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Make us cry

My friend and AP sister, GuardianAngel3, and I are going through some tough times right now. Make us cry.

We want poems about heartbreak, love gone wrong, breakups, fights, anything, just make us cry!

Ok, rules (follow them, please, or you'll be DQ'ed):
1) No StIcKy CaPs
2) Mild swearing
3) No erotica


We prefer free verse (hint hint), though you can put it in a form if you choose. Rhyming's kinda nice, though not required. Make it as long or short as you want, as long as your feelings are clearly expressed.

Since this is our first contest, it's pretty easy, so have fun with it if possible) and make us drown in our tears! Good luck to all!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 29, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75
  • Final notes:
    Thanks for entering! All these poems were great. It was tough choosing, but congrats if you won!

Contest Winners

  1. Goodbye daddy, I'm not afraid to die. Alone
    Comfort from being one of the ones forced to die alone,
    Without being able to say goodbye.
    by lucy sky-diamond 114 lines, 19 comments, on Dec 20 10:27 AM 2006. In Death, Longing, Sadness, Loss, Message, Goodbyes
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. ~Me and My Daddy~
    by -Ink Artist- 63 lines, 100 comments, on Nov 20 8:17 AM 2006. In Childrens, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Permanent Rain
    Bruised and broken,
    the angry sky burst forth its tears
    by Nicole Cudworth 35 lines, 27 comments, on Nov 5 7:06 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2215932, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • Drowning
    by Eternal Rose 61 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 20 8:28 PM 2006. In Love, and life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Deluge
    by dance11 17 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 23 9:32 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Please come back to me
    A poem that can occur to anyone-given meaning and given life it can help someones heart
    by PentiBabe 13 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 28 4:11 AM 2006
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Secret
    Wanna know my most kept secret?
    TOO BAD
    by xXThornless RoseXx 17 lines, on Dec 28 4:49 AM 2006. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I will love
    I will search for you for eternity
    And find your image in everything that I am
    by daydreambeliever 18 lines, 25 comments, on Aug 28 2:02 AM 2006. In Sad, Love, Hope
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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  • -Ink Artist-
    December 30, 2006
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    Thanks for the Silver!

    Thanks so much NewPoet and GuardianAngel for the lovely silver trophy and the points. It is greatly appreciated. Congrats to the other winners and thanks for hosting a powerful contest!

    ~Lori