Hi guys, this is my first conetest, not like you care. Well i want you guys to write to your full potential. what i want is for you to make me cry, seeing as i don't seem to be able to do that anymore. i want to really feel the emotion in your poetry.
Options:
1. You know that lovely feeling when you lose someone who means the world to you and it's all your fault? write about it. simple.
2. Write about the person who made you so happy, and was suddenly ripped out of your arms so unjustly it felt unreal.
*please put ur choice in the authors comment box*
Rules:
1. no StIcKy cApS
2. no1 under 16 please, sorry guys
some styles i really like are shakesperean poetry and the use of extented metaphors.
please guys don't force your rhyme scheme, i want your poetry to flow.
cool thanx a lot ppl, much love xx Izzy
UPDATE::
Hey guys, of all the poems i've read so far, they've all been about the death of a loved one. I want some people to write about someone that they lost in another way. someone who left you or someone that you hurt and pushed away, like a best friend. anyway keep up the good work
xx Izzy
Options:
1. You know that lovely feeling when you lose someone who means the world to you and it's all your fault? write about it. simple.
2. Write about the person who made you so happy, and was suddenly ripped out of your arms so unjustly it felt unreal.
*please put ur choice in the authors comment box*
Rules:
1. no StIcKy cApS
2. no1 under 16 please, sorry guys
some styles i really like are shakesperean poetry and the use of extented metaphors.
please guys don't force your rhyme scheme, i want your poetry to flow.
cool thanx a lot ppl, much love xx Izzy
UPDATE::
Hey guys, of all the poems i've read so far, they've all been about the death of a loved one. I want some people to write about someone that they lost in another way. someone who left you or someone that you hurt and pushed away, like a best friend. anyway keep up the good work
xx Izzy
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 11, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Thank you to everyone who enetered my contest. im sorry i didnt manage to comment on all of you but grade 11 only allows so much free time. well done to the winners, hope to read more of your peotry soon
xxx Izzy
Contest Winners
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There used to be a sunset in her eyes
As she sat crossed legged while holding her cigarette• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Passion's Fire ...
Wandika 2-8-2007• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
How does it feel to have my Daddy?
Does he tell you that he'll stay?• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Entries [14]
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The news sent waves of
excitment and fear raging through eager veinsby maryjanes 52 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 29 3:50 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
You came from the same old neighborhood
A lost cause, they called you no good• Commented on by judge. -
Sitting in a silent room
listening to my heartbeatby poeticmike 27 lines, on Feb 9 6:43 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
Do you know I love you?
Does it matter anymore?• Viewed by judge. -
Fate has taken its toll once more
To leave us lifeless shocked deeply to the core.by LittleMissRevenge 23 lines, on Feb 10 6:18 PM 2007. In Sad• Viewed by judge.
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I have a prewrites... but none otherwise, as it will depress me writing it... Some things are just better not brought up.
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ok here goes
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hi... i replaced my old poem
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Thank you so much, so very much...this means the world to me right now when everything seems to be going wrong.
Kris Lynn
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