
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my days are full of desperation, crying, and wringing of hands and unbelievable suicidal pain. It seems my own body begun a self destruct sby sunrose 0 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 26 10:30 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Too weak to live
Thats what they said• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Could you love me so truly that
You’d forsake your past; your pain;by smithlarryw 15 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 15 4:58 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wrote this when my girlfriend broke up with me, but now i realize that if she left me, its her loss.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You came towords me with a smile,
one for breaking walls.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Feed the cat.
Take out the garbage.by Ativan 30 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 22 8:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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So walking seems useless,
And my body wants to be lifeless.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Contrived comfort;
When eyes are closedby W B Burkholder 21 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 7 11:37 AM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Wondering if I'm still Alive
Feeling numb right down tooby UniquelytheSame 85 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 10 8:10 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Indiffernt, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by vivela 114 lines, 88 comments, on Feb 11 9:20 AM 2007. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Slashes of Color 51 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 7 9:53 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by In Liquid Wonder 27 lines, 40 comments, on Jan 8 7:58 PM 2007. In depression, sadness, lost love, anger, emptiness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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And I told you, didn’t I?
To murder, is to die.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She screamed--this is war! Get up and
Fight! Leave your past behind!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Their relationship was ruined by his desire for virginal sex.by princess-bubblegum 28 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 4 8:41 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I kiss your hands and I marvel• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Calloused and rough
Like abused hands overworked and toughby Kalamina 35 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 7 2:28 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Don't let it fall. Don't let it burn.
Put up the wall, until it's earned.by John McQuillan Jr. 41 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 21 8:37 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When various thoughts go through the mind
Hopefully you will have an idea of the impactby afireinthisheart 28 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 31 3:12 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes I wonder
If I could live in bliss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A little girl so innocent
Full of sugar and spiceby crazylittledevil 34 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 19 8:34 AM 2006. In Abuse• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
don't read this, it means nothing to anyone, including me. i felt like shit, so i wrote, big fucking deal. "Dust Bunnies Haunt My Dreams"• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She was hurt
1 year agoby phantomfan105 22 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 15 6:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My paper heart is bleeding
and blood red, my tears are falling.by Angierie 25 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 1 8:49 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Break me like you broke December
It might hurt but I remember• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The stillness within my soul is deafening
Here in my tomb• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A spoonful of sugar won't help to get this one go down
Because rejection is the hardest thing to swallow• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by gowiththeflow 42 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 26 8:06 PM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The day has come to an end
The moon makes its way up onto the skyby Phaethon 39 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 23 1:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Unchanging darkness engulfs the abyss of a broken soul
Loneliness binds its prey in complete control• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My heart is a bloody fist caught in a noose
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Her tear drop's fall,
Down her broken face,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To my soul mate. My Husband. My everything.by DenversLostSoul 41 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 19 10:20 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your last words haunt my dreams. The way you whispered in my ear the words ‘rape’ and ‘stranger’. You said that you wanted to die.by FallenBlackRoses 52 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 27 9:16 AM 2007. In Personal, Love, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Dark, Angst, Pain, Death, Depression, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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And I swear to God,
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He sits in his room
Thinks about deathby xcolourxmexemox 27 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 2 6:13 PM 2007. In emo love hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my heart ripped out while it pumps
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Standing at the front door,
A hand resting on the fly wire,by Girl With Guitar 46 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 19 1:58 AM 2007. In Freewrite, Personal, Thoughts, Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Now so close and yet so far
A shattered dream in this empty space• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by LittleCrimsonJester 25 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 2 10:34 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tiered of cryinG,
Cant take no more lying• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I thought I could never hate someoneAs much as I hate you
My feelings are of anger and pain Of how I feel Toby trace3grls 16 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 14 5:34 AM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by AutumnsFlame 37 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 11 9:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Lightless Angel 27 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 18 9:26 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My heart is torn,
I have fallen,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We shared so much
In our short time together,by shysky 29 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 17 4:49 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
an emotional recap of my loveby Loveliesinsanity 30 lines, 3 comments, on May 18 8:05 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by melting-me 26 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 19 10:41 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Nobody stopped to help, they walked on by.
Silently hostile and disapproving.by BruiserMadden 50 lines, 34 comments, on Nov 23 6:09 PM 2006. In Sad, Other, Hope, Society, Nature, Contemporary, Life, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sherri's been rejected
She hates it being aloneby secretsquirrely 79 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 22 6:05 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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