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Heartbreak...

hmmm... ok then.
i want you to write a poem based on one of these quotes.

1. Yesterday you asked me why I was crying - I told you I didnt know, but that was a lie... The truth is you were holding her to keep her warm while I was freezing deep inside...

2. You asked what was wrong and I forced a smile and said nothing. Then when you had walked away I whispered... everything

3. What do you do when you're falling for the one who won't catch you as you fall?

4. Take this sharp razor.
Sign your name on my wrists.
So everyone who see me can know
Who left me like this.

5. You said you never wanted to see me hurt, so tell me... do you close your eyes whenever you're with me?



Ok the rules.

Freeverse only!
No unconventional capitals.
No erotica.
Don't use too much swearing.

Make it sad... Make it dark... Make me want to cry...

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 14, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    ok. as usual this was a really hard contest to judge.
    some of you didn't read my rules and so I'm sorry but you didn't place because of it (even though they were all great poems). my 7 winners were placed because they followed rules and were what I considered the best - some of you may disagree but this is my opinion.
    ok.

    thanks to everyone for entering and well done to you all.

    I hope you all continue to write beautiful poetry.

    BittersweetPhantasm

Contest Winners

  1. -+- Just a Toy -+-
    by Desire 31 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 28 2:16 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Love's Goodbye To Life
    Through the kindest sentiment you tainted my very soul.
    You took hold of me and broke me down.
    by blueyez 14 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 28 5:38 AM 2007. In Dark, Love, Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Ice Cold with Red Wrists
    The way you left, another lover on  your arm,
    Tellin me  you love me, but time to move on.
    by PassionsPromise 28 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 12 10:45 PM 2007. In dark, pain, sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2686689, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Catch Me
    by Shiro Okami 29 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 2 3:02 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Sad, Weird, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Defunct Emotions
    Make me lost in oblivion
    End this life long turmoil
    by SuiCiDaLKiSs 33 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 3 3:54 PM 2007. In Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2684174, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Desire gold member
    March 14, 2007
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    Thank You-

    Thank You for the trophy and points!
    I am Honored and Appreciative
    Congratulations to all who placed

    Magnificent contest idea!!
    Look forward to the next one~
    Thank You for Hosting!!
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 14, 2007
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    Thanks!!!!

    I was surprised to sign on and se that i won a bronze..wohoo. CONGRATS TO ALL THAT PLACED and to all entrants. I believe there where many great works. If following a little more to holders rules i think i wouldnt of placed . Great job one and all.