TiReD oF uPdAtEs Update : February 25th 2007, I promise to judge this Monday. May Carolyn go with that unbroken! /\ Tuesday sweeter to give everyone last chance?
I have a quack of a week feelings :
I have a Daisy, my child
but I'm not pegged for another
every morning I'm told, 'look at your ankles'
and not look at the flowers, oh, noetheless!
I can rhyme and be ready to be pregnant
I want a baby that looks like me, jokingly
finding duplication anyway in the blonde
who has my elbow at things
would've I seen it sooner if it were my asking
not brooming Daddy to guarantee brunette
when preparation is for a tuxedo technically
with fittings for a relationship with commit zip
and how I see myself a misfit with a farce of want is fancy
if unhealthily ignoring until.
Scallions hairy ends
bitten in bunches
like gleaning a wheat harvest or a Thursday
and retaurnable will be Hungry For A Reason.
Fluff the sheet, a cloudy day chores scrambled
lay down again, sunny one, calm
SPECIAL UPDATE : I was planning on concluding this by 2/15/07 or soon after, but I've had internet problems and comments getting accidentally wiped out. I'll periodically copy/paste saves to prevent a total rework to be done in the chance it happens again.
No accosting you for maybe costing me, please feel well settled for the hello.
Firstly, on the photo, picture an on/off shoulder caped neckline for waking or just somebody nourishing s o n g. I would cut off the brand tag of lucky baby from the ebay snuggly which can be elevated up and down, as I cut off good luck from this contest but hope you look for what might help you!
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UPDATE : I have unintentionally identitified the first entrant's name on January 30, 2007. It makes no difference on my opinions made previously, and I'm to now be showing myself behaving, so no omissions of duties. But I plan on not knowing any one else's names, as I'm vigilant of more things to avoid, myself...
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I am trying to keep extending this contest for the trophies quota to be filled so I don't have to delete the whole thing at the expense of some who seemed to have worked for this.
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ANOTHER UPDATE : I have previously seen a portion of the second entry's poem, so I know her too... when I had to use the computer she shares with Dad, the proper name between them, I clicked on an open document instead of the dictionary intended and in that instance two lines were known for memory -- which finally matched with an end of a piece read here yesterday 2/4/07. I want to make all efforts for there to be no favoritism expressed since bias is not a trophy to be handed out!
I still then would keep everyone else nameless until the end, for concentration's segment to be remembered as the poem. I hope the invite is still a foyer and not for furor.
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This will be done with blind judging.
1. No communicating to me about your poem, except through author's notes and edits to your piece.
2. Additionally on your author's notes, request commenting to be done without author's name, to save me the accidental slip of scrolling & allow full access.
2a. Please reserve replying ON YOUR PAGE to anybody at all until after contest is done. [You can reply on your NOTES from other commenters, directly there when receiving them, if you can't wait.]
My idea for for your poetry :
Make awakening not be a snooze in itself.
Think of the rhyming that can be instilled in an infant's brain to then be able to stimulate skill of raw word recognition at four to six months. Confirm their earlier seeming silence was not wanting only silence!
Therefore, the funNER time is what can be following this.
No askewness for asking!
Don't leave my imagination untattered for finding audience trying along.
Show what can be pointed out in rythm to wow among other things getting to be known, what's right in front of them, so they'll do the pointing or gesturing of speech soon.
If you'll be using an attempt of the youngster in mind, please make it do better, for instance, than ga-ga back and forth: affectionally laugh out loud over avocado/ now nod Oh! Since the slurred speech is from effort wishing to slide it again without a mitten feel of anything being bitten off with a tiny pocket!! Tastefully done until... well.
Do you believe numbers are catchable? There was a studied child who saw four stuffed toy rabbits [don't know if they weren't cotton, ha-ha] and lost interest until one with four ears showed up, for comparison/ not mutation effect, so might we put a bump in the hum of our cadence count?
The emphasis is "Mother's face, baby's face, words in between," because of my wishes to include thoughts at breast-feeding or natural pacifier comfort, time consuming gaze that can watch the mamma's mouth with her/him so much, when she's freed of her own grazes!
Accustomed to more than face?
Frequentations as sessions.
Smiling at the cheek bones throwing a bone so to speak?
not comparable to an incubator with butter?
Smile while you dial though, and think of sounds.
Rules :
1. follow anonymity mentioned above
2. FLORAL background
3. real objects of nature, people for subjects
4. no holiday themes, please.
5. RHYME OR tell me of another cerebral focus at that age in linguistic function, besides flat repitition... ti ti
because BTW, without a beep from a VW, similarities build up matrices for the lips to try by confidence throughout the day yet under alertness for something a little different. {Thus, what I gave had a sample one could slow down for, to develop w, for you, not just feel interruption; brings such up from a noun and another kidding abbreviation sounded as an alternative way of starting letters instead of just alphabet.}
So, choppy disconnected sounds are not from what I've researched * * *
A bop to help remember an earlier hop by.
However they also follow questions as opportunity with what's, where's...! As well as stretched sound.
Poetic with phonetics here?
alliteration, I think of, around 4 o'clock on the computer.
6. grammar, spell check
7. family language, content
8. 30-70 lines, let the love be loved!
9. read it out loud
I wil upadte if I think of anything else.
Please concentrate and then be creative.
I am looking forward to you breaking my talker's block,
Carolyn
I have a quack of a week feelings :
I have a Daisy, my child
but I'm not pegged for another
every morning I'm told, 'look at your ankles'
and not look at the flowers, oh, noetheless!
I can rhyme and be ready to be pregnant
I want a baby that looks like me, jokingly
finding duplication anyway in the blonde
who has my elbow at things
would've I seen it sooner if it were my asking
not brooming Daddy to guarantee brunette
when preparation is for a tuxedo technically
with fittings for a relationship with commit zip
and how I see myself a misfit with a farce of want is fancy
if unhealthily ignoring until.
Scallions hairy ends
bitten in bunches
like gleaning a wheat harvest or a Thursday
and retaurnable will be Hungry For A Reason.
Fluff the sheet, a cloudy day chores scrambled
lay down again, sunny one, calm
SPECIAL UPDATE : I was planning on concluding this by 2/15/07 or soon after, but I've had internet problems and comments getting accidentally wiped out. I'll periodically copy/paste saves to prevent a total rework to be done in the chance it happens again.
No accosting you for maybe costing me, please feel well settled for the hello.
Firstly, on the photo, picture an on/off shoulder caped neckline for waking or just somebody nourishing s o n g. I would cut off the brand tag of lucky baby from the ebay snuggly which can be elevated up and down, as I cut off good luck from this contest but hope you look for what might help you!
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UPDATE : I have unintentionally identitified the first entrant's name on January 30, 2007. It makes no difference on my opinions made previously, and I'm to now be showing myself behaving, so no omissions of duties. But I plan on not knowing any one else's names, as I'm vigilant of more things to avoid, myself...
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I am trying to keep extending this contest for the trophies quota to be filled so I don't have to delete the whole thing at the expense of some who seemed to have worked for this.
#
ANOTHER UPDATE : I have previously seen a portion of the second entry's poem, so I know her too... when I had to use the computer she shares with Dad, the proper name between them, I clicked on an open document instead of the dictionary intended and in that instance two lines were known for memory -- which finally matched with an end of a piece read here yesterday 2/4/07. I want to make all efforts for there to be no favoritism expressed since bias is not a trophy to be handed out!
I still then would keep everyone else nameless until the end, for concentration's segment to be remembered as the poem. I hope the invite is still a foyer and not for furor.
#
This will be done with blind judging.
1. No communicating to me about your poem, except through author's notes and edits to your piece.
2. Additionally on your author's notes, request commenting to be done without author's name, to save me the accidental slip of scrolling & allow full access.
2a. Please reserve replying ON YOUR PAGE to anybody at all until after contest is done. [You can reply on your NOTES from other commenters, directly there when receiving them, if you can't wait.]
My idea for for your poetry :
Make awakening not be a snooze in itself.
Think of the rhyming that can be instilled in an infant's brain to then be able to stimulate skill of raw word recognition at four to six months. Confirm their earlier seeming silence was not wanting only silence!
Therefore, the funNER time is what can be following this.
No askewness for asking!
Don't leave my imagination untattered for finding audience trying along.
Show what can be pointed out in rythm to wow among other things getting to be known, what's right in front of them, so they'll do the pointing or gesturing of speech soon.
If you'll be using an attempt of the youngster in mind, please make it do better, for instance, than ga-ga back and forth: affectionally laugh out loud over avocado/ now nod Oh! Since the slurred speech is from effort wishing to slide it again without a mitten feel of anything being bitten off with a tiny pocket!! Tastefully done until... well.
Do you believe numbers are catchable? There was a studied child who saw four stuffed toy rabbits [don't know if they weren't cotton, ha-ha] and lost interest until one with four ears showed up, for comparison/ not mutation effect, so might we put a bump in the hum of our cadence count?
The emphasis is "Mother's face, baby's face, words in between," because of my wishes to include thoughts at breast-feeding or natural pacifier comfort, time consuming gaze that can watch the mamma's mouth with her/him so much, when she's freed of her own grazes!
Accustomed to more than face?
Frequentations as sessions.
Smiling at the cheek bones throwing a bone so to speak?
not comparable to an incubator with butter?
Smile while you dial though, and think of sounds.
Rules :
1. follow anonymity mentioned above
2. FLORAL background
3. real objects of nature, people for subjects
4. no holiday themes, please.
5. RHYME OR tell me of another cerebral focus at that age in linguistic function, besides flat repitition... ti ti
because BTW, without a beep from a VW, similarities build up matrices for the lips to try by confidence throughout the day yet under alertness for something a little different. {Thus, what I gave had a sample one could slow down for, to develop w, for you, not just feel interruption; brings such up from a noun and another kidding abbreviation sounded as an alternative way of starting letters instead of just alphabet.}
So, choppy disconnected sounds are not from what I've researched * * *
A bop to help remember an earlier hop by.
However they also follow questions as opportunity with what's, where's...! As well as stretched sound.
Poetic with phonetics here?
alliteration, I think of, around 4 o'clock on the computer.
6. grammar, spell check
7. family language, content
8. 30-70 lines, let the love be loved!
9. read it out loud
I wil upadte if I think of anything else.
Please concentrate and then be creative.
I am looking forward to you breaking my talker's block,
Carolyn
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 5, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Hello happily...
Thank you for allowing my read to matter in a wrap around each isthmus of your write for thus and much to be found in it towards accolades even over landscaping of liveliness.
For instance, gold was given to who couldn't fiddle the background past Allpoetry's quiet set up, but did more than make up for that with sitting pretty vibrancy put in the poem. I am grateful for the poignant author notes, such as turning me from what seemed a spacey phrase to pegging adopted cases in the case of breastfeeding as "earth mother" which I have heard can be stimilated, but didn't have my memory moon on in my late night absortions. I apologize but again, thanks for your cooperation... everyone, and to those who who made no response I hope I din't make things too drawn out.
Trophy recognition goes to with a thank you for inches gone for me, wonderful feet, remarkable yards and incredible meter of one's own mirror :
~~ Nurturing & Nourish ~~
gorgeous with hope from all vivid ends, such that if I were running a plaque contest for the gold poetry I wouldn't mind making this such a souvenir. The bondable personality was defended gently but boldly for a little one's interest with unbridled consideration.
Faces
has the cheer for a short attention span to find routine by the rudder of being retold through senses :
"Soft in tone
She speaks ‘I’m here’
Smell me close
You’re not alone"
with innovation for young involvement even including "With finger signs" that is spectacular and not a spectacle but silverly underlined. The adjustments to me made an embellished first stanza upon the site of correction that wasn't just ornament.
Our Stare
is personalizing how we become to feel like the very person for someone's articulation through stark concentration from the eyes, hence the title that does go back and forth between the two subjects then in style. That is verily a building block of the bond, which deepens the baby's trust towards sentence not simply of masterful skill but logic of love -- like an infant's "For I know how much you can read my heart,
Like words blowing in the wind," with many accounts derived for some predictable stability. Bronze is part of the patience that underscored :
"How I cant wait to hear your first few words," not belittling that as the only delight, but oh, a heaped helped one.
From pregnancy to a neonate to a full grown person
deserves to be recognized
yes, this is by myd aughter; I found out entirely at her last lines but was enjoying and guessing it was her developed tip of the pencil. I can't have a neutralized gleam for her effort but neither remove it; because, it shook me to stay steady how she incorporated the importance of foundations for the fun back in gestation where dances and salads etcetera signalize things one's to get used to. There is the birth song that she turned to because of it, there's the breastfeeding tastes that are on the continuum of when more attached to the mother's tummy of times. And the priority what's to take part for future happinesses besides short term joys I saw in the stanzas worked on.
Prize values went up to balance how things had to come into view, and I know that wasn't always easy with the code for me, 'I hope I understand.' So, enjoy your points, recepients, but more importantly enjoy your babies or contemplations of all the play with language there can be for boys and girls.
So, I guess I won't close my feelings just the contest!
I appreciate everybody for participating,
Carolyn
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Names that got prizes from me, two found out from notes, other two documented at earlier awareness through judging's process :
Miss2u got my yay gold for ~~Nourishing & Nourishing ~~
March904 got hey silver for Faces
tender-butterfly got all the may of bronze for Our Stare
SplishSplashPencil got a ray of Hondorable Mention for From pregnancy to a neonate to a full grown person
Contest Winners
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A pre-term mother cares for a newborn-to-become
With singing, exercising, and adding a humby bird at rose 42 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 2 3:31 PM 2007. In Family, Childrens, Rhyme
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This is fabulous
This is a fabulous contest. It is talented. I will try to come up with something and join. Or maybe not. Who knows but God? Well I want to wish you good luck with this contest my friend. God bless you.
Tabitha
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faithful out of the kitty
Tabitha (gazelle for leaping at opportunities),
I was happily believing in the communication I put up, but now it's not just hollow but as though loved! Thank you very much.
I know there are 'unforseen' things in our moments not just predestined times to be on the bigger picture where pieces for protections are to be set, so choices towards destinations can be amazing.
Foresight then a benediction, Isaiah 65:11 forestalls the thought for good luck, as that's waylaying away from blessings that build, I feel.
May we be relative for one another, not forgetting in who's image we were made, indeed. And that's not to be stopped but boosted to see what's best for earth, and how.
5:51 where I am so was your 12 hours ago for me in the a.m. is a thought for signature,
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Wow
You have such a beautiful way with words. thank you, you are a blessing to me.
Tabitha
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Wow back
Tabitha (tabbing me to feel better too),
I liked taking turns to say something for true joy.
12:23 a speck of business,
Carolyn
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great poem
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wrap it up, and it looks like a box?
13013 (I know it can't be coding from phone pad keys for a name, because those ABC's start after 1 -- not with),
Intrigant.. you might've found a favorite of the entrants' pieces, which would probably be commented on personally for one of them, however, so, as legitimately as those are poems, I must speculate your phrasing is hyperbole for my contest's wording. I hope I don't get passionately asking until it seems said or I'm just sporting it.
I have one more idea that should prove firmer for what could my last competition on AP.
By the way, the typo with "really" in front of it takes on a new spelling of enthusiasm devised! Maybe it does all by itself/cute.
That may be it is my signature,
Carolyn
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This is a pretty interesting contest except I had problems with the page.
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not pretty on your computer?
tender-butterfly (stretches not just thrown like the swimming stroke?),
Thank you for the compliment with a heads up though as to why it might've not been working well.
Towards the ending of this run, I deciphered I should shorten the content of my next competition idea which could wrap up challenges for me, but contrast readability is also always important.... if I presume correctly that that would be the side issues or "problems with the page" that prevented you from proceeding through. In the case that it is the situation in not seeing it right, is it too bright a background or too dark a font or not enough in that direction?
I'll edit with your answer -- or guess on my own again after a certain amount of time,
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Oh no it's nothing that you mentioned and my problem is not your fault. I just couldn't get the page to open properly and then I couldn't get to enter properly. It took a few days before.
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Thank you so much for the acknowledgment of my poem. I am so happy you like this. I enjoyed writing this poem! Congrats to all who entered!
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March 904 (didn't wait 9 hours with this),
I had the smile of logging out when judging got such quick joy, that was coruscating the truth of our worth, "I am so happy you like this. I enjoyed writing this poem!" which I don't instigate to change as we dissect a mark.
Thanks for paving your happiness by the group value in the contest.
12:55 how many more days will you hear that from me?
Carolyn
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Thank you so very much for bronze and well done to your contest. Hope to see a new one from you
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May it not be squelched that you are more than liked by me
tender-butterfly (you don't flit too capriciously?),
I whizzed myself coming down to the difficult judging with a gig of goading, but I got tongues more than tugging. So, know your doorstep got the bronze for the visit that did compete with my daughter but you weren't a tiny thinker of hospitality, which neither rose nothing but a compliment for her almost! No rejoinder complete?
Regarding, me having another one respectably looked for... I currently have a closed goodbye to me/options contest, which I'll be checking for revising or rewarding soon. So, it's unlikely I'll have my P.S. inspiration that's big enough to break the embarassment of that ending. One thing that makes it less fun is knowing what I'm not doing.
However, SplishSplashPencil is my girl that's sticking around somewhat and may show some connection to what you look forward to with me... though it's more being a kid than about kids, lol.
2:10 schooled for a list but not insults by the good salt,
Carolyn
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Hi,thankyou so much for gold and for the full critique,congratulations to silver and bronze and well done to the other entrants.Thankyou for the forum for this contest.I am an enthusiastic exponent of breastfeeding and enjoyed immensely the bond it built between myself and my babies.It was nice to find this contest to find the inspiration to write of such a beautiful and natural gift that mother and baby share and are both nourished by as a result.Thankyou again,love and light,Yvette
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find the strongest light to keep shining love
Yvette (Ty is involved!),
Oh, I'm going to miss making comments to you, even when that was unknown! You have creatively written wherever I read thus far, but how you gave the words a different mold this time. The versatility is a little extra I could swot up beside your discovered name for gold!
Oh, I did want to keep this out of doors and not close the discussions. You have brought an entree to "share and are both nourished by as a result" which I'll soulfully remember as my body had an "exponent" of experience touched upon by a proponent of "breastfeeding" to which there isn't nonsense but another Vietnamese even!
I must say I might be extending my stay for more reading anyway because I didn't coincidentally resign as an obsidian idea poet which I was during my savvy choice of leaving AP and I don't want to be an onyx dragon, ha. Though, there's the half discrimination oking it as a lizard but that's a concept in conniption, while yet my SplishSplashPencil says I could delete some to go back to the other status, but that's not the drop for the exit. However, I have more real things to consider after this contest to not seem hysterical, lol.
3:09 bright with thoughts of one of Britain on a cloudy day in Colorado,
Carolyn
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