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Its always Rainin' in my Head

Alright kids.
I want lyrics or poems, no stories please.
I haven't done one of these in quiet sometime.
However, I have so many fricken points, I REALLY just wanna hand em' out.

I DO NOT want cutter poems/lyrics.
Honestly, I think blade, blood and all that can be used in a more powerful metaphorical form than the typical cutter-style poem/Lyric.

Basically, all I'm looking for is something SEETHING with meaning, or controversy.

THINGS THAT WIN ME OVER
These things typically make me like your work.

-Sarcasm.
-Controversial beleifs.
-Cursing used in a articulate, or powerful manner.
-A punk-rock vibe.
-Real, raw emotion.

*I will comment on most the entries, and leave suggestions if I feel it needs work, or just to say good work.

*I hate when I do enter a contest, and you cant have pre-writes. So there are some allowed here. But allow some room for fresh free-written work, please.

Okay.
GO!


-C.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 23, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Alright boys and girls; gouls and clowns.
    I closed the contest early due to amount of entires and the rapid and steady increase.
    Your writes were overall very good.
    Most have fantastic structre, and seethes with some emotion.
    Congratulations to the winners, you kids are fucking brutal.



    -Clementine Comatose

Contest Winners

  1. The Protagonist
    Ive been mistaken
    Confusing toxic for light
    by zetsuie 50 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 2 7:58 PM 2006. In Personal, Society, Dark
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. don't throw me outside in the rain.
    i'm outside in the rain.
    again.
    by Floorboards 30 lines, 31 comments, on Apr 4 1:38 PM 2006. In Adult, Society, Angst
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2510872, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. Drop
    Drop the pencil on the paper
    Words flow in my head
    by princessarya 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 22 3:33 PM 2007. In Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2548204, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. Art for Arts Sake.
    Off beat heart beats dance out rhapsodical rythems
    and convince musicians to die and take theyre guitars with them
    by coin operated benji 13 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 13 12:41 AM 2006. In Society, Music.
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Floorboards
    January 23, 2007
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    thank you very much for the silver trophy!


  • Vernal Bloom
    January 23, 2007
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    Congratulations to all specially the winners and thanks for wonderful idea for the contest :-)