Lots of love to everyone! Hey! I'm Amanda and this is my first contest. I'm giving thanks to my friend Taylor for giving me all the points I needed to make this contest possible. Give her a shout out at her two names: alwaysalone09 and neveralone09. She is cool. Now, on with the contest.
I really hate how some people say "no cutting/suicide" when it comes to emotionaly poetry. I write alot about suicide. It is a very emotionally subject. So, now that I have enough points, I am having a contest about suicide. But, not just any suicide. It has to do with love.
How far has your love pushed you? What made you just want to die? Who/What would your thoughts conflict with? Your friend, family, or yourself? What is running through your head as your body goes cold? Did you witness a death? What ran through your head? Anything! Just make is believable. It can be fiction guys!
Rules!-
1. You know better! No StIcKy CaPs! It just makes me hate you.
2.Try to give me your best! I don't want the "I cut myself! I died! I'm happy!" stuff! If you don't want it that way, I wouldn't want that.
3. Please tell me if your expirenece is true or not. It really makes people upset when people think it is true, but really you don't know what is going on.
4. Don't talk like "lol" and "omg" and stuff like that. This is a serious topic. If you can't take it seriously, then I don't think I can take YOU seriously...ever!
5. NEW! IF YOU DON'T DO IT, IT IS OK! BUT I WOULD RECOMEND IT DUE TO IT IS PISSING ME OFF!!!!!!!!! Please make you backgrounds easy to read. I have had way too many poems I can't even read. I have bad eyes guys! If I can't see you poem, I can't judge it!
Those are the rules! If you think I should add something else, message me! Ok? But, before we begin, I will ask you guys one more thing...
Please, please, please, give me the shivers! Make me cry from the pain you are feeling! I want emotions!
Lots of Love to you all!
**Amanda**
NEW!!!-Ok. I was having a hard time, but I'm back! I'm judging the enteries little by little. My friend neveralone09 will be helping me.
I really hate how some people say "no cutting/suicide" when it comes to emotionaly poetry. I write alot about suicide. It is a very emotionally subject. So, now that I have enough points, I am having a contest about suicide. But, not just any suicide. It has to do with love.
How far has your love pushed you? What made you just want to die? Who/What would your thoughts conflict with? Your friend, family, or yourself? What is running through your head as your body goes cold? Did you witness a death? What ran through your head? Anything! Just make is believable. It can be fiction guys!
Rules!-
1. You know better! No StIcKy CaPs! It just makes me hate you.
2.Try to give me your best! I don't want the "I cut myself! I died! I'm happy!" stuff! If you don't want it that way, I wouldn't want that.
3. Please tell me if your expirenece is true or not. It really makes people upset when people think it is true, but really you don't know what is going on.
4. Don't talk like "lol" and "omg" and stuff like that. This is a serious topic. If you can't take it seriously, then I don't think I can take YOU seriously...ever!
5. NEW! IF YOU DON'T DO IT, IT IS OK! BUT I WOULD RECOMEND IT DUE TO IT IS PISSING ME OFF!!!!!!!!! Please make you backgrounds easy to read. I have had way too many poems I can't even read. I have bad eyes guys! If I can't see you poem, I can't judge it!
Those are the rules! If you think I should add something else, message me! Ok? But, before we begin, I will ask you guys one more thing...
Please, please, please, give me the shivers! Make me cry from the pain you are feeling! I want emotions!
Lots of Love to you all!
**Amanda**
NEW!!!-Ok. I was having a hard time, but I'm back! I'm judging the enteries little by little. My friend neveralone09 will be helping me.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 22, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you for entering my contest! I'm soooo sorry it took soo long to judge. I didn't get to comment everyone's, but you all did a good job! Thank you!
Contest Winners
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My heart pours with pain
It spills out my thoughts
That will never be saidby SoundofMadness 31 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 5 1:25 PM 2007. In love, suicide, death
Gold trophy winner
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She sits on her bed
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I lay dying
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Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [79]
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Its like, you could be there in their arms, and it could be perfect but something is still missing
you can't figure out what it is thoughby Firegirl86 69 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 5 1:46 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Love, Teen issues, Loss, Other, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
As I sit here tonight, I want to cut
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I'll say what I have to say
Then I swear I'll try and go awayby Clinging-to-Life 36 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 29 8:25 PM 2007. In Personal, Pain, Loss, Dedication, non-fiction• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My soul is dieing
My heart is turning coldby DepressedAngel 8 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 12 12:21 AM 2006. In My life, Sad, Personal, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by UrbaN PlaguE 37 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 7 4:07 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"I'll love you forever and ever, "we'd say
But we never knew how quick it would come to beby FollowingFate 95 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 7 12:35 PM 2007. In Suicide, Love, Anxiety, Inner Battles, Weird, Contest Poem, Romeo and Juliet• Commented on by judge. -
Ive only dated a few, some I held closer then the others.
But none the less, i've had my share of love an lust.by Necrocide 32 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 5 8:03 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the cold damp day is all in a disarray
we sit and we wait for the chance of the new dayby broken12 71 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 25 4:32 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The telephone rings again
"Why?Why do you do this to me?"by themaddhatter 42 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 5 6:59 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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One slice across the wrist,
Can you hear the blood falling?
One slice for every time you've hit me,• Commented on by judge. -
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I've tried to learn to live this way
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I seek comfort in my sorrows,
My life is filled with woe,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Above it all it hurts the most
When you know there’s no chance.
No place to belong in their heart.by flaed 30 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 24 6:07 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Twilight Masquerade 74 lines, 21 comments, on Feb 5 7:57 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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So much to think about
Is it ever possible?by KaYySeE 53 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 5 8:45 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
She wrote down her reasons for her sin,
with tears running down her faceby punkangel90 28 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 14 8:08 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you said you loved me
you said you caredby Schoolgirl2112 40 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 18 2:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Shy away from love,
to avoid the loss of death.by uhhzebras 7 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 5 2:52 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I close my eyes and see us and how we used to be
I smile and nod my head then gently at first I put the razor against my wrist
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My ghosts and me
The cold wind blows• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As the knife sits here
what should I do• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the scars on her wrist
were your name carved into her skin deep• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Just a little quick prick
A addicts needed fix• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I've recorded this message for you-
my tears made ink and graphite bleed...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Misshapen Duality
Misshapen duality, created by a plastic stencil; synthetic.by SmileFromGlasgow 31 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 19 10:52 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My room floats under your arches.
Through the railings I passby Ink Shadow 10 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 20 1:06 PM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
this is to prove love is forever• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I Get Into A Situation That Is Just Too Much.
It's All My Fault.by coeurporcelaine 34 lines, 3 comments, on May 9 8:18 PM 2005. In Abuse• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
why are you leaving?
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she sat in the darkness
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i stared from afar waiting for my day
and when it came she was took awayby poetic assasin 12 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 17 8:10 AM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Her grace incomparable
Beauty exquisite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
my age is catching up on me,
i can no longer hold back time,
im die-ing more and more daily,by averagemale 48 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 25 4:28 AM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I LOVED YOU
YOU LEFT ME• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I stand in awe of a raging sea
With hand clasped full of lifeless earth.by asimplepoeticmind 19 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 7 6:44 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Young girl,
Bleeding heart,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Here I am, alone in the dark, Carving away at my latest mark. Because without you I am just an empty shell. Trapped living insiby saxophonicwolf 10 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 13 5:36 PM 2006. In Emotastic• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This note was found at a scene in which
A girl comitted suicide...by BenziRae 58 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 17 7:20 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
The tears keep falling
They just won’t stopby loveisthemoment 38 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 16 10:36 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Your my ever lasting poison
I drink from you to heal me
You turn around and kill meby -Tears Of Pain- 34 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 22 12:33 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Depression, Sadness, Sad Love• Viewed by judge. -
What do you want from me?
I gave you my heart, my soul.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
'Dont you just wish we could run away together?'
Yeah like I wish• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The pieces of my broken heart and soul
Scattered on the groundby LoNeLy-StAr 32 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 6 12:37 AM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
And who was to say I wouldn't give it any thought at all?
The staples planted paper on the wall the night before,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Silent Agony
Written By Lisa Morrisby DarkestAngel68 35 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 26 9:38 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
This poem is a collection of feelings from personal experience and fellow friends. I haven't really experience real "love" either so its ooby bloved 29 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 21 6:58 PM 2007. In Love, Lost love, Anger, Personal, Teen issues, Teenage thinking• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I saw you drive up
in that piece of shitby sharkofdhoom 34 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 23 4:27 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It seems so hard to live,
To breathe, to try and pretend,by Bailey Girl 107 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 2:16 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
She can be found on the highest mountain top,
where the sun never reveals her facial features.
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by writhing infection....this is kinda real...i mean its what i went through but I'm still here I didn't jump..• Viewed by judge.
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All she ever wanted was someone to love&love her back.
Then he came along,and they soon became fast friends,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I put my tender heart
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"...For those of you who live a LIFE without LOVE..."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Bittersweet nights alone in this obscure, useless town
You'd take my hand and we'd walk like we owned this place
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I'm your fucking wife
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it's like taking a breath
when there's no more air;;by CarCrashHumor 56 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 1 9:35 PM 2007. In Personal• Viewed by judge. -
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Weepy and forlorn,
I think of thoseby MissFeisty 59 lines, on Mar 1 9:53 PM 2007. In My Family• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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muhahahah?
hey amanda i'm saying great topic choice
thats gonna be sweet! i also noticed you have many ppl already!! YaY haHhha Do YoU HAtE ME yet? lmao jk so how abotu this cold day? sweetness!!! i love it!! lol ne ways good luck on your contest and thanks for the shout out. i think i'll wounder and read some writes that are entered now....muhahahhahah jk ttyl about stuff don't forget the game towmarrow!!! and yes i know my typing sux! bye!
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i agree with the statement about not limiting what you can write when on the topic of suicide!!! great that every entry is free to write it exactly how they want, good on you and congrats on hosting a great contest,
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I think limiting it to suicide cripples the range of emotions you will receive, it helps nothing and while it narrows the field, it kills the feel.
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There are limitless possibilities when it comes to expressing yourself regarding suicide...
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thank you! I thank you again for saying that.
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man u gots lots of poems to read, thats pretty crazy, i wish u the best of luck with it! its pretty good for ur first contest! my first only had about 7 but i had pretty good winners so it was all good. newho have fun!!
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thanks Kami!
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This really is a beautiful idea for a contest.
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Thank you. I hate how people say they don't like suicide as a choice. I know it is their preferance, but they could get sooo much more poetry if that was an option. Thank you again. I hope you enter!
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The Ice Queen
Mine is true but, is set in a third person.
So, instead of saying I, I, I.
People can better relate to it.
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True...
As like most of my work, it is indeed true. It's the story of my life... -
Sorry for taking so long to judge!
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Thank you very much for the bronze trophy. Congrats to the other winners as well. ~
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