I know inspiration strikes at it's on fancy so for this,I want your prewrites plan and simple. I don't care if they have swearing, erotica is fine, any thing you have I just ask that you enter ONLY once!
JUST one rule:
No sticky caps it makes my head hurt.
No ready set go!
Give me your prewrites!
JUST one rule:
No sticky caps it makes my head hurt.
No ready set go!
Give me your prewrites!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 19, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: EVERYONE'S poem will get commented on and get applause. Very sorry for any trouble it caused.
Thank you all for entering there were many wonderful poems. I am sorry that I was unable to comment all the entries I have been busy of late and barely found the time to go through them. Once again I am sorry if I did not comment on your poem. This contest was fun and I enjoyed the poems. Thanks everyone! And congrats to the winners!
Contest Winners
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Lithium Dreams
Shattered fragments• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The curtains are drawn
to block out the light,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
don't try to enrapture me
with promises of fancied thingsby Almighty Aphrodite 60 lines, 11 comments, on May 21 1:12 PM 2005. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
AP Name : Lotus of Lakshmi
Option 3 :Goddess Brigidby Sai Babas Lotus 45 lines, 117 comments, on Jan 27 12:41 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [101]
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by PentiBabe 25 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 11 6:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A zip A zap A zoodle
A blue a green and a red noodleby AwesomeJoshsome 7 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 24 12:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I think it's good...and it needs comments, so....by in silver script 29 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 14 5:54 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I walk through this world alone,
a simple traveler on this long empty stretch of road.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Within darkness
you will always find light• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A fallen regiment about me
a field where a thousand corpses lieby Chibi-chan 77 lines, 32 comments, on Jan 13 1:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stand at the mouth of oblivion
Happiness anchors my body from the dangers of the voidby Petite Mort 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 15 12:29 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They were stars on sunset blvd.
Rulers of grunge• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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different
The reactions I get when I walk in a room,
You can hear their heart beats, BOOM, BOOM.by unseen influence 18 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 8 8:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's rare moments like these when
I want to cry.by bignikki88 62 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 10:33 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I feel your very heartbeat within my chest
even when denied a second of your silky touch• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
non-virgin lips are left untouched
cold in the distance from another• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sparks fly on wild wings of wind
Colors of the earth• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I stood in the gymnasium today
a hundred plus packed inby Maybe Anastasia 32 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 2 3:57 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Remember June 4th, 2006?
It was the happiest day of my life.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Morphine Room
Painfully sterilized, spitting images of clean pervade these protracted halls.by SmileFromGlasgow 28 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 18 11:44 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Our life was worth it, our was death a waste;
Such sweet air, never again to taste;by Dead Eyes 36 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 21 8:38 PM 2006. In Emo, Sad, Dark, Pain, Depressed, Depression, Death, Sadness, Teenage thinking• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
All she ever wanted was to be told that she's [beautiful]
[But she's always to busy kissing l.i.a.r.s
&& loving guys not so right for her• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm just a person,
I'm rusted old chains,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Like the sun that watches over all,
And the flowers that guide your every step.by PoetrysAngel2041 28 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 9 4:41 PM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
this is saposed to be a sad poem its based on the life of a lil girl i used to know.(unfortunatly, that girl.,..was...me.)by torn-apart-angel 18 lines, 23 comments, on Feb 15 5:33 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Daniella elizabeth 33 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 15 3:13 PM 2007. In Friendship, My life, Lost in thought, Teen issues, Self• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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in the dark and unforgiving night
when the world has lain to rest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Some people sell alcohol to people in tears
and bruises in their hearts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My head feels
In another directionby earlhopkins 20 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 19 12:43 AM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He whispered words of sweet seduction,
filled with more words of beautiful
regret that snowballed hatredby Amythest Moonjade 39 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 29 10:44 PM 2006. In Critical, Dark, Death, Contemporay• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She finally met her demise
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You see her, her hair shining like golden wheat in a farmer's field in June
Her eyes shining like diamonds in a sea of pure white beauty.by JustWhoIAm 40 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 16 3:08 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
… You’re here. I find a subtle glow.
Imagination? I don’t know.by smithlarryw 12 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 18 10:05 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As I lay here
brby Syriane 18 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 23 8:57 PM 2006. In Sad, Weird, Inspirational, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As I lay here
brby Syriane 18 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 23 8:57 PM 2006. In Sad, Weird, Inspirational, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Waiting to embark to the voice of love.
My spirit enchanted with that land concealed.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
One of my newest... hope you like it!by Saxyncreative 14 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 15 8:01 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My weary eyes are heavy
With the images of many years• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Standing there,
breathing softly.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Think of it as the way you would speak of the person who saved you.by Lord Darius Avalion 35 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 31 11:36 PM 2007. In Love, Spiritual, Hope, Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I,thank you for calling me,"Beautiful"
I,thank you for being there for me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She trips and falls over a dead body,
She looks at it and see it is herself,by Felix BlackHeart 27 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 4 3:20 AM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm standing at the crossroads
The intersection of love and hate• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I hate this feeling,
that's building up inside me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Friends and enemies are all the same• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I searched high and low , no halo did i find.
I keep spinning around and around,
I think am going out of my mind.....by Angel Felice Seals 19 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 13 12:41 AM 2007. In Humor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
death came for me
brby the pauper prince 13 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 1 1:48 AM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She does not act, nor he believe
Both of them victims in murderous schemeby dove4365 19 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 16 2:12 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This really sucks but that is ok. Just something I scribbled down a few nights ago.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How can you call it heartache?
Being with someoneby Papers 13 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 7 7:11 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Lone Defender 28 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 9 4:56 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When I was two,
I was running down the street nudeby love me 4 who i am 32 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 16 9:25 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by malkinpuss 80 lines, 119 comments, on Nov 20 9:38 PM 2004. In Fantasy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Yours-To-Have 37 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 2 11:01 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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a love so deep that only God knows
a symbol I give of 1 blooming rose• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The magnificent beauty rises
And caries me to my grave• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She finally got out
Finally set free• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
to a mother of many who may be able to see what i seeby Word Artisan 31 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 7 3:00 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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the kiss etched on my memory• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I love the picture
*goes off to enter*
Best of luck with the contest -
Wowzers.... You've got a lot of reading.
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Pretty shameful
22 coments with the balance of 179 writings un commented....perhaps in the future you should hold contest with limits of 20 entries...this way you can handle the weight of having to comment on them....just a suggestion of course
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So we meet again.
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Is that a good thing?
or bad? LOL
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Well... it happens while we're getting screwed, so I suppose that depends on your perspective. :-)
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This is strange...I got notice as to the contest results, but I don't see any entry I've made to the contest. I've scanned through the list quickly a couple of times, but maybe my eyes are tired and I'm missing it? I dunno...Maybe just another AP glitch at my end, who knows?
CONGRATULATIONS to all the winners!
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try page two
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Thanks for the silver. Congrats to the other winners.
Chelsea
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I was disappointed that this contest wasn't fairly judged... but we worked it out.
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Thanks for a great contest. Congrats to the winners.
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