ok....
i want somthing that has alot of emotion in it. and it has to tell a story.
i want to feel the pain that you have felt and how its built up.
i want to see alot of images through your whole peice.
i want to feel your anger, or sadness, or depression, or pain, or hurting etc... make me cry, make me feel your pain.
i want the trueth, dont bother making up a story for me to read that hasnt come from your past (or present).
i want a real story that has changed you, something you can never forget. somthing you've never let go off completely
i DONT wat any poems that you have won trophies on already.
i DONT want to have happy stories. happy endings are simply stories that havent finished yet.
i DONT want to see heart break, of how the 'love of your life' broke up with you and its the end of the world.
i DONT want a poem telling the story of an arguement u had with a freind. unless it has gone on for along time and truely affected you.
i also DONT want aNy WrItTiNg LiKe ThIs, it just makes it harder for people to read.
some ideas/topics:
~cutting/carving/burning
~suicide/attempted suicide
~death of a loved one
~rape/sexual abuse
~child abuse
~any other abuse
~eating disorders
~family fights
~divorces
~pregnancey
i dont really like poems without a flow or rhyme to them, but be sure to enter them anyway if you think they suit this contest
I am allowing pre-writes but id preffer to see poems that have just been written. but if your pre-write is emotive and shows alot of images about what you have felt/feel, then be sure to enter.
everybody is welcome. if you think you've got what it takes please enter!
good luck...
i want somthing that has alot of emotion in it. and it has to tell a story.
i want to feel the pain that you have felt and how its built up.
i want to see alot of images through your whole peice.
i want to feel your anger, or sadness, or depression, or pain, or hurting etc... make me cry, make me feel your pain.
i want the trueth, dont bother making up a story for me to read that hasnt come from your past (or present).
i want a real story that has changed you, something you can never forget. somthing you've never let go off completely
i DONT wat any poems that you have won trophies on already.
i DONT want to have happy stories. happy endings are simply stories that havent finished yet.
i DONT want to see heart break, of how the 'love of your life' broke up with you and its the end of the world.
i DONT want a poem telling the story of an arguement u had with a freind. unless it has gone on for along time and truely affected you.
i also DONT want aNy WrItTiNg LiKe ThIs, it just makes it harder for people to read.
some ideas/topics:
~cutting/carving/burning
~suicide/attempted suicide
~death of a loved one
~rape/sexual abuse
~child abuse
~any other abuse
~eating disorders
~family fights
~divorces
~pregnancey
i dont really like poems without a flow or rhyme to them, but be sure to enter them anyway if you think they suit this contest
I am allowing pre-writes but id preffer to see poems that have just been written. but if your pre-write is emotive and shows alot of images about what you have felt/feel, then be sure to enter.
everybody is welcome. if you think you've got what it takes please enter!
good luck...
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 25, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: ok this contest was so hard to judge, but all contests must end some time. so here is my final thoughts:
1. Starts With One Little Slice
2. Just A Dream
3. Annette
4. Anna Donahue (no prize)
5. Daddy's Little One (no Prize)
now althought numbers 4 & 5 will no win a trophy, i thought i would mention them becuase it was very very close between all 5 of these.
congradulations, and thank you everyone for entering
Take Care
XoXoXoXoXoX
Contest Winners
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As I cried you held me in your arms,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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There was a woman that i once knew.
In the hospital we first met.by Revwilliamfoos 33 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 14 8:44 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
"Why can't you live forever?"
Asked the little girl to her Dad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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In the past,
I have made many a mistake in friendship• Commented on by judge. -
Death has come and you have gone .
Now sorrow has settled in .by Shining for You 23 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 16 8:13 AM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know how it is now
He knows how I feel• Commented on by judge. -
I am what people don’t see
the things that are not in between.by Tempa Lee 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 25 4:20 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Teenage thinking, Anger• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Time is the best healer.
But time for me stands still.by PeteMcKeown 13 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 9 3:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To this day I am scared
Physically and mentally• Commented on by judge. -
Sticky, it clings on...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hundreds of restless nights,
filled with tears,by xxAngelicWingsxx 87 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 8 8:26 PM 2007. In Rape, Dark, Life Lessons, Thoughts, Pain, Sadness, Personal, Escape• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I did what I was told.
I came home and tried to go upstairs.by bignikki88 98 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 28 10:52 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You see me crying all alone,
would you ever think to wonder why?• Commented on by judge. -
You tore me apart
The wordsby Clinging-to-Life 28 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 11 11:04 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her breath escapes her
Crushed beneath the weight of deathby delicate innocence 17 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 21 7:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I was thinking to myself today
Why I live my life this wayby okadadokie 50 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 15 12:12 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, My Life, Personal, Sad, Pain, Depression, Teen Issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They call me an emo
but they don't knowby undyingservent 52 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 15 5:35 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Pain,
True pain…by SoldierOfTheCross 74 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 10 9:49 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can remember it so clearly,
As I started to see• Commented on by judge. -
this is saposed to be a sad poem its based on the life of a lil girl i used to know.(unfortunatly, that girl.,..was...me.)by torn-apart-angel 18 lines, 23 comments, on Feb 15 5:33 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Daniella elizabeth 33 lines, 16 comments, on Feb 15 3:13 PM 2007. In Friendship, My life, Lost in thought, Teen issues, Self• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Up and down goes the chest of a faulty man.
Inhaling more truths and exhaling more lies.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
leaden skies cloak the day
heavy thoughts washed away• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Only two years old
And already scared• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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