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I want you to make me feel it!

Hey this is my first contest so away we go. I want a poem that makes me feel something. I don't want my heart hurts sappy crap I mean real emotions in words I want to feel your passion, anger, lust, hate, depression, happiness I want real. I want you to write about what you are feeling right now and I want it to be good. If you don't want to give your best might want to leave now.



Here are the rules...

1. no TYpInG LiKe THis
2. I don't mind profanity if it is used right
3. no chat speak crap
4. If you chose erotica please try to be tasteful

Have fun.




If you enter prewrites make sure they are in the relm of what I am asking for please. I will only be accepting a few more prewrites. I find that new writes are more challenging.


Ok. I know I had stoped prewrites but I changed my mind. Alot of you have told me that you would like to enter prewrites so I am allowing them again.I want alot of entries. Hey, If it offends any one, give me a break it is my first contest.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 7, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 6 people
  • Final notes:
    I really enjoyed having this contest. I appreciate all that entered. I have found my winners even though all were really great. I hope that the next contest I have will be filled with such diverse and intense feelings such as this one. I had alot of fun and I hope that you all did too. I know I ended it a little early but I knew I had found my winners. Thanks again.

Contest Winners

  1. Nightmares invade my sleep.
    Where I am being chased by some creep!
    by tawk 39 lines, 25 comments, on Mar 1 9:01 AM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Life, Personal, Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. The awful truth that lies within,
    reaching deep within your soul.
    by Ktulu Blackwolfe 23 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 19 12:31 PM 2007. In dark, challenge writes
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Just like the rain,
    I fall again and again for you.
    by xSpirax 41 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 3 2:05 PM 2007. In Lost love, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Lost in thought, Depression, Pain, Self, Escape
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. The death of a dream
    Right before my eyes;
    by M0ofi3 29 lines, 19 comments, on Feb 21 4:58 PM 2007. In Life, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Selfish tendencies running loose,
    You slide your neck into the -
    by TheHiddenWriter 28 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 26 11:13 PM 2007. In Angst, Other, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. And the truth is often hidden deep
    Too deep for me to see...
    by anonpoet2 44 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 2 4:06 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Personal, Lost in thought
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. I know you didnt mean it when you left
    and I'm sorry I didnt make it on Saturday
    by sprack44 27 lines, 28 comments, on Feb 17 12:48 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Dreaming is the only thing keeping me awake
    My sadness always leaving me in a deep slumber
    by ForgottenMemories 21 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 27 9:24 AM 2007. In sad, despair, other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Stopping for nothing, here I am tonight
    To hold you and love you here all night
    by afireinthisheart 19 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 28 5:18 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. What's behind the looking glass she wants to know.
    As she closes her eyes and the wind begins to blow.
    by tawk 48 lines, 66 comments, on Feb 24 3:19 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Society, Noguest [remove]
  11. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2420637, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  12. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2686379, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [29]

1 - 29 of 29
  •           TEENAGE YEARS
    Teenage years we have all been there
    by whitecities 34 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 28 5:07 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Couldn't get out of bed this morning.
    Voices from the beast
    by Sacrificial Love 25 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 28 4:40 PM 2007. In Weird
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Jeneralix 10 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 18 4:24 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • You say you're sorry now but if you really were,
    You never would have done it in the first place,
    by A Silent Cry 30 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 28 5:41 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I made a mistake in hindsight
    Naked torso to the ultra violent,
    Ultraviolet light.
    by Cam Skylar 38 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 25 8:25 AM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A fallen regiment about me
    a field where a thousand corpses lie
    by Chibi-chan 77 lines, 32 comments, on Jan 13 1:17 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Shenton 36 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 1 1:40 AM 2007. In Memory
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I just can't seem
    to stop crying
    by XStuckInANightmareX 45 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 1 9:00 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Feelings.
    • Commented on by judge.
  • There is no vacancies in these hearts
    anything you say
    by Montana Gold 38 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 27 12:45 AM 2006. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Bored and upset thinking life should be more than this
    Losing my life to nothingness
    by amanda graves 27 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 11 12:26 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The tears...the pain
    They seem to be the only friends I have
    by Angel Crest 21 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 9:13 PM 2007. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Hold your hand
    Hold it tight
    by Davitude 30 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 1 12:03 AM 2007. In Love, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Writing these words breaks me down. I'm still tumbling in the hole that was once my heart now. Don't ask why, but my love for you made me d
    by King Nothing 12 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 4 2:20 AM 2007. In Love, Lyrics, Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Never again hold her and know she's mine.
    by Whateryagonnado 6 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 3 10:32 AM 2007. In Lost love, sadness, acceptance
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I watched the animals
    Get slaughtered in stables
    And they never took their eyes off me
    by Whereslawrence 66 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 5:30 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Life, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I could feel your heart beating
    With every broken shard
    by crystaltears16 24 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 12 6:46 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    March 1, 2007
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    I am guessing you will no longer be accepting prewrites...oh well


    • unanswered
      March 1, 2007
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      OK. so a few people told me that they would enter if I allowed prewrites. I want a lot of good entries so I am allowing them again. I know that I am Indecisive.


  • ForgottenMemories
    March 1, 2007
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    i'm not sure if my poem is what your looking for, but I might enter it anyways.


  • M0ofi3
    March 7, 2007
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    Thanks!

    God bless!


  • countrybabe gold member
    March 7, 2007
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    Thank you

    Thank you so much for the gold trophy and points I really appreciate it. I am so glad you enjoyed my write. Thank you also for hosting such a great contest.

    Congrats to the other winners and Honourable Mentions.

    Countrybabe

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