not everyone can sit down and write a *masterpeice*
how annoying to try and try but not get it right!
so this is for those who are NOT so good at poetry
and not very good at spelling and grammar
ENTER THIS!
RULES!
none!
also anyone may join our family group
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/%20honey%20bears%20new%20family%20group
where our members will give you help and encouragement to improve,
i will be adding to the prizes as we go along
how annoying to try and try but not get it right!
so this is for those who are NOT so good at poetry
and not very good at spelling and grammar
ENTER THIS!
RULES!
none!
also anyone may join our family group
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/%20honey%20bears%20new%20family%20group
where our members will give you help and encouragement to improve,
i will be adding to the prizes as we go along
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 4, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: oh dear there were many strange writes and many that seemed not to fit the contest at all..
i hope you all agree with my choice of winners for i think they are all in need of a little help in one way or another
Contest Winners
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by Edna Sweetlove 14 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 19 7:19 AM 2007. In Humour, Gay, Rude
Silver trophy winner
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by Zorro69 28 lines, 20 comments, on Nov 16 9:50 AM 2005. In Adult humour, Contemporary, Excrement
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [32]
1 - 32 of 32
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I didnt know that you were here
watching me silently as i fellby butchbec 24 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 4 8:47 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The father sits as his desk, his eyes blank
Staring into something he cannot see• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
'There were dreams I dare not see
For the reason of they breaking me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i am in the navy... somedays this is how i feel. i know its short... this way it felt more real!by medicalpoet 8 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 25 12:36 PM 2007. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tell me it's okay
If I'm not perfect• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Is a connection between a man and a woman...by lightfly 5 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 19 4:31 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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There is so much in this world to live for.
You wouldn't think so to look at me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Writing that is what I should do
Wait I just cant’ move• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Will you help me to learn how to mend my broken heart
Can't you hear my cry,at least understand why.....
I might leave to enter my tomb..by Angel Felice Seals 44 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 16 7:38 PM 2007. In abuse, sad, love.personal, thoughts, life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know you didnt mean it when you left
and I'm sorry I didnt make it on Saturday• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Give me the time I so desire,
Put a torch next to my kindling fire.by quinatilla 13 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 15 8:03 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My smile wakens for no such reason.
I walk the corridors laden with weight,by Island-Gal 14 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 20 2:18 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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A glimpse of me
is all you see,by Despondent 13 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 20 7:42 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I'm sorry,
I found someone else.by LilMrsAttitude 33 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 2 4:09 AM 2007. In Love, Relationships, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to wake up
Someone please help me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What do you let in your heart,
what do I mine?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Goosebumps appear everywhere on her arm
Vision blurry;not able to see• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
All things damned
and everything lost• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
At the genesis of life,
to wax is harder than to cut yourself with a knife.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
pressed flowers
deathby vivela 40 lines, 26 comments, on Jan 17 6:43 PM 2007. In life and death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart bleeds for salvation
for my burdens weight is highby unanswered 19 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 28 7:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I will recommend a few people to enter this. You will be inundated!
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What a great idea for a contest, good luck everyone
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i like this idea!!
im new to allpoetry
so i entered
good luck to all my competitors
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i like the idea of this contest.. pretty kool!
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