This is a very simple poem. I want angst, hurt, broken hearted poems.
Option one--- Use the pic to inspire yourself
Option two--- Use the quote "Inside her heart is breaking."
Option three- Use the word bank
Broken
Split
Dying
Crying
Over
Pain
No chat speak
No erotica
Cussing is allowed but limited
Lovey poems are not allowed
Two day contest.
1st place 300
2nd place 75
3rd place 50
2 honorable mentions
Option one--- Use the pic to inspire yourself
Option two--- Use the quote "Inside her heart is breaking."
Option three- Use the word bank
Broken
Split
Dying
Crying
Over
Pain
No chat speak
No erotica
Cussing is allowed but limited
Lovey poems are not allowed
Two day contest.
1st place 300
2nd place 75
3rd place 50
2 honorable mentions
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 6, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: This was so hard to really judge. But I have found some really good ones that I could not pass up. Excellent work everyone. Thanks for entering Kassie
Contest Winners
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Have you ever felt like
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Still she stands
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [33]
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Inside her heart is breaking
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I lay here in my crimson bed,
These walls they are so dark,
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She gave you her love
She gave you her trustby Deceits Tears 21 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 1 5:59 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
by vampire of thought 9 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 1 12:52 PM 2007. In pain, love, heartbreak, workbank, sad, personal• Commented on by judge.
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I have a scar
That cannot be seenby Abstract Image 39 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 8 10:21 AM 2007. In Abuse, Pain, Beat, Depression, Lost in thought, Sadness, Anger• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How many times will we say goodbye before the story comes to an end?
This relationship is redundant and slipping
My eyes are welled up wi• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I got tears dripping down to my soul Because I already know I'm alone.
Lost all my friends so I never hear the ring from the phone.by We da Best 20 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 12 11:32 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is how i feel today i feel like i just want to end it all'.'by Prego03312008 13 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 20 7:57 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love can give you the greatest of pleasures and the worst of pain.
Love can hurt you so much, that the aching is enough to torture you.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I put my tender heart
in your hands• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How can she tell him,
About all the things,• Commented on by judge. -
I kissed you away to numb the pain
of broken glass paperweightsby Hadji Murad 12 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 1 2:01 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Wipe away these hot tears from my burning cheeks,
Quiet this aching of my soul.by Spiritual Nature 39 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 19 3:19 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I stoop down to pick up the dime store pin,
the old man stops his rusty cart and groans;by Carly Pop 46 lines, 28 comments, on Feb 15 8:21 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I sit here I grow ever so tired.
Feeling confused lost among my thoughts and feelingsby asimplepoeticmind 13 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 7 6:55 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I heard the news a while ago
But I could not stand the pain.by ozma 23 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 28 11:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Sleeping in a bed of lies,
We hold each other close.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know, it is the final fight,
Last words from me,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"Hello, my darling, how are you?
Just can't believe that it is true.by Golden Jaguar 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 24 2:59 PM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
slowly flip that phone shut, sadly mounting given up
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you still have not read alot of the poems people have entered.
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Shadow
You are right. I haven't. I usually do not view all of my entrants until the very end. I read all the poems 2 times and as I read, I add my finalist list.
Thanks for commenting. Kassie
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Thank you so much for honoring me with the Bronze. I so appreciate it. This was a wonderful contest. You take care, Sandy
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