Art Work:
"Sound"
by Theresa Lucero
item #: 11743553B
Every poem must begin with the line;
"when I open my heart, this is what I hear..."
You have one day!
Usual Rules apply!
Use poetic devices.
Use metaphors!
Show, don't tell.
Give me something worth reading please.
No more than 20 lines.
No profanity!
Any form is acceptable.
No names please- BLIND JUDGING!
No erotica!
No bashing of anyone!
No more than 20 entries...HURRY!
THE CONTEST WILL AUTOMATICALLY CLOSE AFTER 20 ENTRIES!
If you use artwork, please copy the above to your post. No other art please. Also add artists credits to your author's note by copy/paste from this page.
Thank you! Have fun!
I reserve the right to disqualify an entry that is outlandish (in my opinion).
See you in a day or so!
"Sound"
by Theresa Lucero
item #: 11743553B
Every poem must begin with the line;
"when I open my heart, this is what I hear..."
You have one day!
Usual Rules apply!
Use poetic devices.
Use metaphors!
Show, don't tell.
Give me something worth reading please.
No more than 20 lines.
No profanity!
Any form is acceptable.
No names please- BLIND JUDGING!
No erotica!
No bashing of anyone!
No more than 20 entries...HURRY!
THE CONTEST WILL AUTOMATICALLY CLOSE AFTER 20 ENTRIES!
If you use artwork, please copy the above to your post. No other art please. Also add artists credits to your author's note by copy/paste from this page.
Thank you! Have fun!
I reserve the right to disqualify an entry that is outlandish (in my opinion).
See you in a day or so!

Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 7, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thank you EVERYONE for giving me such wonderful poetry. I love the fact that all the hearts opened differently. Some hearts saw darkness, others, lights, some saw joy, then there was the sorrowful heart. That';s what happens when we expose that thundering organ that is our lifeline.
1st Place Gold - 300 points
cadence The title says it all. Beautiful!
2nd Place Silver Trophy
Listen! Sometimes that's all we need to do.
3rd Place Bronze Trophy
Waves of Life This poem just washed over me.
Once again, thank you Everyone. All entries were superb!
Much Love ♥
Renee
Contest Winners
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"when I open my heart, this is what I h• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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When I open my heart, this is what I hear...
footprints gently making a forever impression,by AliceinPoetryLand 31 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 5 5:11 AM 2007
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When I open my heart, this is what I hear,
an golden circle shows an eastern song• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [17]
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SOLILOQUY IN CHIMES• Commented on by judge.
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When I open my heart, this is what I hear,
A desolate sound, with which I must bear.by nobletemplar 13 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 4 6:53 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
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When I open my heart this is what I hear.
Loves laughter, joys jubilance; loud and clear.by Ogreatbaldone 15 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 5 10:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
"when I open my heart, this is what I hear..."
the love song of the dancing sphere• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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Nice idea Mom, but I'm gonna sit this one out
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I LOVE YOU! ♥
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When I opened my heart
this is what i hear.
mylove dripping into a puddle at my feet
like a faucet with a tattered washer
no matter how hard I turned the handle
it would not stop because my heart
was broken.
Mal
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Awwww Mal, I hope that heart of your mends.
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Thanks sweetie
but its really not broken.....but it's also not spoken for....guess that breaks my heart
... LOL......see now it needs mending....
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Magnificent contest Inspiration..
I will see what my noggin can release from its cage
Best wishes to all
Have much FUN!!!
Many blessings to You Grandma
Best wishes always
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Hope you get a chance to submit an entry love.
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great contest renee, congrats to all the winners...peace Terry
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I always miss these....Hope you got some quality writes. I love you~
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