Okay this is my fourth contest, and I decided it to be on losing a loved one. Now keep in mind it doesn't have to be based on someone you know that has passed away. By the way prewrites are allowed! I have only 3 rules and here they are ...
1. nO sTIcKy CaPS lIKe tHiS pLEaSe
2. I'm allowing two entries per person!
3. No erotica please
UPDATE! --Okay, I'm very sorry, because I haven't been commenting on the poems that have been entered. It's just I'm busy with exams and all, so it'll take a while until I start commenting. But I promise I shall finish commenting every entry by the end of this week. Thank you!
1. nO sTIcKy CaPS lIKe tHiS pLEaSe
2. I'm allowing two entries per person!
3. No erotica please
UPDATE! --Okay, I'm very sorry, because I haven't been commenting on the poems that have been entered. It's just I'm busy with exams and all, so it'll take a while until I start commenting. But I promise I shall finish commenting every entry by the end of this week. Thank you!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 13
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 20 people
- Final notes: Congrats to all!
1st - In the Vacuum of Space
by Gyne and Tonic
2nd - P.S (Post Script)
by Quill
3rd - Bridges I Have Crossed
by trista
Honorable Mentions go to:
A Letter Of Goodbye
by countrybabe
~This Heartbreaking Christmas~
by -Ink Artist-
Empty Chair, Faded Paper
by Poetic Whisperer
Her Loss
by mysticstorm
dark
by morbidhate
Preserved in Memories
by reinhardt-napoleon
The day I lost you
by FaLoN
Dennis I Miss You
by tawk
Black
by Aven Prior
Torment
by Stabbed Rose
who is the face that cries for me?
by Fairy Nutty Buddy
You Could Have Been My Hero
by Whyitt U
In Loving Memory.....
by poetreeluvr
One More Angel
by KarmasBlessing
Postcards from Heaven
by Butterfly Kissed
Shoot Me Not Him
by broken betrayl
Happy Birthday Daddy
by IfHeartsNeverBroke
To Lily
by PoetrysAngel2041
Death of an Angel
by Lillybet
Watercoloured Memories
by Cupcrazy
Contest Winners
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I thought it was the worst of dreams
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by reinhardt-napoleon 35 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 28 12:58 AM 2006. In Dedication, Personal, Sad
Honorable mention
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I panic
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On a cold December day long ago
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"...For those who are in LOVE, and they are leaving you soon..."by Cynner Aven 31 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 8 12:30 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Dark, Love, Black Rose Honorable mention
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The rain starts to fall while I think of you.
Each tiny drop a tear the sky has cried.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2063183, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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You could ave been my hero, but you chose to stay away
Anything instead of me, every single day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I visited you yesterday. Did you know I was there?
Did you see me sitting there with youas the tears• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The Lord needed one more angel,
so he called for me that day.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
It's a thought of afterlife. I think.by Butterfly Kissed 18 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 15 9:30 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Hope Honorable mention
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This poem streams from a nightmare I had about my exboyfriend. The man is actually a boy in school getting bullied• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I'll blow out your candles,
And make a wish for you...by BeAuT1FuLlyXxBrOkEn 27 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 1 1:17 PM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Other Honorable mention
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Bronze trophy winner
Entries [131]
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i guess its time to say good bye
so ive written this letterby teenagefailure 9 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 10 2:00 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A true friend fills a place in your heart that you never knew was empty.
We have been friends in the sunshine, and in the shade.by teenagefailure 18 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 20 6:40 PM 2006. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Not in any technical form. My cousin, Jeremiah, died of an aneurism 2 days before Thanksgiving at the age of 26.by Meet Virginia 31 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 3 4:26 AM 2007. In Death, family, love, memories, rememberance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Memories of a memorial service.by Meet Virginia 21 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 5 2:43 AM 2007. In Death, rememberance, loss, sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was on that day, I remember well;
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This sand castle of friendship that stood against the weather,
has finely succumbed to the wind that has carried you away to heaven.by Forgotten truth 35 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 2 2:41 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sister In Heaven
Thought I would send you a few lines.by blue -eyes 13 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 26 8:08 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i sit at night
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I'll follow you...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In the Noble Kingdom of Heaven above
God's garden is tended with so much love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I still love you
I shouldn't have let you goby Perplexed in Love 37 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 22 12:24 PM 2006. In Sad, Lost love, Longing, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
His hands rough and coarse from hard days work.by Elegant Inspirer 36 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 18 8:17 PM 2006. In Personal, Spiritual, Love, Family, Sad, Death, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If you should somehow die,
In my heart you will stay,by vasi 37 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 23 8:14 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes in life, some people suffer from life taking illness. The agony and suffering that they and their families endure is heart breakiby end2end 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 8 9:38 PM 2007. In losing a loved one• Viewed by judge.
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This is a poem I wrote as memorial for my step-father who died in 2005
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She’s smiling there,
A shadow in a box of wood,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
These scars remind me of the reality of my past
I know that they are gone but i'll never get over the acheby morbidhate 34 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 2 1:23 AM 2005. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lying in bed with thought after thought
My heart consumes me with memories of youth• Viewed by judge. -
let it be ...in turn we are all the same
let me be me , love burns no more painby Poet-of-the-shadows 23 lines, 35 comments, on Nov 6 6:35 AM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Good in school, most considered him a teacher's pet and
Most teachers considered him unreachable, aloof and didn't tryby Amythest Moonjade 36 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 21 4:54 PM 2006. In Contemporary, Sad, Society, Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She was taken before her time,
she wasnt yours,by Falon 20 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 9 8:10 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
For no longer will I be able to see him,
to feel him, for he is gone and he will not return....by Angel Crest 14 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 9 5:54 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Or as some call it,
Sixty-five roses• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Although I`ve gone, I did not go,
You will find me in the afterglow.by williamstown 15 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 22 12:29 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her smile fades as fear clouds her mind.
siting down she can barly meat thier eyes.by Painted Warrior 15 lines, 22 comments, on Apr 7 7:45 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
On Christmas Eve if i could make a wish,
Do you know what it would be?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am still comforted by your scent of lavender silk,
that I carry into the twilight of water river bubblesby Starswhispers 48 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 26 1:21 PM 2006
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I look at this cross.
The same cross that is a symbolby Butterfly Kissed 24 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 7 4:25 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To My Grandmother In Heaven• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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First sadness, then anger
Boils through your very bloodby Corinthians13-4 18 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 19 2:04 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The urge rushes
Like gale winds across my mind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sincere condolences to you, Father, on the loss of your mother! -8/10/05-by walking in the rain 38 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 15 9:01 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I wish that I could have loved you more,
Even though I gave you my heart.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How easy one can trip,
how fast that one can slip.by Sharese 48 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 27 8:04 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
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what if i told you i loved you?
would you say it back?by inlovewithsome1 67 lines, on Jan 27 4:19 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Angry, Goodbyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A woman named "Misty" called me the other night
and said "I have a message for you".by bggbyrd 31 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 12 10:51 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
What can be said about a woman that deserves the world?
Who would feel for you every time you felt down.by Andnothinelse 45 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 20 7:37 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We walked this earth together. / for over thirty years. / We shared some joy and laughter . / and we also shed some tears. / / Now I have• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tribute To Sue
Sue what can I say.She was a warm person 'Whoby blue -eyes 21 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 31 6:51 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This was written because of my father. He went to Iraq and I didn't see him for years. It was really upseting.by Yours-To-Have 27 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 11 4:28 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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for love it hurts
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They told me not to fall for you-
It would only end in my tears.by Twilight Masquerade 74 lines, 19 comments, on Jan 17 5:58 PM 2007. In Not what you will expect, Love, Life, Sad, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Every smile a cruel lie,
Every dream I had died,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She stands there with others, white hair and white coat
Her beauty has gone long ago, it has vacated and eloped• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I remember all the days we spent together
Day in and day out saying we love each otherby Xx-HeartBroken-xX 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 20 6:44 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
That day I tasted my tears
So salty and sweet, they made me sick• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I died for life
I died by knifeby Surrogate Figure 103 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 21 1:07 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I think I see you everywhere just to realise it’s my imagination,
I believe I hear your voice calling me just to figure out it’s all just• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The walls are red with rose prints as borders,
Candy hearts on knotted strings sway from the ceiling,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i want to read some of the poems but i cant get passed the first page of 1-75...
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I wonder if the judge knows the contest is over...
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Lol I know the contest is over, sorry I've been pretty hectic with all the work and assignments I've been give in school. By the way I really liked your poem
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When is this contest going to be done?
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Sorry guys & girls:P
Awe I'm sorry guys I honestly am for the long wait. But I promise this contest will be done and every poem will be commented on and judged by today! I'm so sorry for the long wait. -
thanks alot for the encouraging words!
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Thank you for the contest and HM. Congeatualtions to all the winners and on all the great and beautiful entries.
Love,
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Congratulations to all of the winners.
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Thanks so much for the bronze - it was such a surprise considering how many fantastic entries were in the contest! CONGRATS TO ALL THE WINNERS AND HMs and best wishes to all.
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Thanks for the HM and for hosting the contest
Congrats to all the winners and all who entered. And especially congrats to you for getting through all of these entries...over 200...WOW!!! I think I would have bee overwhelmed. Great Job!!!
Whyitt Uxxx
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Thanks for the HM!
It is very much appreciated! Congrats to the winners and other HM's!
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Wow, that's a lot of entries!
Congrats to the winners and thank you for the HM!
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Thank you
Thank you so very much for the Honourable Mention trophy and points I really appreciate it. Thank you also for hosting such a great contest.
Congrats to the winners and other Honourable Mentions.
Countrybabe
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