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Sadness and pain

it is a picture inspired competition. i want you to look at the picture above and tell me what you see, hear and feel.
I want to be able to feel the words you are writing.

There are no rules just dont tell me about the picture tell me what you feel.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 7, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    I am closing this contest early due to a busy time with coursework but also entrys had died down anyway. all the poems that were entered were abosultly fantastic and each and every one of you is a brilliant writer. however i picked those which really hit me and seemed personal to me. i thought i would add to those who may not have known but the picture i choose was resembling child abuse and how it affects a child. well thanx everyone for entering
    gold- did you want me to die?
    silver- alone
    bronze- dear mummy
    honary mention- this is really me and another beating

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2709828, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. she remembers when she was younger...
    when she was at her weakest...
    by denika 54 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 28 5:12 PM 2007. In Abuse, Other, Sad, Pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Dear Mummy
    I am writing to you so you can hear me
    by Laura 17 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 5 9:56 AM 2007. In Abuse, Life, Personal, Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by JeannieD Hunter 19 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 28 12:56 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Sad, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. The figure looming nearer
    Means a beating she will get.
    by williamstown 12 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 28 2:14 PM 2007. In Angst, Abuse, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Random Thoughts
    March 3, 2007
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    What an emotional roller coaster you are onboard judging these poems, rip out the box of tissues for sure,
    Well done and best of luck!!

    Brenden


    • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
      March 3, 2007
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      Yep it very hard judging when there is so many brillaint poets who have entered. and some have made me cry and remember times, some really captured what the picture actually shows. but there all fantastic


  • Donielle21
    March 7, 2007
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    Thank you for the gold. That picture brought back a lot of memories for me. I am glad that you liked it but saddened that children are abused everyday with no stopping it. I know that you had a hard time judging and congratulate everyone who entered. Thanks again.