Im lonely im lost and im hurt
if you feel the same tell me write it out
let it out let me feel your pain
two options make this brief
1~ your in relationship but you give all your heart receive nothing back tell me how lonely isolated and hurt you feel
2~ youve been cheated on by him or her
your lost confused and angry lash it out on here let me here it let me know how fucked up the world really is and im not only one bc everybody else seems to be doing perfect while im crashing down
so if youve had experience with either one these two scenarios let me now write it out *** hugs have fun
you make me cry get mucho bonus points but dont be sappy please
xxlorren
if you feel the same tell me write it out
let it out let me feel your pain
two options make this brief
1~ your in relationship but you give all your heart receive nothing back tell me how lonely isolated and hurt you feel
2~ youve been cheated on by him or her
your lost confused and angry lash it out on here let me here it let me know how fucked up the world really is and im not only one bc everybody else seems to be doing perfect while im crashing down
so if youve had experience with either one these two scenarios let me now write it out *** hugs have fun
you make me cry get mucho bonus points but dont be sappy please
xxlorren
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 13, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 60, Bronze: 30
- Final notes: And the winners are:
Dolour de hier (Song for Karen)
by cafegroundzero
Save Me From Myself
by broadwayboy16
fallen angel
by RebelJester
Contest Winners
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After all these years,
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Leave me with my memories.
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shes a fallen angel now
that wench that left me dryby RebelJester 33 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 4 4:05 AM 2007. In Love, Dark, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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I just took all my frustration out in this one... I don't think it's really about any of your options, but I hope this makes you feel betteby Lily Rosalia 22 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 3 4:08 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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ummmm ya i just wrote this because i was told to write more poetry and i saw some inspiration in this• Commented on by judge.
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Every word I read fuels the rage,
Pulse racing faster--by Lone Defender 47 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 3 4:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I am; a bird who has forgotten how to fly
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If I knew the song would have come true
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life has a way of kicking you in the sensitive spot
that one spot that is not physical that hearts more than a broke heart• Commented on by judge. -
i sit in the dark,cry alone
wonder why it got this farby XInsanity-FairX 19 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 6 4:56 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I hate the friends that make you feel like shit knowing that
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Once entranced by your love so deep
Smelling her perfume I begin to weepby unanswered 24 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 13 11:29 PM 2007. In love personal sad dark• Commented on by judge. -
Sometimes I wonder
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i told him i loved him
he said he loved me tooby live in love 25 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 15 9:09 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
oh gosh im all by myself.• Commented on by judge.
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Not much to say here, just glad I don't have to put up with some people anymore lol.by Kayla Fuller 32 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 16 4:47 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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i can't forget when we met
you recruited me among this crowd• Commented on by judge.
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Good luck with your contest hun!
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LOVE U
thanks babe i love you man*
talk to you soon miss you*
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There is a lot of hurt and betrayal and pure pain in this contest. It makes a person really question if love is truly worth the risk, but I for one having almost and maybe still lost the love of my eternity would still dance that dance all over again knowing what I know, but I would also not for to spare that same love the waisted time and the dissapointing heart ache that came from loving someone who was for them not enough, GReat Contest and you have a lot of really great entries, thanks for a place to be read and to read some really great writes,!!!
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