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The perfect poem

So now instead of making a contest where you must write a poem as close to a certain topic, I would like anyone daring to write the:

PERFECT RHYMING POEM.

This poem must have:
1)perfect male and/or female rhymes (no rhyming tame with cane)
2)a consistant beat (whether iambic or trochaic or whatever, I should be able to tell)-it can have different amounts of beats every 2nd line par exapmla, so long as it's a pattern.
3)Proper use of iamb type words... if you want the vocalized beats every second one, put words in it that will MAKE them work (they DO exist)

RULES:
NO FREE VERSE-I will automatically DQ any free verse poems, no comments. If you write a rhyming poem that doesn't flow, I will tell you.
REMEMBER, the goal is to write a "perfect" poem, in form, not content.

NO Erotica
NO Swearing
NO Sticky caps
NO Chat lingo
If it is not spellchecked, I will be ON YOUR ASS!

I'm not a mean guy, so don't be afraid to ask any (contest related) question.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 3, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Ok guys, thank you all for your entries. Out of the 37 entries, 27 made it in the finalist list... the other 10 really had very little fulfilment of the requirements... and really didn't seem to care about the contest at all. Those who got in the top 27, they all are in order of how I judged them, and if you don't like what position I put you in, remember, this contest was to see who could write the perfect poem according to MY standards, and I judged them based on how closely you followed the rules and requirements!

    Congrats on those who got trophies, you definitely deserved them! Can't wait until I can afford another large contest!

Contest Winners

  1. Your blush has dropped my Mountain's sun behind
    this kiss of Sillouette's remembered hill
    by kaibab 23 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 17 7:48 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Love, Nature
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. To you my special Valentine,
    upon this day for love.
    by Grey Mouser 37 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 21 1:40 AM 2007. In Love, Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Another Spenserian stanza (it's better than the old one, if I may say so myself... )

    Actually, it's not a spenserian.... I mixed up two
    by Regenhart 9 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 23 4:56 AM 2007. In Personal, Life, Love, Nature
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2571746, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. I need a poem that flows like rivers wild
    Choose perfect words that match each one in line
    by JustADutchie 38 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 26 3:11 AM 2007. In Humor, Personal, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by Viyanna Rosemarie 16 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 15 9:05 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Sorry but.....I had to save your soul....
    by ProjectBLACKROSE 28 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 14 5:07 PM 2007. In Dark, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. My thoughts from an immortal point of view.
    by Damusen 32 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 28 6:26 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. She was looking through
    her old music books
    by meanderingbear 25 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 22 7:04 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. More Scots dreams or visions.
    by Bazza 49 lines, 31 comments, on Dec 31 11:39 PM 2006. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Oh God, I ask Thee every day for strength
    To rise and live though life's uncounted twists.
    by NotAMolly 16 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 8 11:11 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Prayer, Parenting, Special-needs
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. by DancingRed 17 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 5 11:59 PM 2007. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Drawn to thy beauty, grace rains down;
    I choose this drowning than a drought –
    by smithlarryw 14 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 25 9:36 PM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2635967, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  15. by Shenton 45 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 24 4:03 PM 2007. In Humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. M16's, grenades, and flame
    Setting me forever in fame
    by Amor E Morte 38 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 17 5:46 PM 2007. In War, Wicked Humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  17. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2633782, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  18. Chillin' in my room just passin' the time
    Sittin in my chair lettin' thoughts flow
    by Davitude 48 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 22 9:12 AM 2007. In lyrics, thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  19. This dreadful day comes once a year
    catches me by surprise,
    by poet-guy17 29 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 12 8:39 PM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Love, Personal, Lyrics
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  20. You don't know how I'm feeling.
    As we sit in the sunrise.
    by xxalixxh 38 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 15 1:02 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Trial and Error
    February 15, 2007
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    Hm...
    Not my view of a perfect poem...however, good luck with it.


  • Ontarah
    February 16, 2007
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    I have a poem that might fit this but unfortunately it is VERY long. Do you have a line limit?


  • xandercheerios
    February 16, 2007
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    Man this sucks, I really was hoping for more original poems, but so far, only 3/21 are not pre-writes. Oh well, I guess that's what I get!


  • DancingRed
    March 3, 2007
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    Thanks for placing my poem in the finalists of a great contest. Conrgats to the winners.


  • Grey Mouser
    March 3, 2007
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    Thank you for the trophy. I am honored. Congratulations to al finalists and placers.

    Thank you host for a great contest. I know it must have been difficult. Well done.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • JustADutchie gold member
    March 4, 2007
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    Thanks for the HM and congrats to the winners. It was a pleasure to participate

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